Right Guy. This is my initiatory taradiddle so give me some genuine feedback please. This story does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a guide. I want to do things differently here. I want to bed what you want me to do to the character reference. Who you want to see ravish, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the succeeding chapter. It 's that simple. Leave some comments on what you would like to happen in part 2 and itll be up this sentence next week.


Cara had had enough

She had had sufficiency of her to a fault protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had sufficiency of her obsessively strong-growing Church Father and his irregular tumultuous disturbance of anger. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little diddlysquat of a chum who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was time to get her fucking revenge

Ever since Cara can call up, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the brain. Having the dirtiest thoughts, the brainsick phantasy about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the sloppy, gaga bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a frontage of being polite little shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the front she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the material her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was rule. She sat at the dinner party table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the God Almighty prayer along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully quieten tonight'her father asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her forefather gave her a flurry smell. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to finish that sentence. That 's when Caras Night of revenge started.

The room access flew open and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding guns. They moved towards the terrorised family.

'What the fuck'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his crime syndicate

'SIT THE FUCK pile'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the Padre head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a heater up her kitty-cat, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the figures

Caras Fatherhood sat down. By this breaker point Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his face buried in his hands and his mother was trying to stick around equanimity for his sake.

'What do you need ? Please. If its money that you want just take it. You can have anything. Please just dont hurt us'Caras mother begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of robbed a cant now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guys was holding and proceeded to overstretch out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of hanker rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras Father-God was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half demanded

His inquiry did n't need a spoken solvent. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a grip of his cervix and wrapped the blindfold round his face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded yobo then proceeded to tie his hands behind his vertebral column with one of the bit of the ropes and did the same with his legs. He then tossed Ted onto the flooring where he could n't impress. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life. As Adam clung on to her, she did n't have a clue what to do. Her hubby was tied up on the floor and there was unknown, dangerous strangers in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the want ? Norah did n't want to know the answer but was sure she was going to encounter out.

The leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in reply. She did n't want to back down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to speak to your node now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to endorse down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her right in the font and she fell to the trading floor. Crying uncontrollably and intrude hemorrhage, Norah was shocked. ecstasy was completely frightened and ran to the corner, crying all the while.

While the butchery escalated, Cara just sat there. calm air and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the whole scene. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her unit sept unit

While all this was going on, the early 6 material body just stood there. Overseeing the brutish treatment of this piteous family. The design was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me bitch. I 'm about to leave this room with your beautiful daughter. If you want her back alive, I suggest you do n't move. My friend will be staying here so unless you want a bullet through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and devil her up and went towards the stairs. He stopped abruptly and turned towards Adam

'Little boy, look at your pathetic cunt of a dad and hussy whore puss of a mother. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. wait forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the stairs


When they got up there, Cara could speak freely.

'This is the fucking most craziest thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your voice down man, do you require them to know your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you trusted about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your buddy terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me contrivance ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you sure you want to go through with this ? It 's your family ...'

'My folk ? You mean the same family that 's treated me like tinker's damn for 17 eld ? No dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

Dodge just looked into her center. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... Evil ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, tell me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about type development ? Want to know how Cara knows scheme ? Who is dodging ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

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