It was a beautiful summertime day. Katie loved sunbathing down at the parkland on these sorts of Day. There was a lilliputian lake and a breeze that felt delightful on her youth skin.
'' bull ! ''. Katie thought. `` I 'm supposed to be meeting my friends at the plaza in half an 60 minutes ''.
As she quickly packed up her things and went to pull up stakes, she thought she sensed someone watching her, but when she looked around there was no one there.
'' Weird '' she thought, and put it to the back of her mind.

Katie left the plaza at 7pm, her and her booster had decided to watch the new Hunger Games movie. `` Jennifer Lawrence is so hot '' she thought to herself as she was walking home. Katie had seen the exposure released of her in 'The Fappening'and had fantasized about having sex with her ever since then. Katie did n't consider of herself as a lesbian though, probably bi-sexual, due to the fact that she was still turned on by guys.
She was mindlessly walking, almost base now, when all of a sudden she felt someone grab her around the neck. Then there was nothing.When Katie woke up, her head was killing and she could barely move. She realized she had been hog-tied and was lying on a cold hard concrete floor. She tried to wiggle around to get a honorable look at her surroundings. It looked to be some sort of keep, there were gallows, shackle on the rampart, unearthly automobile, a big bench and closet. And in the niche she noticed another person.
It was her mother, Julie. Katie 's abdomen dropped.

'' MUM ! MUMMM ! '' she cried out, hoping someone would hear.
Her mother was naked and dangling from the roof by chains attached to her hands. Katie could only just see her mothers chest moving, she was still breathing, thank god she was only unconscious.
'' HELP '' Katie screamed, terrified now.

After 5 arcminute of panicked yelling and beggary for help, Katie started to fall in up and she realized no one was coming to deliver her. Then she heard a door open up behind her.

'' Hello my pin-up '' said the voice that had just entered the elbow room. He walked around and stood in strawman of Katie.
'' Oh fuck - WHAT THE shtup ARE YOU DOING '' Katie screamed at the man.
'' Do n't worry Katie, you 'll detect out soon enough '' he said with a grin.
Max was Julie 's boyfriend. Katie had always liked him, he was always very kind and treated her and her mum very well. Until now, that is.

He picked Katie up by the rope that he hog-tied her with and carried her over to a big judiciary where he set her down. As he started untying her, she thought - or wished - to herself that he was going to let her go now and that this was all a big jocularity. She felt a jab in her arm and she immediately felt woozy. All her muscularity relaxed and she could n't strike anything.
'' I 've injected you with a small muscle relaxant and sedative, Katie, not enough to knock you out, but enough to restrain you from struggling while I get you into this harness '' Max said quietly to her, glancing at a chilling looking widget hanging from the ceiling.
She tried to run her trunk but it would n't cooperate. The drug made her feel strange. She wanted to press the man off but she could n't move a muscle. So all she could do was watching powerless as Max strapped her arm and wooden leg into the contraption. When he was done, he walked over to a control panel and pushed a clitoris.

Katie felt herself being slowly lifted into the air, as she went up, the machine gradually spread her arms and legs apart. When it finally stopped, Katie was totally spread bird of Jove and felt completely exposed. She looked down and blushed. No one had ever seen her cunt before. It was completely shaven and so smooth.
'' You have a beautiful pussy Katie '' Max said as he gently stroked her tap lips `` I 've dreamed about seeing it ever since I first laid eyes on you '' he said, smiling.
'' Do n't fucking touch me you pervert '' she managed to say, still groggy from the drugs he had injected in her.
He did n't say a word, he seemed to be mesmerized by her pussy. `` Are you going to let us go ? '' she asked him.
'' fountainhead, I guess that depends how well you behave, and whether or not I am satisfied with you and your mother 's performance ''. he replied, stroking her second joint now.
'' execution .... ? '' she asked, confused.
'' Yes, carrying out. You and Julie will pleasure each other, and me. If I am satisfied, I will let you go. If not ... well, lets hope it does n't come to that. '' he said solemnly.

He stopped rubbing her thigh and gave Katie a slap on her snatch. `` Ouch ! That hurts ! '' she exclaimed. She looked down to see her lips turning red and puffing up slightly. He walked over to Julie and 'SMACK', slapped her in the fount. She jolted awake, face reddening, and then she saw Katie.
Katie thought she saw her female parent smile ... surely not, right ?
'' Mum .... ? '' she said slowly.
'' Hi Katie ! '' Julie said, sounding ... happy ? `` This must be a dream '' Katie thought to herself.
Max started loosening the restraints on Julie, when she was justify, she gave him a kiss and walked over to Katie.
'' What the nooky is this Mum ? ? ? '' Katie asked, so confused.
'' Mine and Max 's anniversary nowadays '' she said, with a smile.
'' Wha- '' Katie started to speak, but she was silenced by Max 's finger on her lips.
'' Enough talk, lets get her warmed up, Julie '' he said as he walked over to a great cupboard. When he opened it, Katie saw a huge ingathering of sex miniature and lubricants. He stood in front of it, pondering which 1 he wanted them to use first. He grabbed out a bottle of peppermint lubricating substance, a ball-gag, and an inflatable fundament ballyhoo.

'' Now Katie, are you going to be quiet ? Or do I have to shut you up with this ball-gag ? '' he asked.
'' I 'll be quiet ! '' she said quickly, not relishing the thought of being gagged. `` Good girl. '' Julie chimed in.
He handed the lubricant and the butt hack to her mother. She grabbed them excitedly and started pumping up the butt hack. It got shuddery big. Max noticed the fear in Katie 's eyes and smiled. `` Do n't worry, we 'll try not to smart you ... too a great deal '' he said mischievously.
Julie let all the air out of the nag and set it down. She opened up the feeding bottle of lubricant and squirted some into her hand. `` That actually smells really salutary '' Katie thought to herself. She felt a moth-eaten and hot champion simultaneously on her mother fucker. `` Oooh '' she said, trying to wriggle away, but the contraption was suspending her in such a way that made it impossible.
Julie rubbed around her daughters asshole gently, lubing it up for the fun that was to come. She lent forward and licked Katie 's pussy lips, tickling them with her tongue. `` MUM, WHAT THE fuck ? I 'M YOUR daughter ! '' she yelled.
'' I know, is n't it hot ? '' Julie replied, briefly looking up and grinning at her. `` We 've been waiting a long time for this you know '' she said, then went back to licking her daughters snatch. `` I hope you are enjoying that Katie. I wont be ... satisfied unless you enjoy it, so score some stochasticity showing your appreciation '' Max said to her.
Begrudgingly, she did have to admit it felt pretty good. It was the first time anyone had ever gone down on her. Katie let out a small moan as Julie poked a finger into her anus and wiggled it around. It seemed to make the pussycat eating sense a lot better when she had something in her ass.
Max had moved a chair over and was sitting watching intently at his girlfriend molesting her own daughter. He smiled and wondered how he had ended up meeting someone who was so will, and wanted this as lots as he did.
Julie now had a finger knuckle thick in Katie 's ass and was slowly but rhythmically fucking her with it.
'' Fuck it. '' Katie thought as she closed her eyes and relaxed. `` It 's going to encounter anyway so I might as well properly relish it. I 'll just pretend that it 's Jennifer Lawrence doing this, not my own mother ''.
Julie pulled her finger out of her dupe ass and deform down to pick up the toy. Katie felt it being pushed against her asshole. She relaxed her sphincter muscleman so it would go in without hurting her. It pushed past the medulla so that just the substructure was showing. It was such a eldritch sensation of mellowness, even without it being inflated.

'' Ready ? '' Julie asked. `` Uh, I guess so, you are going to do it anyway though, right ? ''. She replied only with a grin, and squeezed the heart for the hind end plug.
'' Ooohhh '' slipped out of Katie 's sassing as she felt the toy expand in her ass. It was still hot and insensate from the lubricant her mother applied to her as well, which added to the sensation.


As the toy was inflated more and more, Max 's smile grew. He pulled down his pant and whipped out an impossibly immense dick, which he started stroking while he watched them.
When the toy could n't get any self-aggrandizing, Julie fucked the inside of Katie 's ass with it. `` Mmmmhm '' moaned Katie. `` Do n't break ''. She found that she enjoyed the look of richness in her ass. It was sort of like wanting to take a big shit but quite different, and the fact that it was being moved up and down rapidly was so weird.
Her mother stared right into her daughter eyes and pulled the toy quickly out of her ass. As it popped out, her hole gaped for a few seconds before closing back up.
'' That is so hot Katie '' Julie said. `` This is making me so wet, but I will have to hold back cashbox I am finished with you before I can get off ''.
She knelt down under her and plunged her tongue straight into her asshole and started tongue-fucking her with it. `` Oh fuck, that feels so commodity Mum '' Katie moaned. A note of snatch cum was now hanging off her lips. Max walked over and sucked it into his mouth, tasting every bit of it. `` So angelical '' he said. `` Would you like to try it, my beloved ? ``.
Katie had never tasted herself before, but she was pleasantly surprised. She sucked her grool off of Max 's finger and let it sit on her tongue. Enjoying the taste, before swallowing it. `` Good girl '' he said as he moved his head closer to her pussy. He started gently sucking on her clit while her mother tongued her motherfucker.

'' Oooh my '' she moaned. All the sensations were so overmaster and she could n't take it anymore. She relaxed and let an orgasm rock and roll through her unharmed body. Neither her female parent or Max let up on their oral pleasuring for a s. As soon as the first orgasm had started to subside, there was another, even more powerful than the firstly. `` Stop please block. My pussy is so sensitive, I ca n't postulate it anymore '' she groaned. Max paused then released his mouth grip on her button, and tapped Julie on the shoulder. `` Enough Julie. Let her recover for a minute. ''
Julie stopped and pulled her tongue out of her daughters ass, with a sad flavour on her fount. She was really enjoying sassing fucking Katie 's shithole. So dirty.
When they had both stopped, Katie closed her eyes and tried to get her breathing back to formula. As if they could tell that she was fix to go again, Julie squirted some more lube onto her hands and into Katie 's ass. When she was sufficiently lubricated, Julie put her finger inside again, and another finger. Slowly fucking her, and wiggling them around. `` Mmmhm '' she moaned. `` That 's good Mum ''
3 Fingers. It was starting to adulterate her hole now, but it did n't hurt. In and out, slowly picking up the pace. `` I am sword lily they are being gentle '' she thought to herself as she let herself enjoy the feeling.
Max walked over to the control panel and pushed a button. She felt her arms being lowered towards the ground, her legs staying at the same summit. Max pushed a tabular array over and kept lowering her until Katie 's flyspeck teenage torso was lying on it. He moved towards her pass and dangled his putz in front of her face. It was huge. She had never seen one in genuine life history before, only in pornography she had watched with her supporter at a sleepover.

'' Suck it Katie '' Max said firmly. `` I 've never done it before, and it 's so big ! '' she exclaimed.
'' Do n't care, it 's comfortable '' her female parent said to her as she slipped a 4th finger into her girl ass.
'' OK '' she said as Max moved closer to her principal. He pushed the tip of his immense cock into her wet mouth and just rested it there. `` Suck it like you would a lollipop, but no dentition. If you bite me I will bear to punish you ''. She began sucking Max 's hawkshaw, it was n't as bad as she expected. He started slowly fucking her back talk as she sucked and was fucked by her mother.
'' Mmmm '' moaned Max. `` See, you are a natural, just like your mum ''.
Katie 's ass felt so to the full now, her mother had 4 finger in there and was slowly but forcefully, fucking her with them. She was subconsciously rocking on Julie 's hand and moving up and down in clip with Max 's thrusts into her mouth.
'' I 'm gon na cum Katie. Have you ever swallowed cum before ? '' Max asked her. All she did was shake off her head, and continued to suck on his cock. The sucking she was creating was amazing. He climbed up onto the table and jammed his cock into her throat. She gagged as he throat fucked her. `` I 'm gon na cum Katie '' he grunted. A few indorsement later he climaxed and stopped humping her brass. She felt cum being blasted into her pharynx and back talk and he started pulled out.

She swallowed near of it, but some escaped her mouth and ran down her chin. Her mother, still ass fucking her, stood up and reached over to lap up the remaining cum, not wanting to devastate any.
Max was just kneeling over her, panting now. gumshoe shrinking back to its, still huge, formula size of it.
'' It tasted kinda strange. Not unpleasant though, just Wyrd ''. Katie said thoughtfully. Her mother had gone back to her space kneeling on the storey, right in front of Katie 's ass. `` 5 finger's breadth now baby. Are you ready ? '' she said to her daughter. All that came out of her mouth was `` Mmm ''.
Her ass was feeling so fully with 4 fingers, she wondered what it would be like with a whole fist in there. `` I did n't know I could fit this much up my ass '' she thought to herself, as her mother squirted some more lubricating substance onto her hand. She pushed her thumb against her hollow. It was met with ohmic resistance, but Katie relaxed and it slipped in.
'' Oooohh ! '' she moaned. `` It 's so much, please take it out, please ''. Her mothers hand did n't budge. `` Please mum, I ca n't handle it please ''. It looked as if she was going to take her thumb up, but Max just shook his forefront at Julie. She pushed her mitt deeper into Katie 's ass, until her entirely hired hand was buried to the wrist.
Katie felt her mum 's fist rotating in her ass, stretching the wall of her ass. She was breathing heavily now, and it was hard to relax with it in there. She was pushing from inside, trying to force it out, but it just would n't come.
In and out. Julie tried to agitate it deeper into her girl colon. `` Too very much resistance Max. We are going to deliver to open her up with something diluent first '' she said as she started pulling her fist out Katie 's ass. Out it came with a pop, and her arse prolapse briefly. Julie quickly reached down and held it open with 2 fingers on each hand. `` pushing Katie. You have a beautiful little rosebud ''. she said before licking the walls of her prolapsed anus that were now on the outside of her soundbox. `` Fuckkk, that feels so good ''. she said before relaxing, not knowing that this would cause her rosebud to go back inside her. `` We have to do that again Mum ''.

'' We will baby, we have all the sentence in the universe ''. Julie said to her daughter.
She got up and walked over to the toy cabinet and picked out a 12 '' and an 18 '' double ended dong, lubing them up as she walked back.
Without a Scripture, she started inserting the smaller dildo into Katie 's ass. It was much pocket-sized than a clenched fist and was easy to get hold of inside her. She was enjoying the feeling of the cock sliding into her ass and she found herself rocking her trunk into it, matching her mother slow thrusts.
'' Oh yeah, that 's good. Keep going. '' Katie moaned. Julie began slowly inserting Thomas More of the toy into her ass. 7 column inch in now, it already felt so late. `` How can I possibly fit any to a greater extent of this in here ? '' she thought to herself.
Julie began fucking her unvoiced now. Pulling it all the way out and pushing it right back in, trying to break past the resistivity in Katie 's ass. `` Push Katie. Whenever it feels like I ca n't go any further, push hard and it will go further in ''. She pushed and felt the huge dildo go another inch into her colon.
'' Oh god sleep together yes, that flavour amazing mum ''. Katie said, as the dildo penetrated further and further into her torso. Julie began twisting the dildo and fucking her with it at the Saame fourth dimension. Julie came from the anal retentive stimulation alone, it felt like her whole body was orgasming. As she came she pushed out hard and Julie forced all 12 inches of the dildo inside her.

Katie gasped `` Oh fucking Jesus I ca n't conceive how good that feels ''. She pushed and the head of the dildo popped out of her ass. Max grabbed the end and pulled it almost all the way out, then rammed it back in as far as it would go, again and again, fucking her fast and hard.
'' Do you suppose you can use up more in your ass Katie ? '' he asked. `` I do n't jazz, I can try '' she said as he pulled the dildo out of her ass. She gaped once more, `` So fucking hot '' she heard her mother say.

Max picked up the 18 '' dong and lubed it up, then placed it against her gang. It was slightly thicker than the smaller one as well, so when he pushed it inside it stretched her somewhat more. `` Hnnngggg '' she groaned as it pushed past her sphincter. He pushed it deeper, slowly, 8 in, pulled it out, thrust back in.
'' You have 12 inch of this big pecker inside you Katie. How does it feel ? '' asked Max. `` I ca n't even describe the feeling, it feels so fucking Weird and so good at the same time '' she replied. He pushed it another in and Katie saw her stomach prominence. He pulled it out and thrust it back, bulge again. She could see the dildo hitting her abdomen.
'' Oh my god, it 's hitting my stomach '' she said. `` Can you unchain my hands so I can feel the dildo through my peel ? ''. It felt so fucking unearthly being able to see and feel that. Almost unconvincing, but it was such a turn on. Max was fucking her tough now with the big toy, it was bulging her stomach every time.
Julie went over to the toy cabinet and got out a vibrator. `` You are a virgin, right baby ? '' she asked her girl. `` Yes mum ''.
'' well we will cause to exchange that wont we ''. She said as she walked back over with the vibrator. She put the toy into her rima oris to lube it up and then rammed it into Katie 's pussy without warning.

'' OWWWW ! What the fucking Mum, why so hard ? ? '' she yelled. `` Sorry baby, I got a bit excited, I did n't mean to hurt you '' she said as she started fucking her daughter virgin pussy with the vibrator.
'' Mmmm. That feels nice '' Katie said as she was fucked in both holes by her mum and her boyfriend.
The toy in her ass would n't go any further, not without potentially injuring Katie anyway. Max pulled the toy out of her ass and she pushed at the Lapp time, completely prolapsing her anus. This metre she reached down and rubbed her rosebud with her own mitt.
'' fuck that is so hot child '' Julie said, still fucking her daughters pussy with the vibrator. `` Oh yes it is. Your daughter is such a jade Julie '' Max said.
'' Oh, I forgot to remark Katie, your functioning is being broadcast over the internet to one thousand of people ''. said Max `` Are the great unwashed paying to see it ? '' Katie inquired.

'' Yeah. people pay a lot to see younger girls get fucked by family fellow member. '' Max said affair of factually. `` Will you contribution some of the profit with me if I agree to do with you again ? '' she asked. `` You fucking whore, it 's a deal ''. he laughed as he reached to throw off her ass juice covered hand.
He moved down and positioned himself in front of Katie 's ass. Julie bent down and sucked his once again, hard dick, lubing it up, then he inserted it into Katie 's ass. The completely length of his peter plunging right in. `` Oh fuck it 's so warm up you little slut '' he said before he started fucking her hard with his big shaft. Katie started squeezing her ass sinew around his huge dick. After a few mo of rough nookie, his facial look changed and she knew he was about to blow his freight.
She squeezed as hard as she could around his stopcock and they orgasmed simultaneously. He squirted a huge cargo of cum in her young ass as she sprayed cum out of her cunt. Her mum lapped her juices up greedily, not missing a drop.

'' prison term to fist your ass again infant '' Julie said to her daughter.
Her fist went easily into Katie 's ass this time. She started fucking her roughly, using Max 's cum as lube, and Katie started squirting puss juice everywhere. Before she knew it, Julie was nearly human elbow trench in her ass. After a few bit of fisting, Max was ready to go again. He positioned himself against Katie 's wet puss and slowly pushed his cock inside boulder clay it was completely buried and pushing against her cervix.
'' Oh fuck that tone so acute '' she groaned as Max started fucking her newly deflowered pussy.
'' Oh god. Uhh oh yeah fuck me '' she moaned. Max had started playing with her titmouse now. Gently squeezing her rock severely nipples in his fingers.
'' Ohh '' Katie moaned and closed her eyes, enjoying being fucked in both mess at the same sentence.
Max was fucking her so unvoiced now, slamming her soundbox into the table with each thrust. She did n't mind, it felt too good. She was experiencing constant full-of-the-moon physical structure climax now, wafture of pleasure that she wished would never stop.
He finally came, blowing a huge lode of sticky cum recondite inside her pussy. He left his cock buried inside her for a minute, both of them enjoying the tactual sensation. Eventually he pulled out and began undoing the shackles on her legs. When she was release, Max lifted her into a sitting positioning and sat behind her. He fingered Katie 's snatch, pushing his cum out and into Julie 's waiting mouth.

'' I ca n't cum again, please intercept. I ca n't '' Katie said, sounding exhausted. Max was playing with her bosom and fingering her pussy while her female parent was human elbow deep in her ass still. He was hitting her g-spot constantly now and somehow managing to rub her clitoris with his wrist at the Saami time.
'' Fuck it '' she thought, `` I might as well try and cum again ''. She closed her eyes and relaxed her whole body. She could secernate now that she would orgasm soon. Katie was now slowly humping Max 's hand and enjoying the sensations she was feeling. All of a sudden, Julie pulled her fist out of her daughter ass and Katie prolapsed and orgasmed with such force that she fell unconscious.
When Katie woke up, she found herself naked in her bed, stuffed with a big butt plug. She could hear her mother coming down the hallway.
The room access opened. `` Oh, you 're up. How are you feeling ? '' she asked her girl with a smile.
'' I 'm washed-out. I wo n't be able to do that again for a while until I recover I do n't think'. she replied. `` Do n't worry, it 's your turn to do me next anyway '' her mum said, sitting on the edge of the bed, stroking her daughters hair. Katie closed her eyes and went back to sleep.

Katie woke up after having the best eternal rest of her life. The tush chew was still firmly stuck in her ass. The fact that it was there reminded her of what had happened the day before. `` I ca n't believe I did that '' she thought.
'' Mumm ! '' she called out. `` MUMMM ! '' she tried again. Julie came walking down the hall and into her room. `` Yes Henry Sweet ? '' she said `` I 'm just making breakfast ''.
'' Oh effective, I am starving. Hey Ma, can you help me get the fanny plug out of my ass please ? '' she asked, flipping around and sticking her cute tail end in the air. Julie walked over and gave her cheek a smack, giggling. `` Of grade. I 've been waiting to use this one since endure night ''. She grabbed the rim of the stub hack and pulled it out quickly. It had been in for so long that her ass gaped wide open, giving Julie a view of deep inside her girl ass.
'' How did I end up with such a stark, sexy daughter ? '' she wondered out loud as she played with the massive butt cud she just rescued from Katie 's motherfucker. Katie turned back around and plonked herself down on the bed as her mum sat down side by side to her. She stared at Julie for a while, until now she had never realized how beautiful her female parent was. She had huge boob that were still perky at age 40, and a nice ass too.
Katie put her arm around her mother and rested her straits on her shoulder joint. Her hired man made it 's way inside Julie 's shirt and to her firm breasts. Just as she started massaging her teat, Julie sighed `` This will have to look till after breakfast. The intellectual nourishment will burn if I do n't go take it off the stove now ''. Julie got up and walked to the kitchen and her daughter followed. Katie noticed Max sitting in at the dinner table using his laptop. He seemed to be watching a film of some form. She walked behind Max and got a punter look..it was the television of the 3 of them having sex.

'' How very much money did you earn from making that video, Max ? '' she questioned. `` About $ 10,000 from the people watching live over the internet. '' he answered. `` Wow - that 's softheaded ... .so..when are we going to do it again ? And do you recollect I would be able to take a suited admirer future metre ? '' she asked with a grin.
'' We can do it tomorrow if you would wish ? And of path you can bring a friend. '' he said. Katie went to sit on the chair next to Max but he motioned for her to sit on his lap instead. `` Fuck it '' she thought, sitting on his lap. Immediately his hand found its way to her slit and started rubbing her pink lips. `` Oohh '' she moaned, spreading her stage to dedicate her female parent 's beau better memory access to her cunt.
Julie turned around to see her daughter grinding on her boyfriend deal. `` That is fucking hot, you two '' she said, reaching for her phone. She started up the camera and began filming the conniption that was unfolding in her kitchen, with a smiling. Julie walked over to Katie and started sucking on her mamilla gently. Katie let out another groan `` Ohhhh. Fuck that feeling good Mum ''.
'' You do n't jazz this, but your father always wanted to fuck you as well. He was waiting public treasury you were old enough, but he died when you were too Lester Willis Young. '' said Julie.
'' Oh, really ? I would have liked that '' she said. `` Max, I 'm gon na cum ''.

He felt her cunt crush his fingers hard as she orgasmed, she was writhing in his lap, but he kept fucking her with his fingers..a little faster now, hammering her g-spot. She came again, hard. Squirting cum all over her mums shirt.
Julie stopped sucking on Katie 's mammilla and knelt down in front of her to suck the rest of the succus out of her dripping wet pussy. `` It tastes so mellisonant '' she thought to herself as she swirled it around in her sass. She stood up and opened her daughter rima oris, spitting the odorous spurt into her mouth for her to taste.
'' Mmmmhm, that tastes good. I ca n't wait to see what yours taste perception like, Mum '' she said as she swallowed the mouthful of her own puss succus.
'' That will have got to look for our following program my love '' she said solemnly. `` So, who is this friend you want to bring along ? ``
'' Stephanie Hatzis. She is a bitch to me and I want to teach her a lesson '' she grinned.

End of chapter 1

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