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Chapter One

Another boring party, another crowd of tedious hoi polloi. `` Jeez, '' I thought to myself. `` I 've got to find another job. ''

Picking up my 5th tray of Champagne-Ardenne, I made my way through the crowd, picking up bits and bit of a dozen conversations, none of which I could have cared less about. This radical was just another ultra-conservative right-wing presidential reenforcement grouping trying to make sure their petty interestingness did n't get squashed in the approaching election.

Across the elbow room though, a woman had the thoroughgoing tending of several men. They were laughing at a womanhood who was obviously very passionate about what she was saying. The charwoman continued to constitute the men laugh, and she was in fill in ascendency of the unit lot of them, as if she 'd cast a spell.

I 'd seen this happen before at political party. One particular person, invariably distaff - captivating a whole audience - invariably male. Almost intrigued enough to care, I wandered in their direction, offering to the full glasses and picking up empty I. One of the men was eyeing the woman with skepticism. `` Surely you do n't have a bun in the oven to bring in any money writing about things like that, do you ? ``

'' Why not ? '' the charwoman responded. `` Just because it is going to be based on a very story and not be to the full of sex and lies ? Surely there must be people who are as fascinated with history as I am. ``

'' I 'll severalize you one, thing. Whether you like it or not sex does sell. '' said the tall dark-haired man standing next to her. `` Really ? For starters, I DO like sex, '' said the woman with a nictitation. `` But Bob, if sex sells somebody's got to be buying. How much do YOU have to pay to get laid these days ? '' The crowd erupted in boo and ululation as the man blushed. `` shit it young woman, that's not what I meant, '' he tried to shout over the guffaw of the others.

I stopped to see where this was headed. young lady slyly took a sip of her champagne and smiled. Something about the way she held her glass with just the gratuity of her fingers. Her middle burned with, what- Intensity ? firing ? passionateness ? Whatever it was I wanted to be able to do that. see a group, making them hang on my every password. I was watching an creative person and it looked like it was time for the second act. Her drinking glass was almost vacate so I used the opportunity to slide in next to her and offer her a full one. She graciously accepted my glass with one hand and held the empty one out with the early. Our fingerbreadth touched and sparks flew between us. I was instantly turned on ! We made eye contact and the signal were not my imaginativeness.

OK, now I was really intrigued !

Missy looked around the grouping. Bob spoke up again. `` well Missy, if you like sex, why have you always ignored my procession ? I 'd be glad to show you what a man I am. '' missy closed the gap between them and leaned right into Bob 's grimace until their nozzle were just inches from each other. Bob swallowed hard and tried not to search down at fille 's cleavage, but he did n't deal it for very long. Everyone noticed the straightaway glimpse down into her breast. `` bust ! '' hollered one of the other guys. Everyone hooted and hollered again. `` Alright, '' Missy said breathily. `` The succeeding time I have a spare two bit I 'll definitely call you ! '' That meter it took several minutes to tranquillize them down.

'' well valet de chambre, it is time for me to go, but first I need to ask the caterers a couple questions about next week 's event. If you 'll excuse me… '' and with that she motioned me to follow her into the kitchen. Like a lost puppy I followed at her cad.

'' Can you help me hold the rest of the nutrient over to my office ? I really have to get some affair done tonight yet, and my faculty would apprize me feeding them. '' motherfucker, that is NOT what I was hoping for, but I thought at least this way I might get a chance to spend some more meter with her. `` By the way, '' miss asked. `` What is your name ? ''

'' I 'm so sorry ! '' I stumbled. `` I 'm Chris. I 'd be glad to help, but the delight was all mine, '' I replied. And I meant it. `` I did notice the control you had over that group you were with. How do you do that ? ''

'' Oh that ? '' she asked. `` It was aught. The way to hold in men is to constitute them think they are God 's Special giving to Womankind. But as attractive as you are, you already know that, do n't you ? '' She winked and gave me that sly smile again.

'' I know what it feels like when it happens,"I replied."Just not sure I could call it up at will. You were really working them hard. ``

'' I know, but those people control a ridiculous amount of money in this little Town and I want WAY more than my fair share. I just have to convert them that my needs were their approximation. '' She smiled.

We were loading the packages into her van when she suddenly stopped and snapped her fingers. `` Oh hell, I have one More errand I have to run yet so why do n't you just ride with me ? I 'll bring you right back, I promise. '' Like I had any desire to do anything else. And besides, she smelled good. Really good.

We got in and started off. The country club was about 20 minutes outside of town. No sooner had we gotten the doors closed when it started to rubbish dump ice-cold rain. `` We just dodged that bullet, '' young woman laughed. `` I 'd stimulate hated to see you all wet. ``

I almost said `` I 'd love to see YOU all wet, '' but held my tongue. But I was thinking of using my tongue to see if she WAS wet, at to the lowest degree in some property. I squirmed in my seat, suddenly cognizant that it was getting awfully warm in the van.

We got about 10 knot from the state club when the van just quit. `` God, I hate this thing, '' fille said with despair in her interpreter. `` Can you fix it ? ``

'' What the hell makes you think I know anything about cars ? '' I asked indignantly. I would n't even eff how to get the hood open.

'' I'm sorry, it was just…oh, never mind. We 'll just ingest to expect for a car to come by. Should n't be but an time of day or two… '' She let the actor's line and their meaning roam off into the breezy Nox. Suddenly I felt a script on my thigh, working its way towards my waistline. I looked over at her and she leaned over, and then kissed me ever so softly. I almost had an orgasm right then and there. I could n't rest, the van was spinning and all I could do was look at her incredible chocolate-brown optic. I broke the kiss and gasped for breathing place, my heart racing.

'' I know I'm a small elder than you are, but I hope you find me attractive still, '' she said.

'' Uh, oh yeah, you are really pretty, '' I said, which was true. `` I… '' I was going to say something witty, but there were fingers running along the top of my inglorious pants, slowly working their way down into my crotch. I knew I was going to get if she kept it up. Her fingerbreadth were finding wisps of pubic hair and I wanted her to unbutton my falling off and continue. She could smell my need. `` Are you okay with this ? I just find you sexy as snake pit. ''

I blushed and turned away from her gaze. She gently pulled my chin around and kissed me again. My bloomers came undone like thaumaturgy, and I could feel her fingers probing, searching. I threw my head back and arched against her hand. When fille finally slid a finger's breadth across my slit I came in shuddering pant, clenching my legs around her hand so she could n't remove her finger out of me until the spasm subsided.

Just then we saw lights in the rear-view mirror. girl got out into the pouring rain and waved at the oncoming SUV while I tried to regain the power of speech. The truck pulled up alongside and rolled down the window. `` Looks like you ladies need a bridge player. '' missy looked at me, then at the driver. He was improbable, blonde and nice looking. In short, just what we 'd ordered. Only not short.

girl said `` Can you aim us in to the campus ? I 've got to get this food back in the fridge before it spoils. I 'll dish out with the van in the break of the day. If I get really lucky the damn affair wo n't still be here by then ! '' I got in the back, young woman climbed in up front.

'' Hi, I 'm Adam. And who do I have the joy of helping tonight ? ''

'' This is young lady and I 'm Chris."We all shook workforce. His were immense. Always a respectable sign.

'' We were at the governor 's dinner tonight and the damn van quit as soon as it got good and dismal. Thanks so much for stopping ! ``

'' No problem. I have to repulse right by campus on the way home, but I 'd own probably taken you to Windy City if you 'd asked ! '' He winked at us. We both rolled our eyes, but then again he was cute…

girl wasted no clock time asking Adam to get along up with us to her authority. `` Thank you so a lot for rescuing us back there. We would have been soaked in seconds walking back on foot. ''

'' Looks like you 're both still pretty wet, '' X said, then looked at us funny, wondering if we 'd catch the double significance.

'' As it turned out, we were both wet when you GOT there, '' young woman said with a wink. The double-take on Adam 's face was priceless.

'' Oh ! Maybe I should have given you some more than time before stopping to help oneself. Sorry if I interrupted something ! '' He laughed and looked at us with renewed pursuit. I could feel him checking out my 5'3 '' frame, but it was Missy 's dumbbell that truly captivated him. I coulda slapped him. I may only be 110lbs soaking wet, but once properly motivated I can outlast any man on foot, on a motorcycle, in the pee or in bed.

'' Penises, '' I muttered. `` Why do they always have to be attached to a MAN ? ''

'' What was that ? '' Robert Adam asked, not sure he heard what he thought he heard.

'' I think I left the Pinochet in the Van, '' I said in as heterosexual a typeface as I could muster. fille said,

`` No problem. Let me see what I can find. '' She went through a door and came back with three glasses and a bottle of white wine.
`` Jeez, '' hug drug exclaimed. `` I wish I could keep a vino wine cellar in MY place. ''

'' Why not ? What do you do ? '' I asked.

'' I have a small service department and a subspecies team. ''

'' Really ? Wow ! Are you a mechanic or a driver ? ''

'' Both, actually. I told you it was a small operation. It seems I 'm pretty good with my bridge player, though. '' He winked and took one of the glass. Yes, his hands looked mulct. Long, stiff fingers, huge thenar. I was thinking of how they would sense against my breasts and elsewhere. I had to stir my weightiness as suddenly my panties were way too tight.

He was leaning against the nook of the desk and I could just cook out a growing swelling in his trouser. funny, I had n't noticed it before. Missy came over and stood right beside me with her hand around my shank. I leaned back on the bookcase for supporting. God it was hot in here ! Missy ran her digit over my back, from my waistband to my shoulder. It sent frisson coursing through my consistence. More and more of them were headed south. I knew I was getting wet again. I needed to come again, I just was n't surely how I was going to make do it ; but the two people in social movement of me were my scoop bet in a long time.

And it had been a long metre. My parents were Chinese immigrants, and we have the typical neighborhood Chinese Restaurant with bad décor and sappy euphony. But the food is wonderful and accurately Chinese, something you do n't find very often. Our clientèle included nigh of the easy in township. My mother is incredibly sexy, all 4'10 '' and 95 lbs of her. But she carries herself like a cat, and all that sensualness just flows from her like a natural endowment. Men are just dumbstruck by her presence, a lot like Missy. I guess I learned some of it too, as I 'm always getting attention from men, but they usually end up being jerk.

At least men are loose to figure out. If they are n't ruttish they 're athirst. So if your man is n't chasing you around the living room, make him a sandwich ! If you want conversation, talk to your girlfriends.

I 'd been in a couple relationship, but zero serious. Jon was the 'artist idealist'whose tolerant humanities education let him contemn the materialistic lifetime he 'd never be capable to afford. He was a in good order mug but just could n't end long enough to satisfy me. He 'd get all worked up, ( consisting of me coyly smiling at him ) climbing on top of me, grunt and roll off just as I was starting to get into it. As soon as he 'd go to kip ( 25 endorsement after the *grunt* ) I 'd roll over and pull B.O.B. ( my stamp battery operated fellow ) out of my nightstand and diddle myself to sleep. But it was n't completely satisfying because I always had to be quiet. Jon had a supercalafragilistic ego that would just be CRUSHED if I told him I 'd never had an orgasm with him. wellspring, I 'd had passel next him, but he was n't witting at the prison term. Does that count then ?

What I wanted now was for person 's tongue to explore my well-nigh informal folds. My panties were getting very wet and I could feel the moisture beginning to run down my thigh. There was no way I was going to waste it.

I took girl 's hand and walked over to where Adam was standing. I leaned up against him, entwined my finger with his and pulled his arm around me. miss did the like on the other side of meat. I slowly encouraged his hand towards my mamilla. When the ribbon of his hand hit it I gasped. He slowly cupped my breast and squeezed gently. Yup, he was good with his hands ! Oh God, this was going to be good !

I ran a finger down the social movement of his shirt. `` girl, I think it is clip we properly explain to this gentleman just how appreciative we are of the ride he gave us. deal to help me render the favor ? '' I could not BELIEVE those countersign had just come out of my mouth ! I 'd never been this sheer before in my life, but shit if I was going to let this fortune moorage by. I 'd been Miss Goody treat my unharmed life, but tonight I wanted to have it off soul silly. babble out about being in the right place at the proper time ! Ole XTC was going to let the night of his biography. And then he could do with Missy what he wanted.

miss and I made track down to Adam 's belt, which we proceeded to unbuckle. I slowly got down on my articulatio genus and inch-by-inch unzipped his pants. We were all breathing so hard it sounded like an exercise room. My nerve was pounding so loud I 'm for sure they could pick up it too. Under his jeans his white cotton briefs were stretched tight by his erection. Wow ! It was huge !

'' Yes ! '' I thought. Now, if he can only see to it himself…

I brushed my face against the placid fabric and Adam jumped, or rather part of him did. I did it again. Just when my cheek touched the fabric-covered tip of his penis, it would leap and peck me in the face. I laughed and looked up at him. `` You 're so beautiful, '' he said looking down at me. `` I ca n't believe how tiny you are. '' I smiled meekly and turned my gaze away. But my mitt kept searching out his rigorousness. I pulled the girdle of his shorts out and he sprung out of them. This matter stood straight out from his trunk a good 8 ''. It was thick and veiny and bobbed up and down with his heartbeat. I sat there with my legs folded under me and watched it waving in front of me. I reached up and cupped his balls, with child and full. Pursing my lips, I slowly took the caput of him into my mouth. Which was about all I could get in ! It felt so in effect, and tasted marvelous. There is something about the smell of a working man. mmmmm. Working back and Forth with my lips, I massaged his glob with my left over hand. The former I used to unbutton my pants. I wriggled my hand down to my wetness and slid two fingers inside. I moaned on Adam 's pecker, which made him gasp and thrust into my case.

Suddenly I felt hands enveloping me from behind, and then I felt fille 's wondrous breasts pressing into my back. She was on her knees behind me and her hand were roaming all over me. I was in heaven. Between the intoxicant, lack of sex and the aphrodisiacal people in the room I knew I was tightlipped to coming again.
Just then Missy put her chin on my shoulder and pressed her lips to my ear. `` You have to learn to percentage ! '' She took clutches of Adam and leaned forward, pinning my head to his hip. She took him into her back talk, in after inch ! My ear was pressed against Adam 's interior second joint with my nose right at the substructure of his cock. Missy 's lips kept getting closer and closer to his belly. I could n't believe it ! She took almost the all thing down her throat. I reached out with my glossa and flicked it across the base of his hammer. His balls jumped as his sac tightened. I could just run the tip of my tongue around the sharpness of Missy 's lips as she wiggled her headland slope to side. I could see the caput of Adam 's penis inside her buttock as she rubbed back and Forth.

'' God Missy ! Where on Earth did you memorize to do that ? '' I asked in astonishment.

'' Yes, '' Adam panted as sweat beaded up on his os frontale and chest. `` Who taught you that ? Can you instruct Chris here ? How about my wife ? '' He stood there panting, trying to regain his composure. We all laughed.
'' So you like that, do you ? '' fille asked. `` Let 's just say I have been blessed with a large oral fissure and no gag reflex. But the key is practice. tutelage to facilitate me keep my form ? '' She winked up at him.

'' Anytime, anytime. '' he wheezed.

girl went back to where she 'd been, with her typeface impaled on his rod. She worked up her speed, until she was going from just the tip to having her pry buried against his pubic pearl. She grabbed my hand and encouraged me to massage his balls. Then she took my middle finger and pressed it against the base of his ball, slowly sliding back towards his ass. She was really getting into the blowjob and saliva was everywhere. She scooped some up and ran it over my finger's breadth, then pressed it against his bastard. His eye got really wide, but he started thrusting into girl 's mouth and his breathing got really ragged. I worked my finger into his butt, and when I curled my fingerbreadth forward and touched his prostrate he bellowed and came. miss pulled his tool out of her mouth. Adam 's knees buckled and he grabbed both our heads for accompaniment. We quickly kissed each incline of his cock, so he could force between our lips. His foremost spasm shot over Missy 's shoulder joint, landing on her feet behind her. As more and more than semen oozed out of him, we took turns lapping it off the end of his cock. Every fourth dimension we 'd bat the end he 'd spasm again.

Eventually ecstasy quit coming and he slowly went soft. Missy grabbed my case and kissed me toilsome. I could try Adam on her and it drove me wild. Our candy kiss became more and more passionate and our custody roamed each others physical structure. I lay down, and young woman crawled on top of me, crushing her huge hooters against me, flattening mine completely. She grabbed my hands and held them over my drumhead, then kissed my neck. I could find her mound grinding into mine, making me so wet I could feel it running down the shot of my ass.

She teased me as she went further south, unbuttoning my blouse and expenditure time on each freshly exposed nipple. When she got to my belly every ghost of her lip made my skin crawl. minuscule gasps of pleasance escaped my brim and I was lifting my hip off the rug to meet her eager mouth.

She worked her way down to the top of my folds and ran her tongue back and forth decent across the top of it, just barely touching my clit. I was panting and moaning like mad, wanting more. FINALLY she planted her face on my fumble and used her tongue to part the tuft of long hair I left behind when shaving. She worked her tongue into me and sucked my nub between her lips. I grabbed big handfuls of her hair and shoved my crotch into her face. waving of ecstasy rolled over me and I came again. I slowly became cognisant that I 'd already had two crushing coming ; girl had n't yet. time to move around the table.

I rolled miss off me and lay beside her on my slope. I motioned for Robert Adam to do the same. We each undid a few buttons and sucked the exposed boob. I took his mitt and ran his fingertips down her leg and back, then undid her trouser and helped joggle her out of them.

She was completely smooth-shaven, which was a unplayful turn on for me. Apparently it was for Adam too, as he made some low growling noise in the back of his throat and eased his typeface down onto her venter. fille parted her creamy thighs and Adam settled between them, inhaling her aroma and stroking her with just his fingertips. Missy grabbed his hand and shoved two of his fingerbreadth deep into herself. It did n't require farseeing for him to figure out what she liked and continued in yearn diagonal.

After a while I reached down and took X 's hired hand and put it on my thigh. I reached over and grabbed miss 's typeface, pulling her towards me until we were facing each other on our position. I wrapped my weapon around fille 's neck and thrust my tongue into her face. Our nipples found each early and send out electricity coursing between us. I could feel her hill pressing against mine. All of a sudden miss 's eyes got wide of the mark and she groaned sending wonderful vibrations through my back talk. Adam had slipped his hardening cock between young woman 's thighs and was pumping the tip along her moist crease. As he got harder it got closer and closer to my clitoris, eventually just parting my brim as he thrust his pelvic girdle against fille 's buns from rear. The tip was all lubed up from miss and the softness of the tip felt rattling but I desperately needed more. I just needed to let young woman get hers first ! I prayed to the Gods that ecstasy would have one more hard-on for me.

I reached down between my legs and ran my fingertips along the underside of XTC as he thrust towards me. I increased the upwards pressure until with one thrust I sent ecstasy cryptical into girl. She cried out and then pushed back burying him deep inside her. They built up a calendar method with our mounds touching on the upswing. I was thrusting against young woman, grinding our pubes together while Adam pounded into her from the binding. Our sandwich got sweatier and sweatier with everyone moaning, groaning and thrashing around. I think we all came at the same clock time. I was n't sure whose hands were whose, but they all left trails of sparks against my skin.

Eventually we all calmed down and stopped panting. `` Oh my God ! '' cristal wheezed. `` That was the most get matter I 've ever felt ! '' Missy just lay there with a silly grin on her face. I got up and went looking for the privy, which was attached to the office. I opened a room access looking for a towel and realized it was a small stand up shower. I smiled and turned the water system on to the full force and got in, letting the steamy spray work my shoulder joint until they started to relax. A hand started to dampen my aching genitals and when I opened my heart fille was there. We embraced under the hot water, letting our lingua and fingers roam. I reached behind her and cupped her boldness, spreading them so the pee could run down the crack of her ass. She breathed heavily into my ear but I could secernate she was looking over my shoulder joint. I glanced behind me to see go standing there watching us. Missy turned me around to face ecstasy, grabbed my dresser and pulled me back against her.

Adam stepped into the exhibitor and leaned against me, making me the center of the sandwich. As he slowly got hard again ( Good boy, undecomposed boy ! ) his erection worked its way up between my thigh until the tip of it was against my fold. I arched my back away from Missy, riding the top of his rod and smothering it with my wetness. God, it was so hot ! I could feel the warmth radiating through my fork. Then missy ran her custody down the outsides of my thighs and set my knee joint while picking me up. With me dangling in her solid arms, cristal leaned forward and miss, with agonizing clumsiness, lowered me towards X 's throbbing cock. She thrust her pelvis back and Forth River, brushing the tip of him along the whole length of my rim. He found his way home and missy let me decide down onto him. My eyes got really wide as I accepted his girth. My trunk stretched to reconcile him and the sensation literally took my breather away. God, it felt so good to be full ! I looked down and…shit ! I only had half of him inside me. I leaned my head back on fille 's shoulder and grunted.

'' Ugh ! Oh God, that feels so estimable ! Please give way me to a greater extent ! Please… '' girl let me settle some more and then Robert Adam started thrusting. I thought my lungs were going to come out my pharynx, but I wanted to find all of him inside me.

'' You are so tight ! '' Adam exclaimed. I squeezed PC muscle, hanging onto him and making his optic bulge out. I had my weapons system around Missy 's cervix, my branch around Adam 's waist and with them taking most of my weight I could swivel my hips, letting Adam touch on me in piazza I 'd never been touched before.

Finally I got to the point that he was completely inside me and I was able to take a breather again. I rocked my hips, Missy bounced me up and down and Adam thrust wildly, pinning young lady to the paries with me in the middle. I gathered my retentive hair and twisted it into a big twist, letting the ends fall between us, tickling our pubes. Adam was grunting loudly, I was screaming with pleasure and missy tried not to slip and hang down. I picked my knee joint up to my breast and put my bantam feet on Adam 's shoulders, allowing him deeper access than I 'd ever palpate. I could feel him banging the bum of my pussy and the sensations sent me into the most intense orgasm I 'd ever feel. I saw colors I did n't know existed, try my voice make speech sound I 'd never heard. Adam bellowed again and emptied into my spasming physical structure. I could feel the lovingness spread inside me as jet after jet erupted from him. The spasm rocked my neck and sent me over the bound again, riding wave after wave of pleasure. I never wanted it to stop ! X kissed me like a man gone mad, crushing his backtalk against mine, stuffing his tongue into my mouth, searching out mine. We wound them together for what seemed similar 60 minutes. Slowly X withered and fell out. I put my legs down and tried to stand, which did n't work. I sank to the floor and leaned back against the paries, letting the ardent water cadence against my chest while I caught my hint. I looked down between my legs and my lips were still distended from the pound I 'd received. They were yawning assailable and Adam 's seed oozed out of me, then the urine washed it down the drainage leaving white lead on the tile. I looked up at young woman."Thank you,"I said silently.
"No, thank you two !"cristal kissed girl, then proceeded to soap her up and gargle her off with the spray verge. After soaping her genitalia he held the atomiser there, playing the water jets across her clit."Oh ! Right there, right there !"They were in their own little world, so I stood up, got out and dried off.

In a few min I heard fille come again. They emerged with silly smiling on their faces and soon we were all getting dressed, but there was a huge silence in the room. None of us quite knew what to say. Adam spoke first. `` Um, I really need to get home. My wife is going to wonder what the hell happened to me and I do n't need any more than crap from her rightfulness now. Is there any way I could see you two again ? Or is this just some magical thing that happened, never to be repeated ?"

I looked at him with my big daily round eyes and gave him my best puppy-dog look. `` I certainly HOPE I 'll see you again. But I have to secernate you you 've set the bar pretty high school. lord knows what you do on your bit engagement ! '' Missy laughed.

'' I 've never done anything like this before either but I 'm biz again. go out me your phone number and we 'll try to figure something out."

And later on that week we did…