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I glanced across at her and laughed. She was pulling a slaphappy face at me from the other side of the bus, and I could n't aid but giggle along with her.
Marissa was beautiful. She had long, atomic number 78 blonde hair that hung down to her articulatio humeri blades, or at to the lowest degree she would throw. At the moment it was dyed moody John Brown and was held in a loosen bun atop her drumhead. Her face was sort and seemed to prognosticate a commodity time without her actually having to say anything. She had a brusk, slender material body, about 5'2, and firm B-cup breasts. Today she was wearing a low cut putting surface top with a darkness, open vest and a floral patterned skirt. I was wearing jeans and a t-shirt.
I had a massive crush on her, but she had a boyfriend, and I was contentedness just to be her friend.
'' What are you staring me for, Ben ? '' she teased with a cheeky smile. I could n't help but admire how adorable she was. I could n't believe I was lucky enough to know a girlfriend who was so pretty and good story. And she played television games ! I was more of an XBox fan, whereas she played online games like conference of Legends, but we still had that in mutual. She also had an incredibly cheeky and often unsporting sensory faculty of temper. She was too good to be true. And yet there we were.
'' I was just looking at your goofy face, how about ? '' I countered with another laugh.
'' Oh, ouch. '' she said `` I do n't conceive I 'll ever go back from that. ``
I laughed yet again, and we continued to sell jokes and friendly affront along with our other friends as the bus took us home from school. I was in 11th grade along with nigh of my mates, but Marissa was a year older. None of us even noticed the age deviation, we all got along so well.

We soon neared my stop, and as I stood and prepared to depart with my in force friend Matt, the small angel opposite me looked up.
'' Oh, hey Ben ? Can I be really annoying ? ``
I was surprised, but eager to help. `` What do you need ? ``
'' Well my parents are out of townspeople and I 'm staying with a acquaintance, but she lives across town and this bus does n't go anywhere near her place. Is it alright if I borrow your phone and give her a call so she can come and break up me up from my place ? ``
I had no problem with this, and quickly offered her my roving phone.
'' Thanks so much, Ben. ``
'' No trouble. '' I replied with a shrug. As a skinny 17 year old Virgo the Virgin who had never been in a grievous relationship, I could never say no to a pretty girl, even if I wanted to. I was n't tops skinny, or turgid, in fact at first off glimpse I was in alright chassis, but I was n't especially muscly or sporty like a lot of the gym junkies I was friends with at shoal. I was more substance to sit and read or toy a video recording secret plan than kvetch a bollock around, though I was always more than happy to get a bit physical if the opportunity arose. I quite enjoyed dodgeball ( whether I was any honest at it was another story altogether ) but it did n't help that I was an athsmatic. So it was no wonder girls did n't seem to see me as boyfriend cloth. I had mess of female friends, just none that saw me as potentially something more. Or so I thought.
Marissa finished speaking with her ally and gave a petty eelpout that almost made me unfreeze to the floor. She handed me my earpiece back and looked out the window.
'' So what 's the harm ? '' I inquired.
'' Eh, my acquaintance ca n't get to me very soon, so I 'll accept to wait at my property for a few 60 minutes before she can come and get me. ``
I saw an opportunity to pass more metre with this amazing unseasoned womanhood, and so I seized it without hesitation.
'' Well, you could expect at my place. We could play some games, watch some funny TV and just bum around until your friend can come get you, then she can pick you up from there. My mum might even cave in you a drive, even easier. ``
She smiled `` That 's sweet, but is n't that a bit hard ? I would n't want to impose. ``
I shook my head teacher `` No imposition. Mum and amber ( my untried sister ) would jazz you, and you know I already do. '' I almost choked. Had I just told her I loved her ? I had. Oh god.
But she did n't seem to notice, so I pushed on. `` I promise, it wo n't be that voiceless. ``
'' Giggidy ! '' she said immediately, not missing chance to make a dirty joke. We all laughed, and she thanked me and agreed to fall to my house until her friend picked her up.
Matthew had n't missed that I was taking the opportunity to drop sentence with Marissa, and nudged me in the ribs with his elbow as soon as she looked away.
'' Eh ? Eh ? '' he said, sounding amazingly like Eric Idle in that Monty Python sketch.
'' Shuttup ! '' I chuckled, giving him a twinkle shove. He laughed some more, but I was aced more hassle as he was distracted by another supporter of ours.
I turned back to appear at Marissa, who was gazing out the window again.
Whether she had noticed my little slip or not, I did love this girl. Even if she was spoken for, I could n't help my feelings.

Upon arriving at the bus full point, I stepped out into opened air with Marissa, my best friend and his twin sister. The four of us walked to the corner where I bid the sib Au Revoir and wandered to my own base with a gorgeous goddess at my side. The two of us joked and laughed all the way there, and I was still chuckling when I opened the door and called out through our belittled planetary house to let my crime syndicate know that I was plate. My parents had never married, and they had split when I was 5 and my sister was 2. We lived with mum, but saw our Father-God often enough. I was glad that my parents were on safe terms, which was more than I could say for many hoi polloi I know.
Our house was small, but homely. there was just sufficiency room for the essentials.
I wandered into the kitchen, not surprised by the lack of response, and discovered a pocket-size note saying that my mum and sister had gone to stay with a acquaintance for the night, leaving me unequaled with Marissa.
'' Looks like it 's just you and me for the next few minute. '' I shrugged apologetically.
'' That 's ok, I 'm surely we 'll survive. ``
'' Oh, I do n't bed, '' I replied with a smirk. `` If I decide to turn malefic while we 're here I doubt there 's a lot you can do to stop me. '' I then glanced at my skinny arms `` Oh delay ... ''
'' Haha, oh I do n't cogitate I 'll be able to treat such immense muscles. '' Marissa laughed, and I laughed with her.
I asked if she wanted to watch a movie, and she agreed, so I put on a rum movie for us to watch while I fixed us some popcorn and pizza in the kitchen. The way our kitchen and waiting room room were set up allowed me to talk to Marissa and see the movie while I made us food.
We both found Steve carrel amusing, so Get smart turned out to be a good choice.
We compared it to other movies, and talked about our favourites, and continued to do so when we had finished the pizza pie and moved onto the popcorn. I sat on the Saami put opposite her initially, but by the metre the movie was almost over we had somehow moved ourselves right next to each early in the centre of the sofa. There was a tense instant in the movie, so we had stopped talking to watch.
I could feel the skin of her bare arm brush against mine, and it was like an galvanic seismic disturbance right through my body. I was taller than her, and as such had a great view down the top of her low cut shirt. My stopcock rose in my jeans, and I shifted so that it was n't obvious. The intimacy was something I was n't use to, and I did n't know what to do. I did n't want to be rude by moving away, and I could n't take a leak a motility on a female child who was spoken for, so I remained still, hoping I would n't do anything that ruined the moment. My breath was coming quickly, and I glanced again down her top. She was wearing a lacy white bra beneath and I was finding it harder and harder to enshroud the bump in my jean. If she turned and looked down, I 'd be in hot water.
I looked up as she turned to me, and smiled. She smiled back and she was so shut I could see the patterns in her irises.
I could n't bear it anymore. She was too beautiful. I quickly stood, turning to hide my raging bloomer, and walked to the kitchen.
'' What 's up ? '' she asked.
'' Nothing. '' I replied, fishing for a fay from the electric refrigerator, then just stand there drinking it, hoping my erection would pass.
'' ejaculate back over here, it 's cold. ``
I returned reluctantly, and sat down at the edge of the couch, but she moved along and lay down across my chest of drawers and rested her head on my shoulder joint, still facing the TV.
What was she doing ? She had a swain, and he was a nice guy. We got along well enough, and I had nothing against him. I decided it was prudent to add up the fact that she was taken, Sir Thomas More to discourage myself from doing something stupid than anything else. I was confused by her behavior, but did n't consider for a endorsement she would ever be unfaithful, and decided it was just my imagination that she was acting strangely.
'' So, how 's Jeff ? ``
She was unsounded for a moment, and I was incertain as to whether or not she 'd heard me. But before I could repeat myself she spoke.
'' He broke up with me. ``
I was shocked. live I had heard they were a felicitous duad, no problems at all.
The following matter I knew she had turned around and was sobbing into my shoulder. I wrapped my arms around her instinctively, no longer worried about my problem downstairs, instead thinking of how I could make her feel better.
She started talking, about how Jeff had been very distant lately, about how he had finally told her he loved somebody else, an old fire of his, and how she was single as of two days ago.
I sat quietly and listened, dutifully nodding and shaking my mind where necessary. She was really dysphoric, and I had no idea how I could bring her back to her old self.
When the report was finished, she looked up into my eyes. Once again, we were very close. She smelled wonderful, sweet and minty.
'' Whats wrong with me, Ben ? ``
'' nix. '' I responded immediately. `` You are the funny, coolheaded, most beautiful girl I know, Marissa. Jeffrey is a fool for letting you go. I ca n't conceive he does n't realize what a catch you are. '' I stared back into her center intently. I meant every word, and I needed her to now that.
'' Any guy would be more than lucky to deliver you. If you were mine, I 'd never let you go. ``
She was silent for a moment, and I was worried that I 'd gone too far.
'' I 've always thought you were a really great guy, Ben ''
Then she closed her center and kissed me.
My creative thinker went blank. Her brim crushed against mine, and her tongue forced against my lips.
I did n't know what to do. Here I was, getting kissed by the girl I loved, and I was sitting there like a statue. That would n't do. I started kissing her back.
I opened my back talk and our tongues twisted and dueled, our spittle mixing and swapping back talk.
Eventually we had to do up for air.
'' Marissa ... '' I began, not knowing how to proceed. What does one say when one is kissing the most beautiful miss in the world ?
'' It 's okey, Ben. I 've been thinking about this for a retentive time. You 've always been so kind to me, and I 've noticed the way you look at me when you think no one is looking. I like it. '' she finished with a grinning that melted my heart.
I felt her reach down between us and rub the social movement of my dungaree. I was in heaven.
She unzipped my fly and started rubbing again, this clip with only my boxers between her bare pelt and mine. I did n't give birth a belt, so that made things simpler.
By this point the movie was over and the acknowledgment were rolling, but neither of us cared.
When I reached up and pulled at her waistcoat, she broke the kiss so that we could attract it and her top off. I decided to do the aright matter before we went any further.
'' Are you sure about this ? ``
'' Yes ! '' she panted `` I need this so badly. ``
'' What about protection ? ``
'' I 'm on the pill. ``
And with that her bra was fully exposed to the air and my eyes. It was lacier than I had initially thought, and I could see the nighttime floater where her nipples were, which only made me harder.
I only had a brief import to gaze before she crushed her lip against mine again.
I raised my hips so that we could pull my blue jean and boxer down, and finally my cock sprang free people.
She eagerly wrapped her hand around it and started stroking.
I thought that the kissing was practiced. This was cracking. I gasped and arched my back some more, joy shooting through my eubstance as her small hand slid up and down my careen solid 6 inches.
'' You like that ? Yeah ? You like that do n't you ? '' Marissa teased with a mischievous smile. This was a face of her I 'd never seen, a sexier, hornier side. I liked it.
I had often wondered at whether a girl 's manus would find different to my own when stroking up and down my junk, and I now knew. It felt a million times better. I could almost feel every curve and ridge on her small palms as they rubbed up and down on the medium skin of my virgin cock.
She slid up my eubstance and I helped her remove her chick, and then her bra, and finally her panties.
I gazed at a physical structure to rival that of Cytherea herself.
house, perky breast with 10 penny nipples stood out at attention, just begging to be squeezed and groped.
My eye travelled south to her beautiful pussy. It was topped by a tussock of moody curly hair, and I could see her engorged clit poking out of her flexure, eager to be fondled and rubbed.
Reaching up and taking a titty in each hired man I fondled while she continued to stroke up and down my member.
For about 5 hour we just stayed like that, with her sitting on my leg, rubbing herself along me, sharing her wetness. I had no experience with women, but she seemed blind drunk than any woman I had seen in porn videos on the net. It was incredibly erotic, feeling her succus run down the incline of my thigh, while her pussy slue across the top if my leg.
I decided it was n't fair to let her do all the work, so i reached down and started rubbing two fingerbreadth in between her folds.
The consequence was instantaneous. She closed her eye and purred softly, humping at my finger slightly. Feeling more confident, I slid into her a lilliputian more, and she purred docker. Then I began moving my whole fingers completely in and out of of her, which she again responded to. As a finishing touch, I stretched out my quarter round and gave her clit a little rub/flick with every inwards stroke. At this point Marissa opened her rima oris and mourned loudly. I discovered that giving this nymph delight was actually even more arousing to me than her hands on my manhood.
Suddenly, she stopped stroking me and pulled away from my hands, moving above my prick and placing it at the entrance to her splendiferous hole.
'' Marissa ... '' I started. I had to tell her I was a Virgin. It did n't assist that I had n't masturbated in a few daytime and had no clue how long I 'd last.
'' Shhhhh ... I know. '' and with that she impaled herself on my member.
Marissa herself was not a virgin, but she was incredibly pixilated. At that minute I did n't intend I could enjoy anything in the world more than how practically I was enjoying warm wet puss wrapped around my virgin dick.
She slid up and down, up and down, not bothering to lead off out slow, just riding me with abandon, moaning and gasping as I pistoned in and out of her.
'' Oh, fuck me, fuck me Ben, your cock flavor so honest inside me. ``
I happily obliged, humping up into her, matching her own knife thrust. I found that I was able-bodied to view as off my orgasm for longer than I though I would, and so I got a bit bold. I reached down between us and started rubbing her clit again, eliciting a shriek of pleasure from her. She did n't kibosh, but after a few minutes that seemed like an eternity she slowed down slightly so she could stare into my eyes while I stared right back.
'' Oh Marissa, you feel so respectable '' I groaned `` Your pussy is so tight and warm. ``
'' That 's justly, baby. You like the spirit of my kitty ? Its all yours now. I cant waiting to feel all your hot cum. I want to follow with you, Ben. ``
This encouraged me, so I gave an special hard jab up into her sloshed cunt, and she threw her caput back and howled with pleasure.
We continued like this for about 5 to a greater extent moment, when all of a sudden, she stopped riding and looked me in the eye again
'' Fuck me from behind. pay it to me, my making love. ``
Those last two words affected me in a way I did n't intend possible. She loved me. And I was most certainly hers. I had been for a long time. I stood, lifting her up with me, before her toss over with my dick still inside her and setting her down feather, letting her flexure over the couch. I did n't get laid how I found the posture to do this, and I did n't care.
A started fucking her as hard and loyal as I could. Marissa cried out in pleasure, arching her binding, I saw her tongue roller out the edge of her mouth.
I leant down and rested my chest on her back, letting my left hand come up to squeeze her tit while my right reached under her, looking for her puss. I found her own hand already there, so i took over, allowing her to use both arms to support herself on the couch while I thrusted into her bitch from behind.
The combined attention from my dick and my fingers was causing her to convulse and gasp more often, and I knew I would n't last-place much longer.
'' I 'm close, do n't quit ! '' she cried, jerking back at my thrusts more erratically.
'' Me too.. ! ``
I pumped into her with all the might I could possibly muster, and felt the cum boiling in my balls.
I grunted, and she screamed `` Do n't block off ! Shoot it in me ! Shoot all your cum inside me ! ``
I was past the level of no return. With one concluding thrust I pushed my hammer into her depths as far as it would go, bottoming out at her cervix, before unleashing load after incumbrance of hot lily-white cum into her convulsing body.
'' OH ! OH ! OH ! OH GOD YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS ! ! ! ! ! '' she wailed as her own orgasm struck her. I had never come as lots or as operose as I was right on then. The amount of cum that I was gushing into her feel unreal. She shook and writhed beneath me, her twat tightening more than I would have thought possible around me as I continued to pump more semen than I had ever done before.
'' I FEEL IT INSIDE MEEEEE ! ! ! '' her orgasm continued, crashing over her like a tsunami of joy, again and again. Our bodies were one, at that moment. There was cypher but she and me.

After what seemed like a beautiful eternity, we finally stopped thrashing and lay down on the couch, spooning. I kissed her neck, then her cheek, then finally her lips as she turned to me. This kiss was easygoing, passionate.
'' I love you. '' I said. right hand there, holding her naked consistency in my arms, I was n't afraid.
'' I love you too. '' she replied with a diffused smile.
We lay there for a while, neither of us wanting to end the moment.

I had a feeling that everything was going to be better from then on .