Right guys. This is my first story so return me some echt feedback please. This story does n't specifically demand any sex. It 's just a template. I want to do things differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the characters. Who you want to see knap, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the following chapter. It 's that simple. give some input on what you would like to happen in part 2 and itll be up this time next week.


Cara had had sufficiency

She had had sufficiency of her to a fault protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively aggressive founder and his unpredictable burst of choler. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little shit of a sidekick who never knew when sufficiency was enough. Cara had had enough. It was clip to get her fucking revenge

Ever since Cara can remember, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the head. Having the dirtiest opinion, the sickest phantasy about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the sloughy, craziest bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a facade of being polite picayune shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the movement she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the real her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was convention. She sat at the dinner party table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the lords appeal along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully tranquil tonight'her father asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her Father gave her a fox look. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to finish that sentence. That 's when Caras Night of revenge started.

The threshold flew open and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding guns. They moved towards the terrorised family.

'What the nooky'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his family

'SIT THE nooky DOWN'menaced one of the hooded shape, pointing his gun directly at the male parent head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a fastball up her cunt, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the public figure

Caras father sat down. By this head Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his grimace buried in his hands and his female parent was trying to stay calm air for his sake.

'What do you want ? Please. If its money that you want just take it. You can receive anything. please just dont hurt us'Caras female parent begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of robbed a bank now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guy wire was holding and proceeded to pull out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of long rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras father was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half take

His inquiry did n't want a utter result. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a clasp of his neck and wrapped the blindfold round his face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded tough then proceeded to tie his hands behind his back with one of the pieces of the ropes and did the same with his pegleg. He then tossed Ted onto the level where he could n't move. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life. As Adam clung on to her, she did n't own a clue what to do. Her husband was tied up on the floor and there was strangers, life-threatening strangers in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't require money what did the want ? Norah did n't need to lie with the answer but was sure she was going to find out.

The drawing card walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in response. She did n't want to back down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to verbalise to your guests now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to back down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her right in the expression and she fell to the floor. Crying uncontrollably and nozzle haemorrhage, Norah was shocked. go was completely terrified and ran to the recession, crying all the while.

While the carnage escalated, Cara just sat there. equanimity and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the totally shot. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her whole category building block

While all this was going on, the other 6 bod just stood there. Overseeing the vicious treatment of this pathetic family. The plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me cunts. I 'm about to go away this room with your beautiful daughter. If you want her back active, I suggest you do n't make a motion. My friends will be staying here so unless you want a bullet through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and ragged her up and went towards the step. He stopped abruptly and turned towards Adam

'Little boy, look at your pathetic cunt of a dad and slut whore goose of a mother. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. Look forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the stairs


When they got up there, Cara could speak freely.

'This is the fucking most craziest thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your voice down man, do you want them to know your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you sure about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your buddy terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me Dodge ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you surely you want to go through with this ? It 's your crime syndicate ...'

'My family ? You mean the same family that 's treated me like shit for 17 years ? No dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

contrivance just looked into her optic. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... Evil ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, order me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character development ? Want to roll in the hay how Cara knows dodging ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

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