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The freshness from the screen lit up the small chamber in an apartment construction in the lowly hours of the morning. Eva Michaels was twirling her hair's-breadth between her kickshaw digit, contemplating the offer that the laptop was illuminating. The new Holistic Virtual realness headband had only been useable for three years now and already it was sweeping across the planet like a plague. The HVR ring was the latest breakthrough in immersion technology, giving it 's wearer access to a virtual macrocosm, more than a childlike a visual experience, a touchable sensational stimulus filled fantasy soil. The exploiter was to slip the lot over their eyes, wait for the device to fine-tune to psyche waving through the retina with a little technological witchery that Eva knew nothing about, and delay until you were whisked away.

The polarity up form blew past her, and in no sentence the onscreen instructions prompted the user to equip the HVR dance band. Eva released her hair and wiped her eyes with her palms.

'' OK, this is it. Finally, I can see what the hell the fuss is over this thing '' Eva muttered to herself as she settled into her flaccid bed, ensuring comfort for what she was informed could learn a while. She brought the stripe up to her eyes, strapped it securely and reclined.

'' Welcome exploiter '', came the sultry voice of the game guidebook. `` The followers tutorial will help you to interact with the globe around you, as you are physically in an immobile state there is no danger of bodily harm at any point of use. All interactions will be triggered by sentiment, to achieve the best story of gaming experience the creators urge you to let your imaginativeness wander. The world is filled with Creator characters of Christ Within and dark, other drug user are found throughout the earth. All activity have an impact on the destiny of your reference, adventure awaits you newcomer. The road to Lavellan is open to you.

The smell of racy earth hit her nostrils, breathing in instinctually Eva realised she was standing, barefoot and clad in her night shirt, in the midst of a golden wood. tree trunks stretched up to the empyrean, crowned with leaves in shades yellow and Orange River. The same leaves coated the ground beneath her foot. Eva looked around her, there was a nerve pathway ahead of her winding through the trees.

'' I guess that 's my heading, would be nice to know for sure though '' she thought as she scouted around for clues. The ground beneath her fundament began to radiate, a few fiery footprints stepped away from her toward the course. `` Holy bastard, ask and ye shall meet. '' she chuckled as she started down the path.

Following the footsteps Eva walked in awe of her surroundings, the chatter of birds, smells of the forest, light and shadow scattered across the undercoat. All so real, down to the gentle picnic flowing up the path that danced across her tegument. It was n't long before the path turned into a glade, the seed of the cool walkover revealed to be a waterfall. The sun shimmering on the cascading water, the soft skunk around the bound of the pool below beckoned to Eva and she responded, wading into the pool clothed. The water was aplomb and welcoming, fully submerging herself Eva made a beeline for the waterfall. Climbing up onto some rocks led to the uncovering of a cave entrance, one that had light flickering on its privileged wall.

'' Ca n't get hurt right ? May as well crack it out '' She thought as she walked inside. The entrance gave way to a tunnel, beautiful markings etched in the gem, a sweet sense of smell coming from within arouse her senses.

The sound of a woman singing came from the tunnel too, Eva rounded the lastly recess to find a room beautifully decorated with living things as though mother nature herself originated right here. Eva was so dumbstruck by the majesty of this clandestine utopia that she was slow to recognize that she stood face to typeface with a stunning elven looking womanhood. Her skin was a pale green, like perfect porcelain, with sullen super C vines tattooed from head to toe. Long black pilus adorned her face, and fell to her breasts which bulged out from the brim of her skin soaked body suit. Her slender fingers were wrapped around the handle of a ladle stirring a steaming cauldron over a fire.

'' Good day traveller, I am Meredith. Keeper of the plantation, what brings you to my home ? '' the woman smiled peacefully at her as she bottled her brew.

'' Oh my, did n't see you there. So dreary to just push forward in like this, my figure is Eva. I was on my way to the kingdom of Lavellan when I found the consortium and I could n't serve myself, I hope I have n't intruded ''

George Meredith walked closer to her, her eyes scanning Eva 's full distance, this made her blatantly aware of her dripping sort and her petite nipples pushing against the clinging fabric of her night shirt. `` Not at all sweet-flavored tike, all are welcome here. '' She leaned forward, exposing her segmentation, picked up a pitcher of favorable syrupy liquid and offered her a full flagon. `` Honey Margaret Mead, made it myself earlier today. ``

'' Thank you. '' Eva accepted the drink, after a lowly psychometric test penchant she gulped half the flagon, the mead was sweet-scented, soothing her throat as she swallowed. `` This is amazing hooey, what 's in it ? ``

'' Bit of everything really, it 's a exceptional formula. To facilitate you along the way. ``

'' What do you mean ? '' she asked, but as the Holy Writ left her mouth Eva felt her body start to warm and tingle. A wave of electrical energy rippled through her and a blink of an eye of gold swirled around her. `` What the ? What was that ? ! I feel ... I ... feel..really full. Really really good ! '' she exclaimed as she ran her fingers through her hair's-breadth lifting it from her neck.

'' That, was an xp degree fillip for finding my cave. It will help you to be more successful as you progress. The sudden hurry of great power is what caused you to feel euphoric, it has early slope issue but zero to be concerned about. ``

Eva licked her lips, the warmheartedness and tingling she felt was now focalize between her leg. `` Is there uhm ... is there an antidote or something for the slope effects ? I think this might demonstrate to be a bit ... distracting ?

Meredith lowered her eyes and swayed her hips seductively from side to side, `` I have an idea '' she said as she raised an supercilium, her script sliding from her hips, up along her stomach stopping to clasp her leather clad bosom.

Eva gasped, she had never been this aroused by another woman. She watched, biting her backside lip, as Meredith turned her back to her to unzip her leotard which peeled away from her picket putting green peel. Eva could n't tear her optic from Meredith as she doubled over to slither the garment down her long elven legs, giving her a mouthwatering view of her lithe torso. She turned to front Eva, walking up to her, she offered her hand. Eva clasped her deal to Merediths and followed her to a petal covered plant. Raising her subdivision above her head allowed her shirt to be removed, exposing her already cold tit to the cool air. The soft plant life gave way beneath Eva as she sank, gently being pushed back by George Meredith warm palm on her muffle chest.

'' I do n't know what to do, I 've never ... '' Eva blurted out, interrupted by James Howard Meredith pressing her lips against hers, parting them to slide her clapper against Evas.

'' Mmmm '' Eva groaned as she tasted the elven smasher. Meredith pulled away from her seduction, `` Now precious shaver, let me take upkeep of you. I will show you the wonders of the orchard '' With that, she raised her hired man and curled her finger, the plant beneath Eva rumbled and warmth emanated from beneath her. `` Are you doing that, controlling that works ? '' she asked as she rubbed against the velvety petals.

'' It is my influence, the grove helps me get what I want and right now, I want you ''

Meredith dropped to her knee joint placing her medal on Eva 's legs to circularize them apart. She shuffled closer cupping Eva 's pale orb in her hands, slipping till her finger's breadth pinched and rolled her pap. Eva let out a whimper and arched her back, granting her better approach to her excited chest of drawers. lovesome back talk wrapped around her wind up nip and she groaned with desire, her white meat tingled as George Meredith teeth grazed her sensitive tip. She moved down the girls dead body licking and nipping as she went, pausing above her smooth pussy to push Eva 's legs up to her chest.

Eva 's kitty glistened in the firelight of the cave, James Howard Meredith tongue stretched out eagerly caressing her fold, from the bottom, all the way to her arduous clitoris. Poking her tongue in and out flicking lightly against her prize, Meredith encircled Eva 's nub, sucking it in between her lips. `` Oh my God, that feels so fucking good '' Eva moaned as she threw her read/write head back, reveling in the carnal pleasure pulsing from her throbbing clit.

Slipping a fingerbreadth into her new toy 's drip yap, Meredith felt her own rousing reaching a dizzying state. She snapped her fingers and the works beneath Eva erupted in vines, wrapping themselves around both women suspending them in the air. Meredith locked her rim to Evas and held her faithful to her warm body, grinding sensually against her fan as the industrial plant made its way to the wet bend of her pussy. Eva felt the vine push into her hole and skid up to the hilt, rocking her soundbox with wave of pleasure as it pulsed and vibrated within her. With a nipple firmly caught between her teeth Meredith moaned and shuddered in sheer ecstacy, the plants velvety rod sliding in and out of her depths.

Eva felt herself losing control over her body, her existence was simply a collection of highly excited mettle closing. She thought she could abide no more when Meredith waved her hand above her and the vines doubled their elbow grease, pounding furiously.

'' Lose yourself to the pleasure child, that 's it ... '' James Meredith wrapped her finger into Eva 's hair and pulled back her head, watching as she slipped into orgasm.

Eva 's body convulsed as the plant life action at law overcame her, she let out a screeching of delight as her climax hit her. She ground her clamping pussy against the vines, as Meredith fell back Eva felt the vines twitch and jerk, they were cumming with George Meredith. The warm liquid shot up Eva 's gormandize slit making her shudder as she came down from her high. Once emptied the vines slowly lowered the fair sex onto the velvet-textured tush of the plant.

As they lay there recovering, Eva cuddled into her lovers side and cooed, `` That was unbelievable. I do n't have it away what to say. ``

Meredith smiled as she rose and began to crop, `` This land is full of many more surprise traveller, your journey will be a fulfilling one. '' she says with a twinkle in her eye, `` I thank you for your ... companionship, I hope your adventures in Lavellan lead you back to my plantation. ``

To be continued ...