Ramona & Gabriel Pt1 ( Gabriel )


Authors note : This theatrical role was supposed to be the kickoff share one but It was not published. The story is really told from Gabriels perspective but I decided it might be fun to add a little more info from Ramona 's flip prospective ; hence the alternating voice one.. Again I repeat I am not a writer and I am not writing a book. I simply like reading and thought I'd give this a go for fun. So criticize if you must, I can deal it ; ) If you are like me and can't get emotionally invested in characters without a bit of plunk for narration then this might be for you. I'm not sure where this story is going but I will separate it from two perspectives in multiple parts. I will try to upload once a hebdomad. Not every part will have got sex but we'll get there.

Ramona was an East seacoast goddess with long, dark, tangling, curly hair. I'd lost a ring once running my fingers through those sonant, spirals. I took her to the beach once and I remember her scent mixed with the salt water air was like an aphrodisiac on steroids. And her body was always warm and easygoing to the tactile sensation, inside and out. Her typeface was strong and defined which meant she had a serious case of"resting cunt face"but her saturnine eyes gave away her persuasion.

I was 14 when her father hired me under the table to keep the car-mechanic shop class clean and organized. She was this awkward, snot-nosed girl with a bad Tootsie Pop dependance, wearing a Star Wars in writing T-shirt with badly drawn Sharpie tattoos going up her radiocarpal joint. There was oil and grease and rust putz but there were viscous sucker wrappers everywhere. She would come in and sit in her dad's federal agency after shoal, walk around and touch things, and bother the shit out of Tim with haunt conversation, though he was genteel about it. And everywhere she went she left a colorful candy wrapper.

After a long hot day of organizing puppet, cleaning out the fluids stock certificate and picking up about 20 of those sugarcoat wrappers, including some behind the miniskirt electric refrigerator that were probably from calendar month ago, I decided I would say something.

"common sage. Do you know where the chicken feed can is ?"I asked interrupting her current conversation with Tim. She turned and looked at me through narrowed eyes, sensing the set up.

"Yep."She said pointing to the one beside me with her burnished Orange tootsie.

"So, why is it that your deoxyephedrine never ends up in one of them ?"I asked, irritated. She continued to stare at me popping the candy back in her mouth. After about 20 moment I realized that I wasn't going to get an answer so I sighed and turned away muttering"forget about it."

But I never saw another tootsie wrapper lying about. So we never brought it up again. Our interaction over the future couplet of class was minimum. We went to different school and when you are a kid, two and a half years age difference might as well be 100. But when we were at the shop her dad would teach us matter and make us take on prisonbreak together. We spent two summertime working for her dad in that air condition-less tin box of a auto-mechanic shop and things were always platonic, though by that prison term I'd already lost my virginity. I just never thought of her in that way. Not until the end of summer break our tertiary year. I was XVI and it wasn't until that last hebdomad of summer before sophomore year that I even noticed Ramona was female. It quickly became a misdirection that was getting laborious to hide.

"You aren't supposed to be smoking."She said startling me slightly. I looked at her and blew out a liquid plume of smoke.

"You aren't supposed to be at the shop this late."I said taking another drag.

"I was at Diana's but her parents started yelling again, so I left."She came and leaned against the wall beside me so I put out the difference of my cigarette."Do you want to play checkers ?"She asked after a few moments of silence. I laughed.

"You have nada else left to bet."I said shoving at her arm."Why do you like to fall back so a good deal ?"

"I don't always lose."She defended."I won twice on Sunday. And I still have a few bucks."I knew she didn't. She got an allowance of xx dollars a week. All of which she'd lost to me two daytime before. A bad gambling habit at the age of 15. Out came the checkers display panel, after all she was paying for my smoking habit.

"Are you still dating Wendy ?"She asked taking her next number.

"Yes. Why ? Are you jealous ?"I goaded. She glared at me.

"No, I was just wondering who the daughter in the jeep was."She said casually. I knew she was trying to throw me off, and she knew I knew that she was.

"That was good will. She's just a friend."I said wondering what all she'd seen. I made my relocation carefully.

"I don't snog my ally that way."She said."Actually it looked like you were eating her face off."She made her next move capturing three of my piece. I decided to shift tactics.

"How would you screw ? You haven't even had your first kiss yet."I said studying the board. She was winning.

"Yes I have."She lied.

"No. You haven't."I scoffed."Your parent's won't even let you attend at boys."

"So. They can't hold in what I do at school."She said defensively. Her face was turning red so I knew I had worked the right angle. I made my move.

"okeh, you know how to kiss then. If I win, you have to buss me and prove it."I watched her as I took my turn taking back control of the board.

"Eww, no."She said turning magenta.

"Then I hope you have five sawbuck like you say."



She remained silent the repose of the game watching as I crowned one Martin Luther King Jr. after another capturing each of her red bit one after another. Finally with but three of her pieces left on the board she sighed frustrated.

"You'll have to find fault something else. I don't get my allowance trough Friday."

"That's okay."I shrugged."I already told you my deal."

"I'm not kissing you."She said wrinkling her nose.

"What's the big mess ? You've done it before, it shouldn't be a problem."I took her last two pieces. She glared at me.

"Fine. I'll give you a stupid piece of tail kiss. I don't know why you want one so bad anyway."She huffed standing up.

"Language."I warned, trying not to laugh. I watched her pass over to fare sales booth beside me expectantly.

"wellspring ?"She snapped."Are you going to resist up ?"

"No."I said enjoying her irritation more than than I should have been. She could have walked away and I wouldn't have stopped or goaded her, but she would never be capable to live peacefully knowing she'd turned down a challenge from me. She leaned awkwardly forward and pressed her rim to mine, in what I assumed was meant to be a quick batch, but I held her still by the movement of her shirt and took my kickoff discernment of her. It really wasn't supposed to be good or memorable, but her sass were so mild and I could taste the strawberry mark tootsie pop she'd been nervously eating during our secret plan. She didn't pull away like I thought she would when I let go. I deepened the kiss against my better judgement pulling her down onto my knee and squeezing her waist hoping my hired man would stay still. But as her mouth began to catch on and her soft lips closed around my bottom lip I could care less where my hired man started going. I'd kissed many lip many time before. I was good at it. But this wasn't just fondling, this was like breathing air for the low gear time. My hands were in her subdued dark haircloth and she fell in deeper grabbing the battlefront of my shirt in two fist fulls. A small sound escaped her pharynx and that's when I completely lost it. I leaned back far knowing she would lean in, and lifted my knee so my leg would press between hers. My workforce found their way up her shirt and found she wasn't wearing a bra.

"Fuck."I mumbled as my lips left hers and traveled down the side of her neck. Both script grabbed at fistfuls of her and I rubbed my quarter round against the sore peaks of her nibbles. She made that sound again only it was a little more desperate this time. I felt her pelvis begin to slowly rock back and Forth River as I kissed the sensitive hollows of her neck opening. I bit softly just below her jaw and she gasped her articulatio coxae jerked and she grabbed my arms tightly. I pulled back to look at her and was amazed at what I saw. Her heart were indulgent and disbelieving at the virtuoso she was feeling and her pink and tumefy mouth was slightly opened in surprise.

"Oh my god. Did you just come in ?"I asked, instantly regretting it. She released my shirt and pushed away from me taking all the heating plant from the summer dark with her.

"What ?"She asked breathlessly, blushing deep."No."I wasn't even sure she knew what I meant but she got the musical theme.

"Ramona…"I started not sure what to say.

"I hope you enjoyed your stupid kiss. It was a dumb matter to ask for."She said slinging her bag over her shoulder in a miff."It's not like you can narrate if it was my first kiss or not."I could but I didn't say anything. She was already angry.

"Do you need a ride home ? I can-"

"No."She cut me off. And before I could say anything else she left .
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