Right guys. This is my first story so give me some genuine feedback please. This narration does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a templet. I want to do affair differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the type. Who you want to see raped, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the future chapter. It 's that simple. Leave some comments on what you would care to happen in part 2 and itll be up this time next week.


Cara had had enough

She had had enough of her too protective female parent always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively aggressive sire and his unpredictable blowup of angriness. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little shit of a brother who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was time to get her fuck revenge

Ever since Cara can remember, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the head. Having the dingy thoughts, the grim phantasy about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the sloppy, craziest bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a facade of being civilised fiddling shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the front she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the real her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was normal. She sat at the dinner party table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the noble prayer along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully smooth tonight'her begetter asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her Father gave her a confused aspect. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to terminate that sentence. That 's when Caras nighttime of revenge started.

The doorway flew undetermined and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding triggerman. They moved towards the terrorise family.

'What the fuck'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his kinsfolk

'SIT THE nooky DOWN'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the founding father head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a hummer up her pussy, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the figures

Caras father sat down. By this compass point Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his aspect buried in his hands and his mother was trying to appease calmness for his sake.

'What do you need ? Please. If its money that you want just look at it. You can let anything. delight just dont hurt us'Caras female parent begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of robbed a bank now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the hombre was holding and proceeded to extract out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of long rope. Everyone by this spot was terrified, even Caras Fatherhood was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half demanded

His motion did n't need a verbalise resolution. Instead, the leader of the chemical group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a grip of his neck and wrapped the blindfold round his human face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded rowdy then proceeded to tie his hands behind his back with one of the pieces of the circle and did the like with his legs. He then tossed Ted onto the floor where he could n't motivate. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life. As Adam clung on to her, she did n't bear a clue what to do. Her husband was tied up on the base and there was alien, grievous strangers in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the deficiency ? Norah did n't need to have it away the answer but was sure she was going to find out.

The leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in reply. She did n't desire to second down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to utter to your guests now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to bet on down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her rightfulness in the face and she fell to the trading floor. Crying uncontrollably and nuzzle bleeding, Norah was shocked. ecstasy was completely panicked and ran to the corner, crying all the spell.

While the carnage escalated, Cara just sat there. calmness and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the whole shot. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her whole syndicate unit

While all this was going on, the other 6 bod just stood there. Overseeing the vicious treatment of this miserable crime syndicate. The plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me cunts. I 'm about to allow for this way with your beautiful daughter. If you want her back live, I suggest you do n't move. My acquaintance will be staying here so unless you want a bullet through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and ragged her up and went towards the stair. He stopped abruptly and turned towards Adam

'Little boy, look at your pathetic cunt of a dad and slut whore twat of a female parent. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. expect forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the stair


When they got up there, Cara could mouth freely.

'This is the fucking nigh softheaded thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your interpreter down man, do you want them to make out your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you sure about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your crony terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me Dodge ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you indisputable you want to go through with this ? It 's your family ...'

'My family ? You mean the Lapp family unit that 's treated me like damn for 17 years ? No Dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

Dodge just looked into her eyes. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... evil ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, tell me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character evolution ? Want to screw how Cara knows Dodge ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

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