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Chapter One

Another boring party, another bunch of boring people. `` Jeez, '' I thought to myself. `` I 've got to get another job. ''

Picking up my 5th tray of Champagne-Ardenne, I made my way through the gang, picking up piece and pieces of a dozen conversations, none of which I could have cared less about. This group was just another ultra-conservative right-wing presidential support group trying to make sure their little interests did n't get squashed in the coming election.

Across the room though, a woman had the complete attention of various men. They were laughing at a womanhood who was obviously very passionate about what she was saying. The charwoman continued to make the men laugh, and she was in complete control of the unhurt lot of them, as if she 'd spue a spell.

I 'd seen this pass off before at parties. One special somebody, invariably female - captivating a whole audience - invariably male. Almost intrigued enough to care, I wandered in their focussing, offering full chalk and picking up empty single. One of the men was eyeing the fair sex with disbelief. `` Surely you do n't expect to prepare any money writing about things like that, do you ? ``

'' Why not ? '' the woman responded. `` Just because it is going to be based on a real news report and not be fully of sex and lies ? Surely there must be people who are as fascinated with history as I am. ``

'' I 'll order you one, thing. Whether you like it or not sex does sell. '' said the improbable dark-haired man standing next to her. `` Really ? For starters, I DO like sex, '' said the woman with a instant. `` But Bob, if sex sells individual's got to be buying. How a lot do YOU have to pay to get laid these days ? '' The crowd erupted in hoots and howls as the man blushed. `` shit it young lady, that's not what I meant, '' he tried to shout over the belly laugh of the others.

I stopped to see where this was headed. Missy slyly took a sip of her champagne and smiled. Something about the way she held her chicken feed with just the lead of her fingerbreadth. Her eyes burned with, what- vividness ? flack ? rage ? Whatever it was I wanted to be able to do that. contain a chemical group, making them hang on my every Scripture. I was watching an creative person and it looked like it was clock time for the second act. Her glass was almost empty so I used the opportunity to slither in next to her and tender her a good one. She graciously accepted my shabu with one hand and held the abandon one out with the other. Our finger touched and sparks flew between us. I was instantly turned on ! We made eye contact and the signals were not my imagination.

OK, now I was really intrigued !

miss looked around the group. Bob spoke up again. `` Well miss, if you like sex, why have you always ignored my improvement ? I 'd be glad to show you what a man I am. '' miss closed the gap between them and leaned right into Bob 's face until their nozzle were just inches from each other. Bob swallowed hard and tried not to reckon down at Missy 's segmentation, but he did n't supervise it for very long. Everyone noticed the immediate glimpse down into her boob. `` BUSTED ! '' hollered one of the other guys. Everyone hooted and hollered again. `` Alright, '' Missy said breathily. `` The succeeding clock time I have a trim two minutes I 'll definitely call you ! '' That time it took several moment to tranquilize them down.

'' fountainhead valet de chambre, it is time for me to go, but first I need to ask the caterers a span interrogative sentence about next week 's issue. If you 'll exempt me… '' and with that she motioned me to follow her into the kitchen. Like a lost puppy I followed at her heels.

'' Can you help me guide the relaxation of the food over to my office ? I really have to get some thing done tonight yet, and my staff would appreciate me feeding them. '' tinker's dam, that is NOT what I was hoping for, but I thought at least this way I might get a fortune to spend some Thomas More time with her. `` By the way, '' girl asked. `` What is your figure ? ''

'' I 'm so no-count ! '' I stumbled. `` I 'm Chris. I 'd be glad to facilitate, but the pleasure was all mine, '' I replied. And I meant it. `` I did notice the control you had over that group you were with. How do you do that ? ''

'' Oh that ? '' she asked. `` It was nothing. The way to control men is to build them think they are God 's Special Gift to Womankind. But as attractive as you are, you already know that, do n't you ? '' She winked and gave me that sly smile again.

'' I know what it feels like when it happens,"I replied."Just not sure I could forebode it up at will. You were really working them hard. ``

'' I know, but those multitude control a ridiculous amount of money in this petty townsfolk and I want WAY more than my fair part. I just have to convince them that my needs were their idea. '' She smiled.

We were loading the software system into her van when she suddenly stopped and snapped her fingers. `` Oh hell, I have one more than errand I have to run yet so why do n't you just ride with me ? I 'll bring you right back, I promise. '' Like I had any desire to do anything else. And besides, she smelled ripe. Really good.

We got in and started off. The rural area ball club was about 20 minutes outside of town. No Sooner had we gotten the doors closed when it started to DUMP ice-cold pelting. `` We just dodged that smoke, '' fille laughed. `` I 'd have hated to see you all wet. ``

I almost said `` I 'd love to see YOU all wet, '' but held my glossa. But I was thinking of using my tongue to see if she WAS wet, at least in some stead. I squirmed in my place, suddenly aware that it was getting awfully warm in the van.

We got about 10 miles from the country club when the van just quit. `` God, I hate this thing, '' Missy said with despair in her articulation. `` Can you fix it ? ``

'' What the hell makes you think I know anything about railroad car ? '' I asked indignantly. I would n't even know how to get the hood open.

'' I'm sorry, it was just…oh, never mind. We 'll just consume to expect for a car to come up by. Should n't be but an hr or two… '' She let the give-and-take and their meaning drift off into the windy Night. Suddenly I felt a handwriting on my thigh, working its way towards my shank. I looked over at her and she leaned over, and then kissed me ever so softly. I almost had an coming right then and there. I could n't take a breath, the van was spinning and all I could do was calculate at her incredible embrown optic. I broke the kiss and gasped for breather, my heart racing.

'' I know I'm a little honest-to-goodness than you are, but I hope you find me attractive still, '' she said.

'' Uh, oh yeah, you are really pretty, '' I said, which was true. `` I… '' I was going to say something witty, but there were digit running along the top of my black pants, slowly working their way down into my privates. I knew I was going to get if she kept it up. Her digit were finding wisps of pubic hair and I wanted her to unbutton my slack water and continue. She could sense my pauperization. `` Are you okay with this ? I just find you sexy as hell. ''

I blushed and turned away from her gaze. She gently pulled my chin around and kissed me again. My pants came unmake like deception, and I could experience her finger's breadth probing, searching. I threw my straits back and arched against her hand. When young woman finally slid a finger across my slit I came in shuddering gasps, clenching my wooden leg around her hand so she could n't select her finger out of me until the cramp subsided.

Just then we saw Light in the rear-view mirror. Missy got out into the pouring rain and waved at the oncoming SUV while I tried to regain the great power of language. The truck pulled up alongside and rolled down the window. `` Looks like you ladies need a mitt. '' Missy looked at me, then at the number one wood. He was grandiloquent, light-haired and squeamish looking. In curt, just what we 'd ordered. Only not short.

Missy said `` Can you take us in to the campus ? I 've got to get this food back in the fridge before it spoils. I 'll look at with the van in the aurora. If I get really lucky the damn thing wo n't still be here by then ! '' I got in the back, Missy climbed in up front.

'' Hi, I 'm go. And who do I have the pleasure of helping tonight ? ''

'' This is young lady and I 'm Chris."We all shook hands. His were immense. Always a dear augury.

'' We were at the governor 's dinner party tonight and the hoot van quit as soon as it got adept and dark. Thanks so much for stopping ! ``

'' No problem. I have to repulse right by campus on the way home plate, but I 'd have probably taken you to stops if you 'd asked ! '' He winked at us. We both rolled our eyes, but then again he was cute…

Missy wasted no time asking Adam to come up with us to her berth. `` Thank you so much for rescuing us back there. We would sustain been soaked in seconds walking back on foot. ''

'' Looks like you 're both still pretty wet, '' Adam said, then looked at us funny, wondering if we 'd catch the two-bagger meaning.

'' As it turned out, we were both wet when you GOT there, '' missy said with a wink. The double-take on Adam 's brass was priceless.

'' Oh ! Maybe I should have given you some more time before stopping to help. Sorry if I interrupted something ! '' He laughed and looked at us with renewed interestingness. I could experience him checking out my 5'3 '' frame, but it was Missy 's dumbbell that truly captivated him. I coulda slapped him. I may only be 110lbs soaking wet, but once properly motivated I can outlast any man on invertebrate foot, on a bike, in the water or in bed.

'' Penises, '' I muttered. `` Why do they always have to be attached to a MAN ? ''

'' What was that ? '' Adam asked, not certain he heard what he thought he heard.

'' I think I left the Pinochet in the Van, '' I said in as straight a face as I could come up. Missy said,

`` No job. Let me see what I can incur. '' She went through a door and came back with three methamphetamine hydrochloride and a feeding bottle of E. B. White wine.
`` Jeez, '' Robert Adam exclaimed. `` I wish I could keep on a wine wine cellar in MY office. ''

'' Why not ? What do you do ? '' I asked.

'' I have a low garage and a raceway team. ''

'' Really ? Wow ! Are you a grease monkey or a number one wood ? ''

'' Both, actually. I told you it was a small operation. It seems I 'm pretty good with my hands, though. '' He winked and took one of the glasses. Yes, his hands looked alright. Long, secure finger, huge palm tree. I was thinking of how they would feel against my boob and elsewhere. I had to shift my system of weights as suddenly my step-in were way too tight.

He was leaning against the recess of the desk and I could just take out a growing protrusion in his knickers. funny remark, I had n't noticed it before. Missy came over and stood right beside me with her script around my waist. I leaned back on the bookcase for backup. God it was hot in here ! missy ran her digit over my back, from my waistband to my shoulders. It sent quiver coursing through my body. More and more of them were headed south. I knew I was getting wet again. I needed to hail again, I just was n't sure how I was going to manage it ; but the two mass in social movement of me were my best bet in a long time.

And it had been a long time. My parents were Formosan immigrants, and we have the typical region Chinese restaurant with bad décor and silly music. But the food for thought is wondrous and accurately Chinese, something you do n't retrieve very often. Our clientèle included about of the well-off in township. My mother is incredibly sexy, all 4'10 '' and 95 lbs of her. But she carries herself like a cat, and all that sensualism just flows from her like a gift. Men are just dumbstruck by her presence, a lot like Missy. I guess I learned some of it too, as I 'm always getting attention from men, but they usually end up being jerk.

At least men are slowly to envision out. If they are n't corneous they 're hungry. So if your man is n't chasing you around the livelihood way, make him a sandwich ! If you want conversation, talk to your girlfriends.

I 'd been in a copulate relationships, but nothing sober. Jon was the 'artist escapist'whose broad arts instruction let him despise the materialistic life he 'd never be able-bodied to give. He was a the right way kisser but just could n't terminal long enough to fulfill me. He 'd get all worked up, ( consisting of me coyly smiling at him ) climb on top of me, grunt and wind off just as I was starting to get into it. As soon as he 'd go to log Z's ( 25 irregular after the *grunt* ) I 'd roll over and rip B.O.B. ( my assault and battery operated boyfriend ) out of my nightstand and swindle myself to sleep. But it was n't completely satisfying because I always had to be still. Jon had a supercalafragilistic ego that would just be CRUSHED if I told him I 'd never had an orgasm with him. Well, I 'd had plenty succeeding him, but he was n't conscious at the time. Does that enumeration then ?

What I wanted now was for somebody 's lingua to explore my nearly familiar plica. My panties were getting very wet and I could feel the moisture beginning to run down my second joint. There was no way I was going to neutralise it.

I took Missy 's hand and walked over to where Adam was standing. I leaned up against him, entwined my digit with his and pulled his arm around me. Missy did the same on the other incline. I slowly encouraged his bridge player towards my mammilla. When the palm of his script hit it I gasped. He slowly cupped my boob and squeezed gently. Yup, he was good with his hands ! Oh God, this was going to be honorable !

I ran a fingerbreadth down the front man of his shirt. `` Missy, I think it is clock time we properly explain to this gentleman's gentleman just how appreciative we are of the ride he gave us. Care to help me revert the favor ? '' I could not believe those run-in had just come out of my mouth ! I 'd never been this bold before in my liveliness, but darn if I was going to let this probability slip by. I 'd been Miss dainty Goody my whole life, but tonight I wanted to fuck somebody silly. Talk about being in the right place at the right field time ! Ole cristal was going to possess the night of his life sentence. And then he could do with young woman what he wanted.

Missy and I made tracks down to Adam 's belt, which we proceeded to unbuckle. I slowly got down on my knees and inch-by-inch unzipped his pants. We were all breathing so hard it sounded like an utilisation room. My heart was pounding so loud I 'm sure enough they could hear it too. Under his jean his white cotton briefs were stretched tight by his erection. Wow ! It was huge !

'' Yes ! '' I thought. Now, if he can only control himself…

I brushed my brass against the smooth fabric and Adam jumped, or rather voice of him did. I did it again. Just when my cheek touched the fabric-covered tip of his penis, it would jump and thwack me in the aspect. I laughed and looked up at him. `` You 're so beautiful, '' he said looking down at me. `` I ca n't believe how tiny you are. '' I smiled meekly and turned my gaze away. But my hands kept searching out his hardness. I pulled the waistband of his underdrawers out and he sprung out of them. This thing stood straight out from his body a serious 8 ''. It was heavyset and veiny and bobbed up and down with his heartbeat. I sat there with my legs folded under me and watched it waving in front of me. I reached up and cupped his balls, heavy and wide-cut. Pursing my lips, I slowly took the question of him into my lip. Which was about all I could get in ! It felt so near, and tasted grand. There is something about the smell of a working man. mmmmm. Working back and Forth River with my lips, I massaged his testicle with my impart hand. The other I used to unbutton my pant. I wriggled my bridge player down to my wetness and slid two fingers inside. I moaned on go 's dick, which made him gasp and thrust into my brass.

Suddenly I felt hands enveloping me from behind, and then I felt Missy 's grand knocker pressing into my back. She was on her human knee behind me and her mitt were roaming all over me. I was in heaven. Between the alcohol, lack of sex and the sexy people in the elbow room I knew I was skinny to coming again.
Just then Missy put her mentum on my shoulder joint and pressed her lips to my ear. `` You have to pick up to share ! '' She took hold of ecstasy and leaned forward, pinning my head to his hip. She took him into her rima oris, inch after inch ! My ear was pressed against disco biscuit 's interior second joint with my intrude right at the base of his cock. Missy 's mouth kept getting closer and closer to his abdomen. I could n't consider it ! She took almost the whole thing down her throat. I reached out with my spit and flicked it across the bag of his peter. His orb jumped as his sac tightened. I could just run the tip of my tongue around the border of Missy 's lips as she wiggled her point side to side. I could see the head of Adam 's penis inside her boldness as she rubbed back and forth.

'' God Missy ! Where on Earth did you learn to do that ? '' I asked in amazement.

'' Yes, '' Adam panted as lather beaded up on his os frontale and dresser. `` Who taught you that ? Can you teach Chris here ? How about my wife ? '' He stood there panting, trying to regain his calmness. We all laughed.
'' So you like that, do you ? '' young woman asked. `` Let 's just say I have been blessed with a tumid lip and no gag unconditioned reflex. But the key is practice. Care to help me maintain my physical body ? '' She winked up at him.

'' Anytime, anytime. '' he wheezed.

young lady went back to where she 'd been, with her face impaled on his rod. She worked up her velocity, until she was going from just the tip to having her scent buried against his pubic bone. She grabbed my bridge player and encouraged me to massage his glob. Then she took my middle fingerbreadth and pressed it against the base of operations of his formal, slowly sliding back towards his ass. She was really getting into the cock sucking and saliva was everywhere. She scooped some up and ran it over my finger, then pressed it against his asshole. His eyes got really full, but he started thrusting into young woman 's mouth and his external respiration got really ragged. I worked my digit into his fanny, and when I curled my finger's breadth forward and touched his prostrate he bellowed and came. girl pulled his pecker out of her rima oris. Adam 's knees buckled and he grabbed both our heads for support. We quickly kissed each incline of his prick, so he could hurl between our brim. His firstly spasm stab over girl 's berm, landing on her feet behind her. As more and to a greater extent come oozed out of him, we took turns lapping it off the end of his cock. Every time we 'd solve the end he 'd spasm again.

Eventually Adam quit coming and he slowly went soft. Missy grabbed my face and kissed me laborious. I could taste Adam on her and it drove me wild. Our kisses became more and more than passionate and our hands roamed each others torso. I lay down, and Missy crawled on top of me, crushing her huge bird of Minerva against me, flattening mine completely. She grabbed my work force and held them over my head, then kissed my neck. I could finger her mound grinding into mine, making me so wet I could find it running down the crack of my ass.

She teased me as she went further south, unbuttoning my blouse and spending time on each freshly exposed nipple. When she got to my abdomen every soupcon of her lips made my skin crawl. minuscule gasps of pleasure escaped my lips and I was lifting my hips off the carpet to cope with her eager mouth.

She worked her way down to the top of my folds and ran her knife back and forth powerful across the top of it, just barely touching my clit. I was panting and moaning like mad, wanting more. FINALLY she planted her boldness on my muff and used her tongue to part the tuft of foresighted hair I left behind when shaving. She worked her tongue into me and sucked my nub between her lip. I grabbed big handfuls of her tomentum and shoved my crotch into her typeface. Waves of ecstasy rolled over me and I came again. I slowly became aware that I 'd already had two crushing sexual climax ; Missy had n't yet. meter to turn the tables.

I rolled Missy off me and lay beside her on my English. I motioned for Adam to do the same. We each undid a few clit and sucked the exposed knocker. I took his handwriting and ran his fingertips down her leg and back, then undid her pants and helped wiggle her out of them.

She was completely clean-shaven, which was a serious turn on for me. Apparently it was for go too, as he made some low growl noise in the book binding of his pharynx and eased his grimace down onto her stomach. missy parted her creamy second joint and hug drug settled between them, inhaling her fragrance and stroking her with just his fingertips. Missy grabbed his hand and shoved two of his fingers deep into herself. It did n't carry long for him to cipher out what she liked and continued in tenacious strokes.

After a patch I reached down and took disco biscuit 's hand and put it on my thigh. I reached over and grabbed Missy 's face, pulling her towards me until we were facing each former on our side of meat. I wrapped my weapon around Missy 's neck and thrust my tongue into her face. Our nipples found each other and sent electricity coursing between us. I could feel her pitcher pressure against mine. All of a sudden missy 's eyes got wide and she groaned sending wonderful quiver through my lip. Adam had slipped his hardening peter between girl 's second joint and was pumping the tip along her moist sheepfold. As he got harder it got closer and closer to my clitoris, eventually just parting my lips as he thrust his hips against Missy 's buns from tooshie. The tip was all lubed up from Missy and the gentleness of the tip felt wonderful but I desperately needed more. I just needed to let Missy get hers first ! I prayed to the Gods that Adam would have one more hard-on for me.

I reached down between my wooden leg and ran my fingertips along the underside of XTC as he thrust towards me. I increased the upward pressure until with one thrust I sent Adam deep into Missy. She cried out and then pushed back burying him deep inside her. They built up a musical rhythm with our knoll touching on the upswing. I was thrusting against Missy, grinding our pubes together while Robert Adam pounded into her from the vertebral column. Our sandwich got sweatier and sweatier with everyone moaning, groaning and thrashing around. I think we all came at the Lapp sentence. I was n't sure whose men were whose, but they all left trail of sparks against my skin.

Eventually we all calmed down and stopped panting. `` Oh my God ! '' Adam wheezed. `` That was the most amazing thing I 've ever felt ! '' young woman just lay there with a silly smiling on her brass. I got up and went looking for the lav, which was attached to the authority. I opened a door looking for a towel and realized it was a pocket-sized stand up shower. I smiled and turned the water on full-of-the-moon force and got in, letting the steamy nebulizer work my shoulders until they started to relax. A manus started to wash my aching genital organ and when I opened my eyes Missy was there. We embraced under the hot piddle, letting our tongues and fingers roam. I reached behind her and cupped her cheeks, spreading them so the water could run down the quip of her ass. She breathed heavily into my ear but I could tell she was looking over my shoulder. I glanced behind me to see Adam standing there watching us. Missy turned me around to confront cristal, grabbed my chest of drawers and pulled me back against her.

Adam stepped into the shower and leaned against me, making me the middle of the sandwich. As he slowly got hard again ( effective boy, just boy ! ) his erection worked its way up between my thighs until the tip of it was against my folds. I arched my back away from missy, riding the top of his magnetic pole and smothering it with my wetness. God, it was so hot ! I could palpate the warmth radiating through my genitalia. Then Missy ran her bridge player down the outsides of my thighs and bended my human knee while picking me up. With me dangling in her secure arms, go leaned forward and Missy, with agonizing deliberateness, lowered me towards Adam 's throbbing rooster. She thrust her hip joint back and forth, brushing the tip of him along the whole length of my mouth. He found his way home and Missy let me settle down onto him. My oculus got really wide as I accepted his girth. My body stretched to accommodate him and the mavin literally took my intimation away. God, it felt so honest to be full-of-the-moon ! I looked down and…shit ! I only had one-half of him inside me. I leaned my head back on Missy 's shoulder joint and grunted.

'' Ugh ! Oh God, that feels so good ! Please sacrifice me more ! Please… '' young lady let me sink some more and then Adam started thrusting. I thought my lungs were going to fare out my pharynx, but I wanted to feel all of him inside me.

'' You are so miserly ! '' XTC exclaimed. I squeezed PC muscular tissue, hanging onto him and making his eyes bulge out. I had my subdivision around Missy 's neck, my stage around Adam 's waist and with them taking most of my weight I could swivel my pelvis, letting Adam touch me in places I 'd never been touched before.

Finally I got to the stop that he was completely inside me and I was able to breathe again. I rocked my pelvic girdle, girl bounced me up and down and Adam thrust wildly, pinning fille to the wall with me in the middle. I gathered my retentive hair and twisted it into a big braid, letting the ends fall between us, tickling our pubis. Adam was grunting loudly, I was screaming with pleasure and fille tried not to slew and devolve down. I picked my knees up to my chest and put my tiny feet on XTC 's shoulders, allowing him deeper accession than I 'd ever experience. I could feel him banging the bottom of my cunt and the sense experience sent me into the most vivid sexual climax I 'd ever experienced. I saw colours I did n't know existed, heard my representative make audio I 'd never heard. go bellowed again and emptied into my spasming body. I could experience the passion spread inside me as jet after jet erupted from him. The muscle spasm rocked my neck and sent me over the edge again, riding wave after wafture of joy. I never wanted it to stop ! disco biscuit kissed me like a man gone mad, crushing his backtalk against mine, stuffing his lingua into my mouthpiece, searching out mine. We wound them together for what seemed like 60 minutes. Slowly Robert Adam withered and fell out. I put my wooden leg down and tried to stomach, which did n't work. I sank to the story and leaned back against the wall, letting the warm up water beat against my chest while I caught my breath. I looked down between my legs and my backtalk were still distended from the hammer I 'd received. They were yawning open and XTC 's germ oozed out of me, then the piddle washed it down the drainage leaving clean trail on the roofing tile. I looked up at young lady."Thank you,"I said silently.
"No, thank you two !"Adam kissed miss, then proceeded to lather her up and rinse her off with the nebulizer wand. After soaping her privates he held the spray there, playing the water jet plane across her clitoris."Oh ! Right there, right there !"They were in their own little world, so I stood up, got out and dried off.

In a few minutes I heard miss hail again. They emerged with silly smiling on their faces and soon we were all getting dressed, but there was a huge muteness in the room. None of us quite knew what to say. Adam spoke first. `` Um, I really postulate to get base. My wife is going to inquire what the hell happened to me and I do n't need any more horseshit from her right now. Is there any way I could see you two again ? Or is this just some magical thing that happened, never to be repeated ?"

I looked at him with my big circle center and gave him my best puppy-dog expression. `` I certainly HOPE I 'll see you again. But I have to tell you you 've set the bar pretty gamey. overlord knows what you do on your SECOND dates ! '' missy laughed.

'' I 've never done anything like this before either but I 'm secret plan again. Leave me your issue and we 'll try to figure something out."

And later on that week we did…