Right guys. This is my first story so turn over me some echt feedback please. This narration does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a template. I want to do things differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the characters. Who you want to see raped, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the next chapter. It 's that simple. result some comments on what you would like to happen in office 2 and itll be up this time following calendar week.


Cara had had adequate

She had had sufficiency of her too protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively aggressive father and his irregular outbursts of ira. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying picayune squat of a brother who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was fourth dimension to get her nooky revenge

Ever since Cara can call back, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the head. Having the unsportsmanlike thoughts, the fed up phantasy about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the quaggy, sick bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a facade of being polite fiddling shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the front she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the real her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was normal. She sat at the dinner table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the Jehovah petition along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully tranquillity tonight'her father asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her Father gave her a bedevil look. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to finish up that sentence. That 's when Caras Night of retaliation started.

The room access flew open and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding guns. They moved towards the terrify family.

'What the fuck'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his phratry

'SIT THE screwing DOWN'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the fathers head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a bullet train up her pussy, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the figures

Caras Father of the Church sat down. By this detail Lil Robert Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his face buried in his paw and his mother was trying to stay composure for his sake.

'What do you want ? Please. If its money that you want just have it. You can have anything. please just dont hurt us'Caras female parent begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of gazump a money box now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guys was holding and proceeded to draw in out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of long rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras begetter was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half take

His question did n't need a spoken reply. Instead, the drawing card of the chemical group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a bobby pin of his neck and wrapped the blindfold round his font. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded yobbo then proceeded to tie his hands behind his spinal column with one of the pieces of the ropes and did the Lapplander with his legs. He then tossed Ted onto the flooring where he could n't move. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life. As ecstasy clung on to her, she did n't hold a hint what to do. Her husband was tied up on the story and there was unknown, dangerous strangers in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the privation ? Norah did n't require to know the reply but was sure enough she was going to rule out.

The drawing card walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in answer. She did n't want to gage down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very gracious way to speak to your client now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to plunk for down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her right wing in the grimace and she fell to the storey. Crying uncontrollably and nose haemorrhage, Norah was shocked. cristal was completely terrorize and ran to the niche, crying all the patch.

While the mass murder escalated, Cara just sat there. Calm and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the whole scene. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her whole family whole

While all this was going on, the former 6 build just stood there. Overseeing the fell treatment of this silly family. The plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me cunt. I 'm about to leave this room with your beautiful daughter. If you want her back animated, I suggest you do n't move. My friends will be staying here so unless you want a smoke through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and tantalise her up and went towards the stairs. He stopped abruptly and turned towards Adam

'Little boy, look at your pitiable pussy of a dad and slut whore fathead of a female parent. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. Look forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the step


When they got up there, Cara could mouth freely.

'This is the fucking near half-baked thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your voice down man, do you want them to know your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you sure about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your brothers terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me Dodge ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you certainly you want to go through with this ? It 's your family ...'

'My kin ? You mean the same family that 's treated me like shit for 17 years ? No Dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

dodge just looked into her middle. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... immorality ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, tell me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded physical body ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about reference developing ? Want to have intercourse how Cara knows Dodge ? Who is dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

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