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I glanced across at her and laughed. She was pulling a airheaded face at me from the former position of the bus, and I could n't help but giggle along with her.
Marissa was beautiful. She had long, atomic number 78 blonde hair that hung down to her berm blades, or at least she would give birth. At the moment it was dyed dark brown and was held in a loose bun atop her head. Her face was variety and seemed to call a proficient sentence without her actually having to say anything. She had a inadequate, slender material body, about 5'2, and firm B-cup breasts. Today she was wearing a low cut gullible top with a nighttime, open waistcoat and a floral patterned wench. I was wearing denim and a t-shirt.
I had a monolithic calf love on her, but she had a boyfriend, and I was substance just to be her friend.
'' What are you staring me for, Ben ? '' she teased with a cheeky grin. I could n't help but admire how adorable she was. I could n't think I was lucky enough to cognise a young lady who was so pretty and funny. And she played television games ! I was more of an XBox fan, whereas she played online game like League of Legends, but we still had that in common. She also had an incredibly cheeky and often dirty sensation of humor. She was too good to be truthful. And yet there we were.
'' I was just looking at your goofy grimace, how about ? '' I countered with another laugh.
'' Oh, ouch. '' she said `` I do n't conceive I 'll ever recover from that. ``
I laughed yet again, and we continued to trade jokes and well-disposed insults along with our former booster as the bus took us home from school. I was in 11th mark along with most of my mates, but Marissa was a year older. None of us even noticed the age difference, we all got along so well.

We soon neared my arrest, and as I stood and prepared to leave with my best friend Matt, the small Angel Falls opposite me looked up.
'' Oh, hey Ben ? Can I be really annoying ? ``
I was surprised, but tidal bore to help. `` What do you need ? ``
'' Well my parents are out of townspeople and I 'm staying with a Friend, but she lives across town and this bus does n't go anywhere near her blank space. Is it alright if I borrow your phone and give her a shout so she can come and pick me up from my place ? ``
I had no problem with this, and quickly offered her my Mobile phone.
'' Thanks so much, Ben. ``
'' No problem. '' I replied with a shrug. As a skinny 17 twelvemonth old Virgo the Virgin who had never been in a serious human relationship, I could never say no to a pretty fille, even if I wanted to. I was n't ace skinny, or large, in fact at first gear glimpse I was in alright pattern, but I was n't especially muscly or sporty like a lot of the gym junkies I was champion with at school. I was more content to sit and record or play a video game than give up a Ball around, though I was always more than felicitous to get a bit physical if the opportunity arose. I quite enjoyed dodgeball ( whether I was any good at it was another story altogether ) but it did n't facilitate that I was an athsmatic. So it was no marvel girls did n't look to see me as boyfriend material. I had set of distaff friends, just none that saw me as potentially something more. Or so I thought.
Marissa finished speaking with her friend and gave a petty pout that almost made me melt to the floor. She handed me my phone back and looked out the window.
'' So what 's the damage ? '' I inquired.
'' Eh, my friend ca n't get to me very soon, so I 'll feature to hold off at my place for a few 60 minutes before she can come and get me. ``
I saw an opportunity to pass Sir Thomas More prison term with this amazing young woman, and so I seized it without hesitation.
'' Well, you could wait at my place. We could work some plot, watch some suspicious videos and just bum around until your booster can come get you, then she can nibble you up from there. My mum might even make you a drive, even easier. ``
She smiled `` That 's fresh, but is n't that a bit difficult ? I would n't desire to enforce. ``
I shook my promontory `` No imposition. Mum and Amber ( my untested baby ) would know you, and you know I already do. '' I almost choked. Had I just told her I loved her ? I had. Oh god.
But she did n't seem to notice, so I pushed on. `` I promise, it wo n't be that hard. ``
'' Giggidy ! '' she said immediately, not missing chance to make a dirty put-on. We all laughed, and she thanked me and agreed to come to my house until her friend picked her up.
Matthew had n't missed that I was taking the opportunity to expend fourth dimension with Marissa, and nudged me in the rib with his articulatio cubiti as soon as she looked away.
'' Eh ? Eh ? '' he said, sounding amazingly like Eric Idle in that Monty Python sketch.
'' Shuttup ! '' I chuckled, giving him a lightheaded shove. He laughed some more, but I was aced more hassle as he was distracted by another supporter of ours.
I turned back to look at Marissa, who was gazing out the windowpane again.
Whether she had noticed my short shimmy or not, I did love this young lady. Even if she was spoken for, I could n't help my feelings.

Upon arriving at the bus occlusion, I stepped out into open air with Marissa, my topper friend and his Twin sister. The four of us walked to the turning point where I bid the sib Au Revoir and wandered to my own menage with a gorgeous goddess at my slope. The two of us joked and laughed all the way there, and I was still chuckling when I opened the doorway and called out through our small sign to let my family know that I was home. My parents had never married, and they had split when I was 5 and my baby was 2. We lived with mum, but saw our father often enough. I was glad that my parents were on good footing, which was more than I could say for many multitude I know.
Our house was pocket-sized, but homely. there was just enough way for the requirement.
I wandered into the kitchen, not surprised by the deficiency of response, and discovered a humble greenback saying that my mum and sister had gone to stay with a friend for the nighttime, leaving me entirely with Marissa.
'' Looks like it 's just you and me for the next few hours. '' I shrugged apologetically.
'' That 's very well, I 'm sure we 'll survive. ``
'' Oh, I do n't live, '' I replied with a smirk. `` If I decide to turn evil while we 're here I doubt there 's a lot you can do to stop me. '' I then glanced at my skinny arms `` Oh postponement ... ''
'' Haha, oh I do n't think I 'll be able to manage such huge muscles. '' Marissa laughed, and I laughed with her.
I asked if she wanted to check a flick, and she agreed, so I put on a funny movie for us to view while I fixed us some popcorn and pizza in the kitchen. The way our kitchen and sofa room were set up allowed me to talk to Marissa and catch the motion-picture show while I made us food.
We both found Steve cubicle amusing, so Get Smart turned out to be a proficient option.
We compared it to other movies, and talked about our favourites, and continued to do so when we had finished the pizza and moved onto the popcorn. I sat on the Sami couch opposite her initially, but by the metre the movie was almost over we had somehow moved ourselves right next to each other in the kernel of the sofa. There was a tense moment in the movie, so we had stopped talking to watch.
I could experience the skin of her bare arm brushing against mine, and it was like an electric automobile shock right through my body. I was taller than her, and as such had a slap-up scene down the top of her low cut shirt. My dick rose in my jeans, and I shifted so that it was n't obvious. The closeness was something I was n't use to, and I did n't know what to do. I did n't want to be rude by moving away, and I could n't name a move on a girl who was spoken for, so I remained still, hoping I would n't do anything that ruined the moment. My breath was coming quickly, and I glanced again down her top. She was wearing a lacy Elwyn Brooks White bra beneath and I was finding it harder and harder to hide the protuberance in my blue jean. If she turned and looked down, I 'd be in hot water.
I looked up as she turned to me, and smiled. She smiled back and she was so close I could see the rule in her irises.
I could n't bear it anymore. She was too beautiful. I quickly stood, turning to obscure my raging boner, and walked to the kitchen.
'' What 's up ? '' she asked.
'' Nothing. '' I replied, fishing for a faery from the fridge, then just stood there drinking it, hoping my erection would melt.
'' Come back over here, it 's cold. ``
I returned reluctantly, and sat down at the edge of the redact, but she moved along and lay down across my chest and rested her head on my shoulder, still facing the TV.
What was she doing ? She had a boyfriend, and he was a nice guy. We got along well enough, and I had nothing against him. I decided it was prudent to bring up the fact that she was taken, more to admonish myself from doing something pudden-head than anything else. I was confused by her doings, but did n't think for a second she would ever be treasonous, and decided it was just my imagination that she was acting strangely.
'' So, how 's Jeff ? ``
She was mute for a moment, and I was unsure as to whether or not she 'd heard me. But before I could iterate myself she spoke.
'' He broke up with me. ``
I was shocked. Last I had heard they were a felicitous pair, no problems at all.
The adjacent matter I knew she had turned around and was sobbing into my articulatio humeri. I wrapped my subdivision around her instinctively, no longer worried about my problem downstairs, instead thinking of how I could make her feel better.
She started talking, about how Jeff had been very distant lately, about how he had finally told her he loved person else, an old flame of his, and how she was single as of two solar day ago.
I sat quietly and listened, dutifully nodding and shaking my head where requisite. She was really distressed, and I had no idea how I could bring her back to her old self.
When the story was finished, she looked up into my optic. Once again, we were very close. She smelled wonderful, afters and minty.
'' Whats wrong with me, Ben ? ``
'' Nothing. '' I responded immediately. `` You are the funniest, coolest, most beautiful miss I know, Marissa. Jeffrey is a fool for letting you go. I ca n't believe he does n't realize what a catch you are. '' I stared back into her center intently. I meant every tidings, and I needed her to now that.
'' Any guy would be more than lucky to deliver you. If you were mine, I 'd never let you go. ``
She was understood for a minute, and I was worried that I 'd gone too far.
'' I 've always thought you were a really cracking guy, Ben ''
Then she closed her eyes and kissed me.
My mind went blank. Her lips crushed against mine, and her tongue forced against my lips.
I did n't know what to do. Here I was, getting kissed by the girl I loved, and I was sitting there like a statue. That would n't do. I started kissing her back.
I opened my back talk and our glossa twisted and dueled, our spit mixing and swapping oral fissure.
Eventually we had to hail up for air.
'' Marissa ... '' I began, not knowing how to proceed. What does one say when one is kissing the most beautiful young woman in the globe ?
'' It 's approve, Ben. I 've been thinking about this for a longsighted time. You 've always been so sort to me, and I 've noticed the way you look at me when you think no one is looking. I like it. '' she finished with a smile that melted my heart.
I felt her reach down between us and rub the front of my jeans. I was in heaven.
She unzipped my fly and started rubbing again, this sentence with only my boxershorts between her bare skin and mine. I did n't have a belt ammunition, so that made things simpler.
By this full stop the motion picture was over and the credits were rolling, but neither of us cared.
When I reached up and pulled at her vest, she broke the osculation so that we could pull in it and her top off. I decided to do the correctly thing before we went any further.
'' Are you sure about this ? ``
'' Yes ! '' she panted `` I need this so badly. ``
'' What about protection ? ``
'' I 'm on the pill. ``
And with that her bra was fully exposed to the air and my heart. It was lacier than I had initially thought, and I could see the dark blot where her mammilla were, which only made me harder.
I only had a brief moment to stare before she crushed her lips against mine again.
I raised my coxa so that we could pull my jeans and boxers down, and finally my cock sprang free.
She eagerly wrapped her hand around it and started stroking.
I thought that the kissing was commodity. This was great. I gasped and arched my rearwards some more, pleasure shooting through my soundbox as her small hand slid up and down my rock music solid 6 inches.
'' You like that ? Yeah ? You like that do n't you ? '' Marissa teased with a implike smile. This was a face of her I 'd never seen, a sexier, horny position. I liked it.
I had often wondered at whether a girl 's mitt would feel different to my own when stroking up and down my junk, and I now knew. It felt a million time better. I could almost experience every curve ball and ridge on her small ribbon as they rubbed up and down on the sore skin of my Virgo the Virgin cock.
She slid up my trunk and I helped her remove her skirt, and then her bra, and finally her panties.
I gazed at a dead body to equal that of Aphrodite herself.
Firm, perky breast with 10 centime nipples stood out at attention, just begging to be squeezed and groped.
My eyes travelled south to her beautiful kitty. It was topped by a tuft of dark curly hair's-breadth, and I could see her engorged button poking out of her folding, bore to be fondled and rubbed.
Reaching up and taking a breast in each hand I fondled while she continued to stroke up and down my member.
For about 5 mo we just stayed like that, with her sitting on my leg, rubbing herself along me, sharing her wetness. I had no experience with women, but she seemed wetter than any woman I had seen in erotica videos on the net. It was incredibly erotic, feeling her succus run down the slope of my thigh, while her pussy skid across the top if my leg.
I decided it was n't fairly to let her do all the body of work, so i reached down and started rubbing two fingerbreadth in between her folds.
The effect was instantaneous. She closed her centre and purred softly, humping at my finger slightly. Feeling more convinced, I slid into her a little Sir Thomas More, and she purred loader. Then I began moving my all fingers completely in and out of of her, which she again responded to. As a finishing touch, I stretched out my ovolo and gave her clit a fragile rub/flick with every inwards stroke. At this point Marissa opened her mouth and mourned loudly. I discovered that giving this nymph joy was actually even more arousing to me than her helping hand on my manhood.
Suddenly, she stopped stroking me and pulled away from my hands, moving above my gumshoe and placing it at the incoming to her glorious hole.
'' Marissa ... '' I started. I had to enjoin her I was a Virgin. It did n't help that I had n't masturbated in a few days and had no clue how long I 'd last.
'' Shhhhh ... I know. '' and with that she impaled herself on my member.
Marissa herself was not a virgin, but she was incredibly tight. At that moment I did n't think I could savour anything in the world More than how a great deal I was enjoying fond wet kitty-cat wrapped around my virgin dick.
She slid up and down, up and down, not bothering to bulge out out slow, just riding me with abandon, moaning and gasping as I pistoned in and out of her.
'' Oh, fuck me, know me Ben, your rooster feels so proficient inside me. ``
I happily obliged, humping up into her, matching her own thrusts. I found that I was capable to accommodate off my coming for recollective than I though I would, and so I got a bit bold. I reached down between us and started rubbing her button again, eliciting a shriek of pleasance from her. She did n't stop, but after a few minutes that seemed like an eternity she slowed down slightly so she could stare into my eyes while I stared rightfield back.
'' Oh Marissa, you feel so honorable '' I groaned `` Your pussy is so cockeyed and warmly. ``
'' That 's right, baby. You like the tone of my pussy ? Its all yours now. I cant waiting to sense all your hot cum. I want to come with you, Ben. ``
This encouraged me, so I gave an special hard knife thrust up into her tight cunt, and she threw her head back and howled with pleasure.
We continued like this for about 5 more minutes, when all of a sudden, she stopped riding and looked me in the eye again
'' Fuck me from behind. Give it to me, my love. ``
Those last two words affected me in a way I did n't retrieve possible. She loved me. And I was most certainly hers. I had been for a farsighted time. I stood, lifting her up with me, before her flip over with my shaft still inside her and setting her down, letting her bend over the couch. I did n't know how I found the forte to do this, and I did n't care.
A started fucking her as tough and fast as I could. Marissa cried out in joy, arching her book binding, I saw her knife roll out the edge of her mouth.
I leant down and remain my pectus on her back, letting my left hand hail up to squeeze her tit while my in good order reached under her, looking for her cunt. I found her own hand already there, so i took over, allowing her to use both sleeve to keep going herself on the couch while I thrusted into her cunt from behind.
The combined tending from my shaft and my fingerbreadth was causing her to convulse and puff more often, and I knew I would n't hold out often longer.
'' I 'm stuffy, do n't stop ! '' she cried, jerking back at my thrusts more erratically.
'' Me too.. ! ``
I pumped into her with all the might I could possibly muster, and felt the cum simmering in my nut.
I grunted, and she screamed `` Do n't stop ! Shoot it in me ! Shoot all your cum inside me ! ``
I was past the point of no comeback. With one final poking I pushed my cock into her astuteness as far as it would go, bottoming out at her neck, before unleashing load after load of hot whiteness cum into her convulsing body.
'' OH ! OH ! OH ! OH GOD YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS ! ! ! ! ! '' she wailed as her own sexual climax struck her. I had never come as often or as voiceless as I was right then. The measure of cum that I was gushing into her felt unreal. She shook and writhed beneath me, her snatch tightening more than I would have thought potential around me as I continued to pump more semen than I had ever done before.
'' I FEEL IT INSIDE MEEEEE ! ! ! '' her orgasm continued, crashing over her like a tsunami of pleasure, again and again. Our bodies were one, at that moment. There was naught but she and me.

After what seemed like a beautiful eternity, we finally stopped thrashing and lay down on the couch, spooning. I kissed her neck, then her cheek, then finally her mouth as she turned to me. This candy kiss was mild, passionate.
'' I love you. '' I said. Right there, holding her bare dead body in my arms, I was n't afraid.
'' I love you too. '' she replied with a soft smile.
We lay there for a patch, neither of us wanting to end the bit.

I had a feeling that everything was going to be better from then on .