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I glanced across at her and laughed. She was pulling a cockamamie face at me from the other side of meat of the bus, and I could n't help but giggle along with her.
Marissa was beautiful. She had long, atomic number 78 blonde hair that hung down to her berm blades, or at least she would have. At the moment it was dyed dark brown and was held in a loose bun atop her head. Her case was kind and seemed to call a skillful fourth dimension without her actually having to say anything. She had a short, slender body-build, about 5'2, and house B-cup knocker. Today she was wearing a low cut putting green top with a night, undefended vest and a floral patterned annulus. I was wearing denim and a jersey.
I had a massive crush on her, but she had a boyfriend, and I was mental object just to be her friend.
'' What are you staring me for, Ben ? '' she teased with a cheeky smiling. I could n't help but admire how lovely she was. I could n't believe I was favorable enough to make love a young woman who was so pretty and funny. And she played video games ! I was more of an XBox fan, whereas she played on-line plot like conference of Legends, but we still had that in mutual. She also had an incredibly cheeky and often muddied sensory faculty of sense of humor. She was too secure to be true. And yet there we were.
'' I was just looking at your goofy face, how about ? '' I countered with another laugh.
'' Oh, ouch. '' she said `` I do n't think I 'll ever recover from that. ``
I laughed yet again, and we continued to trade trick and friendly insult along with our early acquaintance as the bus took us house from school. I was in 11th grade along with most of my mates, but Marissa was a twelvemonth older. None of us even noticed the age conflict, we all got along so well.

We soon neared my stop, and as I stood and prepared to sidetrack with my comfortably friend Matt, the minuscule holy man opposite me looked up.
'' Oh, hey Ben ? Can I be really annoying ? ``
I was surprised, but eager to help. `` What do you require ? ``
'' fountainhead my parents are out of town and I 'm staying with a acquaintance, but she lives across town and this bus does n't go anywhere near her place. Is it alright if I borrow your speech sound and generate her a claim so she can come and pick me up from my piazza ? ``
I had no job with this, and quickly offered her my nomadic phone.
'' Thanks so much, Ben. ``
'' No problem. '' I replied with a shrug. As a skinny 17 year old Virgin who had never been in a serious kinship, I could never say no to a pretty little girl, even if I wanted to. I was n't super skinny, or large, in fact at first glimpse I was in alright material body, but I was n't especially muscly or sporty like a lot of the gym junkies I was friends with at school. I was more content to sit and read or play a TV game than complain a ball around, though I was always more than than happy to get a bit physical if the chance arose. I quite enjoyed dodgeball ( whether I was any good at it was another story altogether ) but it did n't help that I was an athsmatic. So it was no wonder girls did n't seem to see me as fellow material. I had portion of female friends, just none that saw me as potentially something more. Or so I thought.
Marissa finished speaking with her friend and gave a little hornpout that almost made me dethaw to the floor. She handed me my phone back and looked out the window.
'' So what 's the impairment ? '' I inquired.
'' Eh, my ally ca n't get to me very soon, so I 'll possess to await at my property for a few time of day before she can come and get me. ``
I saw an opportunity to drop more clock time with this stupefy young charwoman, and so I seized it without hesitation.
'' Well, you could waitress at my blank space. We could recreate some secret plan, watch some funny videos and just bum around until your booster can descend get you, then she can foot you up from there. My mum might even establish you a ride, even gentle. ``
She smiled `` That 's sweet, but is n't that a bit hard ? I would n't desire to impose. ``
I shook my head `` No imposition. Mum and Amber ( my immature sister ) would have it off you, and you know I already do. '' I almost choked. Had I just told her I loved her ? I had. Oh god.
But she did n't seem to notice, so I pushed on. `` I promise, it wo n't be that grueling. ``
'' Giggidy ! '' she said immediately, not missing chance to produce a unsporting antic. We all laughed, and she thanked me and agreed to come in to my house until her friend picked her up.
Levi had n't missed that I was taking the opportunity to spend time with Marissa, and nudged me in the ribs with his elbow as soon as she looked away.
'' Eh ? Eh ? '' he said, sounding amazingly like Eric Idle in that Monty Python sketch.
'' Shuttup ! '' I chuckled, giving him a light shove. He laughed some more, but I was aced more hassle as he was distracted by another friend of ours.
I turned back to depend at Marissa, who was gazing out the window again.
Whether she had noticed my little slip or not, I did get it on this young woman. Even if she was spoken for, I could n't help my feelings.

Upon arriving at the bus stop, I stepped out into clear air with Marissa, my best friend and his twin sister. The four of us walked to the nook where I bid the siblings Au Revoir and wandered to my own dwelling with a gorgeous goddess at my incline. The two of us joked and laughed all the way there, and I was still chuckling when I opened the door and called out through our small star sign to let my family know that I was habitation. My parents had never married, and they had split when I was 5 and my sister was 2. We lived with mum, but saw our founding father often enough. I was glad that my parents were on skilful terms, which was more than I could say for many people I know.
Our house was pocket-sized, but homely. there was just decent room for the necessity.
I wandered into the kitchen, not surprised by the lack of response, and discovered a small greenback saying that my mum and sister had gone to bide with a champion for the Night, leaving me solely with Marissa.
'' Looks like it 's just you and me for the succeeding few hr. '' I shrugged apologetically.
'' That 's fine, I 'm sure we 'll survive. ``
'' Oh, I do n't have it off, '' I replied with a smirk. `` If I decide to twist evil while we 're here I doubt there 's a lot you can do to stop me. '' I then glanced at my skinny subdivision `` Oh hold ... ''
'' Haha, oh I do n't believe I 'll be able to handle such huge muscles. '' Marissa laughed, and I laughed with her.
I asked if she wanted to watch a moving picture, and she agreed, so I put on a curious movie for us to catch while I fixed us some Zea mays everta and pizza in the kitchen. The way our kitchen and lounge room were set up allowed me to talk to Marissa and determine the picture show while I made us food.
We both found Steve carrel amusing, so Get Smart turned out to be a good pick.
We compared it to other motion-picture show, and talked about our favourites, and continued to do so when we had finished the pizza and moved onto the popcorn. I sat on the same lounge opposite her initially, but by the clock time the flick was almost over we had somehow moved ourselves right next to each other in the centre of the lounge. There was a tense mo in the motion picture, so we had stopped talking to watch.
I could experience the skin of her bare arm brushing against mine, and it was like an electric automobile shock right through my body. I was taller than her, and as such had a smashing view down the top of her low cut shirt. My cock rose in my dungaree, and I shifted so that it was n't obvious. The closeness was something I was n't use to, and I did n't know what to do. I did n't want to be rude by moving away, and I could n't make a motion on a young lady who was spoken for, so I remained still, hoping I would n't do anything that ruined the mo. My breather was coming quickly, and I glanced again down her top. She was wearing a lacy ovalbumin bra beneath and I was finding it harder and harder to hide the bulge in my jeans. If she turned and looked down, I 'd be in hot water.
I looked up as she turned to me, and smiled. She smiled back and she was so close I could see the patterns in her irises.
I could n't bear it anymore. She was too beautiful. I quickly stood, turning to hide my raging boner, and walked to the kitchen.
'' What 's up ? '' she asked.
'' cypher. '' I replied, fishing for a faerie from the electric refrigerator, then just stood there drinking it, hoping my erection would fade.
'' seminal fluid back over here, it 's cold. ``
I returned reluctantly, and sat down at the edge of the put, but she moved along and lay down across my bureau and rested her brain on my shoulder, still facing the TV.
What was she doing ? She had a boyfriend, and he was a squeamish guy. We got along well enough, and I had cypher against him. I decided it was prudent to make for up the fact that she was taken, More to discourage myself from doing something stupid than anything else. I was confused by her conduct, but did n't retrieve for a second she would ever be unfaithful, and decided it was just my resource that she was acting strangely.
'' So, how 's Jeff ? ``
She was silent for a instant, and I was uncertain as to whether or not she 'd heard me. But before I could restate myself she spoke.
'' He broke up with me. ``
I was shocked. death I had heard they were a happy distich, no problem at all.
The future thing I knew she had turned around and was sobbing into my shoulder. I wrapped my arms around her instinctively, no longer worried about my problem downstairs, instead thinking of how I could piddle her feel better.
She started talking, about how Jeff had been very distant lately, about how he had finally told her he loved soul else, an old flame of his, and how she was bingle as of two days ago.
I sat quietly and listened, dutifully nodding and shaking my head where necessary. She was really straiten, and I had no idea how I could bring her back to her old self.
When the tale was finished, she looked up into my optic. Once again, we were very close. She smelled wonderful, mellifluous and minty.
'' Whats wrong with me, Ben ? ``
'' Nothing. '' I responded immediately. `` You are the funniest, cool, most beautiful young lady I know, Marissa. Jeffrey is a fool for letting you go. I ca n't conceive he does n't realise what a collar you are. '' I stared back into her optic intently. I meant every word, and I needed her to now that.
'' Any guy would be more than lucky to have you. If you were mine, I 'd never let you go. ``
She was silent for a here and now, and I was worried that I 'd gone too far.
'' I 've always thought you were a really great guy, Ben ''
Then she closed her eyes and kissed me.
My judgment went vacuous. Her back talk crushed against mine, and her natural language forced against my mouth.
I did n't roll in the hay what to do. Here I was, getting kissed by the girl I loved, and I was sitting there like a statue. That would n't do. I started kissing her back.
I opened my mouth and our tongues twisted and dueled, our saliva mix and swapping oral fissure.
Eventually we had to fall up for air.
'' Marissa ... '' I began, not knowing how to continue. What does one say when one is kissing the most beautiful missy in the mankind ?
'' It 's ok, Ben. I 've been thinking about this for a retentive time. You 've always been so sort to me, and I 've noticed the way you look at me when you think no one is looking. I like it. '' she finished with a smile that melted my heart.
I felt her reach down between us and rub the front of my dungaree. I was in heaven.
She unzipped my fly and started rubbing again, this time with only my boxers between her bare peel and mine. I did n't cause a bash, so that made things simpler.
By this stop the movie was over and the credits were rolling, but neither of us cared.
When I reached up and pulled at her vest, she broke the candy kiss so that we could pull it and her top off. I decided to do the right matter before we went any further.
'' Are you sure about this ? ``
'' Yes ! '' she panted `` I need this so badly. ``
'' What about auspices ? ``
'' I 'm on the pill. ``
And with that her bra was fully exposed to the air and my heart. It was lacier than I had initially thought, and I could see the dreary spots where her nipple were, which only made me harder.
I only had a brief moment to stare before she crushed her lips against mine again.
I raised my hips so that we could pull my blue jean and boxers down, and finally my cock sprang free.
She eagerly wrapped her hand around it and started stroking.
I thought that the hugging was good. This was great. I gasped and arched my rearwards some more, pleasure shooting through my torso as her pocket-size hand slid up and down my rock solid 6 inches.
'' You like that ? Yeah ? You like that do n't you ? '' Marissa teased with a mischievous grin. This was a slope of her I 'd never seen, a sexier, hornier side of meat. I liked it.
I had often wondered at whether a girl 's hand would feel unlike to my own when stroking up and down my junk, and I now knew. It felt a million times better. I could almost finger every curve and rooftree on her little ribbon as they rubbed up and down on the sensitive cutis of my virgin cock.
She slid up my soundbox and I helped her absent her skirt, and then her bra, and finally her panties.
I gazed at a dead body to rival that of Aphrodite herself.
firm, perky bosom with 10 centime nipples stood out at attention, just begging to be squeezed and groped.
My middle travelled south to her beautiful twat. It was topped by a tuft of dark curly hair, and I could see her stuff clit poking out of her fold, tidal bore to be fondled and rubbed.
Reaching up and taking a tit in each hand I fondled while she continued to stroke up and down my member.
For about 5 minutes we just stayed like that, with her sitting on my leg, rubbing herself along me, sharing her wetness. I had no experience with fair sex, but she seemed wetter than any woman I had seen in pornography picture on the net. It was incredibly erotic, feeling her juices run down the face of my thigh, while her pussy slid across the top if my leg.
I decided it was n't fair to let her do all the study, so i reached down and started rubbing two fingerbreadth in between her folds.
The effect was instantaneous. She closed her eyes and purred softly, humping at my fingerbreadth slightly. Feeling more confident, I slid into her a minuscule more, and she purred loader. Then I began moving my unhurt fingers completely in and out of of her, which she again responded to. As a finishing touch, I stretched out my pollex and gave her clit a little rub/flick with every inwards CVA. At this point Marissa opened her oral fissure and mourned loudly. I discovered that giving this houri pleasure was actually even more arousing to me than her paw on my manhood.
Suddenly, she stopped stroking me and pulled away from my work force, moving above my dick and placing it at the entranceway to her splendid hole.
'' Marissa ... '' I started. I had to secern her I was a virgin. It did n't help that I had n't masturbated in a few twenty-four hour period and had no clew how long I 'd last.
'' Shhhhh ... I know. '' and with that she impaled herself on my member.
Marissa herself was not a Virgo, but she was incredibly tight. At that bit I did n't think I could savour anything in the humans to a greater extent than how much I was enjoying warm up wet pussy wrapped around my virgin dick.
She slid up and down, up and down, not bothering to start out behind, just riding me with wildness, moaning and gasping as I pistoned in and out of her.
'' Oh, fuck me, fuck me Ben, your cock feels so good inside me. ``
I happily obliged, humping up into her, matching her own driving force. I found that I was able-bodied to hold off my climax for farseeing than I though I would, and so I got a bit bold. I reached down between us and started rubbing her clit again, eliciting a screaming of pleasure from her. She did n't kibosh, but after a few minutes that seemed like an timelessness she slowed down slightly so she could gaze into my eyes while I stared right back.
'' Oh Marissa, you feel so good '' I groaned `` Your pussy is so miserly and fond. ``
'' That 's aright, babe. You like the tone of my snatch ? Its all yours now. I cant hold to feel all your hot cum. I want to add up with you, Ben. ``
This encouraged me, so I gave an special hard drive up into her tight bitch, and she threw her straits back and howled with pleasure.
We continued like this for about 5 more than minutes, when all of a sudden, she stopped riding and looked me in the eye again
'' piece of tail me from behind. fall in it to me, my love. ``
Those finally two words affected me in a way I did n't think possible. She loved me. And I was most certainly hers. I had been for a prospicient time. I stood, lifting her up with me, before her pass over with my hawkshaw still inside her and setting her down, letting her fold over the frame. I did n't eff how I found the specialty to do this, and I did n't care.
A started fucking her as grueling and fast as I could. Marissa cried out in pleasure, arching her spinal column, I saw her tongue rolling out the edge of her mouth.
I leant down and reside my chest on her back, letting my allow hand issue forth up to squeeze her tit while my right reached under her, looking for her pussy. I found her own hired man already there, so i took over, allowing her to use both sleeve to confirm herself on the lounge while I thrusted into her puss from behind.
The unite attention from my dick and my fingers was causing her to convulse and gasp more often, and I knew I would n't last a good deal longer.
'' I 'm finale, do n't barricade ! '' she cried, jerking back at my drive more erratically.
'' Me too.. ! ``
I pumped into her with all the might I could possibly come up, and felt the cum boiling in my balls.
I grunted, and she screamed `` Do n't give up ! Shoot it in me ! Shoot all your cum inside me ! ``
I was past the distributor point of no return. With one final knife thrust I pushed my prick into her depth as far as it would go, bottoming out at her cervix, before unleashing incumbrance after load of hot white cum into her convulsing body.
'' OH ! OH ! OH ! OH GOD YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS ! ! ! ! ! '' she wailed as her own coming struck her. I had never come as much or as difficult as I was rightfield then. The amount of cum that I was gushing into her felt unreal. She shook and writhed beneath me, her pussy tightening More than I would have thought possible around me as I continued to pump more semen than I had ever done before.
'' I FEEL IT inside MEEEEE ! ! ! '' her orgasm continued, crashing over her like a tsunami of joy, again and again. Our bodies were one, at that consequence. There was zip but she and me.

After what seemed like a beautiful eternity, we finally stopped thrashing and lay down on the couch, spooning. I kissed her neck, then her nerve, then finally her lips as she turned to me. This kiss was soft, passionate.
'' I love you. '' I said. Right there, holding her defenseless dead body in my subdivision, I was n't afraid.
'' I love you too. '' she replied with a cushy smile.
We lay there for a while, neither of us wanting to end the moment.

I had a look that everything was going to be better from then on .