Hi this is my starting time time writing anything so I 'd like your opinion on it.

This has some themes like young the adult sex so be warned.
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Today 's my fourteenth nativity day. My blood brother is a famous bioengineer and has made a lot of money in his career. He is coming home for my parturition day and also the fruneral of his wife. She died in a car accetent on the way home.

I hear a knocking at the door and see that it 's David my brother. I run down the stairs and open the door sense mom is in the back doing the garden stuff and nonsense.

'' happy nascency day, Jarry `` Jacques Louis David said. He had opprobrious mend under his eyes from lack of slumber. His eyes that used to look happy, now look sad and depressing.

'' hi David, I 'm dismal for ant Carry `` I said

'' it 's not your fault, small buddy `` he said while messing up my blonde hair. I have low eyes like the sky, while that 's what my mom says but the tike at shoal say it makes me a dumb blonde.

'' can we still go to the ice-cream shop ? '' I asked

'' sure as shooting, we can still go `` he said. There 's a billet in town really called the ice-cream shop and it 's very good.

'' yay `` I said befor running to the back G where mom at .when I see her I ask

'' mom can I go to the ice-cream store with St. David ? ''

She looks up befor saying `` sure, it 's your give birth day. Go have fun ``

I yell happy as I run back to the front.

'' mom says we can go `` I say happily

'' not bad let 's go `` David says befor walking over to his black hummer.

We listened to Thomas Kyd music while driving. David kept giving me Wyrd looks but I did not bang what they ment. When we reached the Ice-cream shop. I got out and followed David interior.

We walked over to the stand and I ordered a homemade ice-cream bar and went to the rest room.

After I was done, I ran to the tabular array where David was at. I sat down and we said small talking. I started eating and almost as soon as I started. I felt dizzy and had a head aching .I started to see dark spots around my vision. It started to get darker and darker but befor I fully went under. I saw David giving me a wickedness smiling.


I wolk up to the auditory sensation of beeping, lots of beeping. I tried to afford my eyes but the felt like stones. When I finally got my eye exposed, I saw a goliath wall mirror. I saw that there was a lot of reckoner equipment and two electric chair by a bed.

In the bed was a girlfriend with Amytal eyes and blonde hair. She was in a hospital scrubs and dismal pantie. She had small titty but they looked good on her. She looked around my age. She also had restraints on het sleeve.

I moved around a little to get in a better seating home and the girl did too. I moved back and the girl did the same affair at the same exact meter.

'' stop copying me `` I said. Instead of my normal interpreter, a high pitch girls voice came out. I then relized that the girl is me. I let out a in high spirits pitch screaming and cryied. Lots of tears fell from my centre.

Then a hidden doorway opened up and out came Jacques Louis David with a lab coat and a smug grin on his aspect. He wales up to me.

'' help me David, we need to find out who did this to me '' I said

'' oh, there 's no pauperization for that Jarry or should I say Carry. I 'm the one who did it `` says Jacques Louis David

'' but why David, I love you ``

'' oh that 's the point, when my beloved Carry died with my un-born minor. I was devestated but when I saw you today. I decided to bring in you to my lab and change you DNA a niggling. You might not have sex me as the original Carry but you will do. I changed you so that if you were born female person, then you would look like this. Everything is perfect. Including your virginity `` he said the last component part with a laugh.

'' please exchange me back `` I begged.

'' why would I do something like that. You need me and I need you `` with that he came toward and grabbed the end of my dress. When it would not go the way he wanted he ripped it off. When the low temperature air hit my hide. My newly formed nipples grew hard.

'' oh, so perfect `` said Saint David befor he started sucking on my left one .I tried to go my tit out of his month but I ca n't with my hand attached to the table.

'' no David, stop `` I said but he just sucked hard. Something weird started happening. Me newly developed viagina started to get wet.

'' Saint David please turn back `` I begged but instead of stoping he went to my mightily one. He started to lightly seize with teeth it and it made my viagina even wetter.

'' Saint David stop now `` again he egnored me and got up. I 'm thinking'thank god he 's done'but he just went to were my legs were. He started to intrude at my blue panties and a squishing sound came from it. He looked at me with a insainly happy smile and said.

'' your almost ready. I only have to do alittle more ``

'oh no'I think

He starts to pull them off and I try to kick back him but he crabs my legs with one manus and continues to take out them off. When he did he put them to his olfactory organ and started smelling it.

Sould I continue ? ? ?

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Should I do another part. Please tell me and I 'll do it .