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Intro.
The brute moved closer to the route. He could now smell and hear his prey. Slowly he moved closer making sure to stay low so he wouldn't be seen. As he approached the tree cable he caught a coup d'oeil of her between the trees. Staying low he positioned himself so he could get a goodness look at his prey. As she walked down the road she moved into the puppet communication channel of sight and he got his foremost good facial expression at her. She was 5'6 ”, 130 pounds with melanize hair and tan cutis. She couldn't have been More than a b-cup but her sweet ass made up for it. She was messing with her telephone set and he heard her say"damn it why did I have to part down here. This is the one area my sound doesn't get reception."This was going to be a fun dark.

Becky and her ally were on their way family from cheerleading practice. It was a particularly late exercise it was already 7:00 and the girls were trying to get nursing home before dinner. So Christina took one of the back roads she knew was a brusk cut. Becky looked at her when she turned and said
"Isn't this the road you went missing on last weekend ?"
"Yea"she replied.
Sarah chimed in and said
"After what happened I would never take this road again."
Then Jessica said
"Yea, you went missing for four Clarence Shepard Day Jr. and everyone sentiment you were dead when they found your car abandoned on the side of the road."
C"I just tripped and hit my read/write head after the car broke down then and I was still in a daze when I came to and though I was in my back yard. Then I got lost. No rationality for me to drive an extra 5 minutes."
S"No one takes this road anyway they says it's haunted."
C"O shut up no ghost is going to keep open me from getting home base on time."
B"What's that"
Fifty feet up the road right as the route curved there were a duad of glowing white-livered middle ; all four girls were watching the eyes and not the road so none of them saw the fallen tree in the road until it was too belatedly. Christina slammed the brakes and the rack locked up but the crap route didn't provide any grip and they hit the log going 30 mph. All four girls were dazed and as they were recovering Becky said
"Is everyone ok ?"
"I'm ok"was the reception from the three early girls.
B"ok let's see what the scathe is."
C"Ok"
All four girls got out of the car to see how bad the damage was. The face end was crushed and the front malarkey shield had shattered, but other than that the damage was minimal.
B"Christina see if the car will start."
C"Ok"
J"Good luck you can hardly get it to start when the engine hasn't been crush by a tree."
S"Don't say that what if it really doesn't offset we'll all be lost out here."
J"Oh, don't be dazed were not going for a stroll in the woodwind so we can get lost like someone we know."
C"pungency me"
After trying a few time Christina finally gave up
C"it's not starting ; any of you have service out here."
"No"“ Nope"” null"
C"Becky and I can walk down the route until we get a signal then well come back once my dad is on the way."
B"Ok sound good"
As Becky and Christina walked off Jessica and Sarah sat in the back seat to hold off money box they got back.
S"Jessica what if they don't come back and were stuck out here all night"
J"What are you talking about why wouldn't they come back."
S"I don't know what if the ghost gets them it already getting dark and ghostwriter come out at night."
J"Your unbelievable are you a six year old talking about specter and spirits."
S"But what about those eye we saw and this Tree this can't just be coincidence."
Becky ;
"I can't believe this is happening. This is all your fault, you and your damned unretentive cut. You'd think you would have learned the first time. Now how are we going to get house from cheerleading with your car wrecked ?"
C"O shut up. Like you will ingest any job getting nursing home"
"What do you me ?"
C"Just ask Terry I'm sure he would love to hold you home considering what happened at Jason's party last month."
"How do you get it on about that ?"
C"Please everyone know you fucked him after the political party when he drove you household,"
That little illegitimate is going to get it he promised he wouldn't tell anyone. Hmm more like not get if for a spell yea that will teach him.
C"Nothing to say"
"What it's like I cheated on anyone like with john"
Christina was about to say something when we both hear something in the forest and as we look to see what is was. I said"hullo ”. There was no response and I was starting to get spunk when.
C"WHY ! !"( Making me jump ) don't you answer us miser squirrel.
"Oh go make love yourself"
C"you would be the one to ask about anything related to fucking so how should…I…
We hear a low growl coming from the same guidance as the disturbance earlier, making her trail off mid-sentence."how-do-you-do"I said hardly even flashy enough for Christina to hear let alone anyone else. We hear the growl again only this fourth dimension louder and we both move to the other position of the road. Christina take hold of my arm and voicelessness.
C"What do you retrieve it is"
"I don't know a dog or something"
As we whisper we hear the Dubyuh start to lift again. It's moving closer and we start backing away holding each early. It's just a dog, it's just a dog, it's just a dog I keep repeating in my head not believing it just hoping it's on-key. The low gear thing we see is its head and I would have though it were a dog if it wasn't 6 feet off the ground, and my pedigree ran cold as the though popped in my oral sex. Then as the sleep of it came out it only confirmed my thought it's a lycanthrope. final as it came completely out it stood up sound and roared. Holy crap it was hunching over it must be 8 ft marvelous.
Once it finish roaring I snapped out of my it, and finding my feet I decide it's time to run, but the first step I take I realize Christina is still standing there. I turn around and snap up her hand then take up off. I drag Christina along until she snaps out of it then we both start running at wide f number. I resist the itch to look back that's what makes girls in the horror moving-picture show trip. When I see movement out of the corner of my eye I try to block and put an arm out to stop Christina as well. I start to slue and lose my balance landing on my back just as the werewolf is landing on the ground were we would accept been. As I try to get up my hand slips on some mud so I roll over and start to get up as Christina starts to run the other way. Just as I'm getting up I get knocked back down and when I land the air gets knocked out of my lungs.
I see Christina reach the road and start heading back to the car. At least she got away I think as I start to get my breath back I hear it. It's standing over me, so I slowly axial motion over. As I roll over I see it standing over me. When I start to endorse away it growls again so I lay there as I slowly bulge out to move finisher to me when its mouth gets over my dresser it begins to whiff at me. I resist the urge to just hit it and try to run that would never work. It begins to sniff different region like my breadbasket and my genitalia which makes me shrink. He looks at me then says
"female person"
"Y…you can spill. Please don't killing delight I'll do anything"
"RAWR"
This quiets me down and I notice that oral presentation is a very labor task for it ; probably because its mouth isn't made to utter like the great unwashed do still it manages.
"Cloths off"
"W…what"
"You said anything"
"Yea but why do you need me to make my clothes off"I said knowing wide well why he would need me to get hold of my clothes off and it was between his legs, that's also how I knew it was a he. Seeing his cock made me even less volition to take my wearing apparel off it must have been 9 column inch long.
"Now"
"No I won't until you tell me why"
Getting impatient with me he pounces on me locking his jaws over my throat and applying just enough pressure to keep me from struggling. I lay there as he starts to rip my clothes off and try not to call back about the fact that a werewolf is about to rape me and maybe eat me afterword. Soon I'm down to zilch by my bra and pantie. I guess that that is enough for now because he sniffing me again and he even licks me breasts which cause me to gasp. I'm even starting to get wet with his cold nose occasionally touching me. I try to think of the best way of handling this, but situation is getting to me and I can't think. Soon, I start to panic I want him away from me ! I don't want him anywhere near me and bulge out to scream !
"PLEASE NO, check ! supporter ME ANYONE service PLEASE"
This time it's not his mouth around my throat it's his massive claw tipped hand. I try to draw his hand away from my throat so I can breathe but he is to solid. He looks into my eye and says.
"I was resisting the urge to just shoot you but now it will be difficult and you will not enjoy this"
It's heavy to make out what he is saying because he isn't taking the time to enunciate, and more importantly I can't breathe because he is still choking me. I get the basic estimation when he rips me bra and panties off and spreads my branch. My lungs are burning when I feel his cock spreading my pussy brim. As he rams his cock into my pussy he also lets off the pressure on my pharynx so my first breathing time immediately comes back out as he slams into my cervix with that monster of a cock.
"AHHHH"
As I try to enchant my breath he starts to pull out. I wrap my legs around his waist to keep him from moving but it's like my leg weren't even there. When he slams back into me I scream again"AHHH ”. This one is not a good deal out of agony as the beginning. None of the guys I had been with up till now were anywhere near as big as his stopcock, and not just in duration it looks like my forearm is hanging between his legs. His get out arm starts to gag me again as he thrusts in for the third and my coxa even rise to meet his jab. What is wrong with me I'm being raped I can't enjoy this, I mustn't enjoy this.
"Hmm maybe I was wrong about you not enjoying this perhaps I'm not being rough enough."
I try to beg him not to but all I can get out is"p…p…please"then he starts to pick up the rate and he even taunts me
"Please what, please fuck you harder no problem."
He is true to his parole along with his rate I feel his right paw which had up till now been unused started to compact my left hip and I could feel the claws on the end of his fingers start to dig into my peel. I couldn't tell if they had actually broken the cutis yet but that was the to the lowest degree of my vexation as everything started to go fussy. My lungs were on flack, and my pussy was to. The joy of his constant pounding along with the pain sensation of him slamming into my cervix uteri with every thrust was really starting to turn me on.
In the daze I looked up at him he is totally out of control he is going to choke me to death while fucking me. The lucidity faded quickly as I started to lose it. I could feel it coming and this was no ordinary orgasm this is my bodies final stage moments and it was going to spend then writhing in joy. Then it hit me like a freight rate power train. Every nervus in my consistence screaming in delight and even if I wasn't being choked I don't think I would have made a sound.
My back arched and my eyes rolled back into my nous. Even in the throes of disco biscuit I felt a warm spread through my pussy taking me even higher if that's even possible. He came inside of me not that I knew what was happening. I couldn't tell how long it had been since I had started coming but it was still going and I lost conciseness from the intensity of it all. When I finally came to he was lying on top of me, still buried as far as I could lead him, catching his breathing spell. How could he still be tired ? How long did I pass out for a minute of arc a couple of instant ? It suddenly hit me I'm alive and breathing though it was hard he was laying on top of me thankfully not all of his exercising weight was on me but I kind of liked the look of him on top of me like this. The second I thought I hated myself for thinking it he despoil me and still might kill me, he pated me on the head then and said.
"Don't worry about it little one soon you will know why this happened, but for now sleep I must get your friends."
I was about to ask him what he meant by why this happened but I started to feel woozy and for the bit time but for a much less enjoyable rationality I passed out .