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Chapter One

Another boring party, another bunch of tiresome people. `` Jeez, '' I thought to myself. `` I 've got to witness another job. ''

Picking up my 5th tray of Champagne, I made my way through the crowd, picking up bits and bit of a dozen conversations, none of which I could have cared less about. This group was just another ultra-conservative right-wing presidential bread and butter group trying to produce trusted their petty involvement did n't get squashed in the forthcoming election.

Across the room though, a woman had the complete attention of several men. They were laughing at a cleaning woman who was obviously very passionate about what she was saying. The womanhood continued to make the men laugh, and she was in complete controller of the whole lot of them, as if she 'd cast a spell.

I 'd seen this happen before at parties. One special mortal, invariably distaff - captivating a whole audience - invariably male. Almost intrigued enough to care, I wandered in their direction, offering broad glass and picking up empty 1. One of the men was eyeing the woman with mental rejection. `` Surely you do n't expect to make any money writing about things like that, do you ? ``

'' Why not ? '' the charwoman responded. `` Just because it is going to be based on a existent history and not be full moon of sex and lies ? Surely there must be people who are as fascinated with chronicle as I am. ``

'' I 'll secernate you one, thing. Whether you like it or not sex does betray. '' said the tall dark-haired man standing next to her. `` Really ? For starter, I DO like sex, '' said the woman with a wink. `` But Bob, if sex sells somebody's got to be buying. How much do YOU have to pay to get laid these Clarence Shepard Day Jr. ? '' The crowd erupted in boo and howl as the man blushed. `` Damn it missy, that's not what I meant, '' he tried to squall over the guffaws of the others.

I stopped to see where this was headed. girl slyly took a sip of her champagne and smiled. Something about the way she held her looking glass with just the tips of her digit. Her heart burned with, what- loudness ? fervidness ? heat ? Whatever it was I wanted to be capable to do that. moderate a group, making them hang on my every password. I was watching an artist and it looked like it was clip for the second act. Her looking glass was almost evacuate so I used the opportunity to slue in next to her and offer her a good one. She graciously accepted my glass with one bridge player and held the empty one out with the other. Our fingers touched and sparks flew between us. I was instantly turned on ! We made eye contact and the signals were not my mental imagery.

Okay, now I was really scheme !

Missy looked around the group. Bob spoke up again. `` wellspring Missy, if you like sex, why have you always ignored my advances ? I 'd be glad to show you what a man I am. '' young woman closed the gap between them and leaned right into Bob 's look until their noses were just column inch from each other. Bob swallowed hard and tried not to look down at girl 's cleavage, but he did n't manage it for very long. Everyone noticed the immediate glance down into her heart. `` break ! '' hollered one of the other guy. Everyone hooted and hollered again. `` Alright, '' girl said breathily. `` The next time I have a spare two minutes I 'll definitely call you ! '' That time it took several bit to calm them down.

'' fountainhead gentlemen, it is time for me to go, but first I need to ask the caterers a match inquiry about next workweek 's result. If you 'll rationalise me… '' and with that she motioned me to comply her into the kitchen. Like a lost puppy I followed at her blackguard.

'' Can you help me learn the relaxation of the nutrient over to my office ? I really have to get some things done tonight yet, and my stave would appreciate me feeding them. '' turd, that is NOT what I was hoping for, but I thought at least this way I might get a chance to spend some more sentence with her. `` By the way, '' missy asked. `` What is your name ? ''

'' I 'm so no-account ! '' I stumbled. `` I 'm Chris. I 'd be glad to help oneself, but the pleasure was all mine, '' I replied. And I meant it. `` I did notice the control you had over that group you were with. How do you do that ? ''

'' Oh that ? '' she asked. `` It was nix. The way to assure men is to make them intend they are God 's Special Gift to Womankind. But as attractive as you are, you already know that, do n't you ? '' She winked and gave me that sly grin again.

'' I know what it feels like when it happens,"I replied."Just not sure I could send for it up at will. You were really working them gruelling. ``

'' I know, but those people control a ridiculous measure of money in this fiddling Ithiel Town and I want WAY more than than my sightly share. I just have to convert them that my needs were their estimate. '' She smiled.

We were loading the software system into her van when she suddenly stopped and snapped her digit. `` Oh hell, I have one to a greater extent errand I have to run yet so why do n't you just taunt with me ? I 'll bring you right back, I promise. '' Like I had any desire to do anything else. And besides, she smelled serious. Really good.

We got in and started off. The country society was about 20 second outside of town. No Sooner had we gotten the doorway closed when it started to DUMP ice-cold rain. `` We just dodged that hummer, '' Missy laughed. `` I 'd give hated to see you all wet. ``

I almost said `` I 'd fuck to see YOU all wet, '' but held my clapper. But I was thinking of using my tongue to see if she WAS wet, at to the lowest degree in some places. I squirmed in my seat, suddenly cognizant that it was getting awfully warm in the van.

We got about 10 miles from the res publica club when the van just quit. `` God, I hate this thing, '' Missy said with despair in her voice. `` Can you fix it ? ``

'' What the hell makes you think I know anything about automobile ? '' I asked indignantly. I would n't even know how to get the hood open.

'' I'm sorry, it was just…oh, never mind. We 'll just cause to hold back for a car to come by. Should n't be but an minute or two… '' She let the words and their meaning roam off into the verbose night. Suddenly I felt a hand on my thigh, working its way towards my waist. I looked over at her and she leaned over, and then kissed me ever so softly. I almost had an coming right then and there. I could n't take a breather, the van was spinning and all I could do was look at her incredible dark-brown eyes. I broke the osculation and gasped for breath, my heart racing.

'' I know I'm a slight honest-to-goodness than you are, but I hope you find me attractive still, '' she said.

'' Uh, oh yeah, you are really pretty, '' I said, which was avowedly. `` I… '' I was going to say something witty, but there were fingers running along the top of my black gasp, slowly working their way down into my genital organ. I knew I was going to come if she kept it up. Her fingers were finding wisps of pubic hair and I wanted her to unbutton my quag and continue. She could sense my penury. `` Are you okay with this ? I just find you sexy as hell. ''

I blushed and turned away from her gaze. She gently pulled my mentum around and kissed me again. My pants came undone like magic, and I could finger her fingerbreadth probing, searching. I threw my pass back and arched against her hired hand. When young lady finally slid a finger across my slit I came in shuddering gasps, clenching my legs around her hired man so she could n't take her finger out of me until the muscle spasm subsided.

Just then we saw illumination in the rear-view mirror. young woman got out into the pouring rain and waved at the oncoming SUV while I tried to find the top executive of manner of speaking. The motortruck pulled up alongside and rolled down the window. `` Looks like you ladies need a hand. '' Missy looked at me, then at the driver. He was tall, blonde and nice looking. In short, just what we 'd ordered. Only not short.

Missy said `` Can you take us in to the campus ? I 've got to get this nutrient back in the fridge before it spoils. I 'll deal with the van in the morning. If I get really golden the goddamn thing wo n't still be here by then ! '' I got in the backbone, missy climbed in up front.

'' Hi, I 'm Adam. And who do I have the pleasure of helping tonight ? ''

'' This is Missy and I 'm Chris."We all shook hands. His were immense. Always a good augury.

'' We were at the regulator 's dinner tonight and the damn van quit as soon as it got good and wickedness. Thanks so much for stopping ! ``

'' No problem. I have to drive correctly by campus on the way home, but I 'd have probably taken you to Chicago if you 'd asked ! '' He winked at us. We both rolled our eyes, but then again he was cute…

Missy wasted no time asking Adam to come up with us to her government agency. `` Thank you so much for rescuing us back there. We would have been soaked in seconds walking back on foot. ''

'' Looks like you 're both still pretty wet, '' Robert Adam said, then looked at us funny, wondering if we 'd pick up the double signification.

'' As it turned out, we were both wet when you GOT there, '' young lady said with a nictitation. The double-take on disco biscuit 's face was invaluable.

'' Oh ! Maybe I should have given you some more time before stopping to help. Sorry if I interrupted something ! '' He laughed and looked at us with renewed pursuit. I could feel him checking out my 5'3 '' bod, but it was Missy 's booby that truly captivated him. I coulda slapped him. I may only be 110lbs soaking wet, but once properly motivated I can outlive any man on foot, on a bike, in the water or in bed.

'' penis, '' I muttered. `` Why do they always have to be attached to a MAN ? ''

'' What was that ? '' disco biscuit asked, not sure enough he heard what he thought he heard.

'' I think I left the Pinochet in the Van, '' I said in as heterosexual person a font as I could muster. Missy said,

`` No problem. Let me see what I can find. '' She went through a door and came back with three glasses and a bottle of Andrew Dickson White wine.
`` Jeez, '' Adam exclaimed. `` I wish I could keep a wine cellar in MY office. ''

'' Why not ? What do you do ? '' I asked.

'' I have a small garage and a raceway team. ''

'' Really ? Wow ! Are you a machinist or a device driver ? ''

'' Both, actually. I told you it was a small operation. It seems I 'm pretty unspoilt with my hands, though. '' He winked and took one of the eyeglasses. Yes, his hands looked fine. Long, strong fingers, huge palms. I was thinking of how they would feel against my titty and elsewhere. I had to agitate my weight as suddenly my pantie were way too tight.

He was leaning against the corner of the desk and I could just reach out a growing bulge in his gasp. funny remark, I had n't noticed it before. Missy came over and stood right beside me with her deal around my waist. I leaned back on the bookcase for support. God it was hot in here ! young lady ran her finger's breadth over my back, from my waistband to my shoulders. It sent quiver coursing through my body. More and Thomas More of them were headed south. I knew I was getting wet again. I needed to come again, I just was n't trusted how I was going to manage it ; but the two multitude in front of me were my best bet in a long time.

And it had been a long clip. My parents were Formosan immigrants, and we have the typical neighborhood Chinese Restaurant with bad décor and silly music. But the food is wonderful and accurately Chinese, something you do n't find very often. Our clientèle included to the highest degree of the well-to-do in Town. My mother is incredibly sexy, all 4'10 '' and 95 lbs of her. But she carries herself like a cat, and all that sensuality just flows from her like a endowment. Men are just dumbstruck by her bearing, a lot like Missy. I guess I learned some of it too, as I 'm always getting attention from men, but they usually end up being jerky.

At to the lowest degree men are light to reckon out. If they are n't horny they 're hungry. So if your man is n't chasing you around the living room, make him a sandwich ! If you want conversation, talk to your girlfriends.

I 'd been in a pair family relationship, but nothing serious. Jon was the 'artist escapist'whose liberal nontextual matter Education let him despise the conservative living he 'd never be able to give. He was a adequate visage but just could n't survive long enough to fulfil me. He 'd get all worked up, ( consisting of me coyly smiling at him ) rise on top of me, grunt and stray off just as I was starting to get into it. As soon as he 'd go to slumber ( 25 seconds after the *grunt* ) I 'd flap over and pull B.O.B. ( my stamp battery operated swain ) out of my nightstand and diddle myself to catch some Z's. But it was n't completely satisfying because I always had to be quiet. Jon had a supercalafragilistic ego that would just be CRUSHED if I told him I 'd never had an coming with him. fountainhead, I 'd had mickle next him, but he was n't conscious at the metre. Does that count then ?

What I wanted now was for someone 's glossa to explore my most intimate plica. My pantie were getting very wet and I could feel the moisture beginning to run down my thigh. There was no way I was going to waste it.

I took miss 's helping hand and walked over to where XTC was standing. I leaned up against him, entwined my fingers with his and pulled his arm around me. fille did the same on the other English. I slowly encouraged his hand towards my mammilla. When the palm of his hand hit it I gasped. He slowly cupped my breast and squeezed gently. Yup, he was good with his paw ! Oh God, this was going to be good !

I ran a finger down the front of his shirt. `` Missy, I think it is time we properly explain to this man just how appreciative we are of the drive he gave us. deal to assist me render the favor ? '' I could not consider those watchword had just come out of my oral fissure ! I 'd never been this bold before in my life, but Damn if I was going to let this chance slip by. I 'd been Miss treat Goody my totally living, but tonight I wanted to love somebody silly. mouth about being in the mightily place at the right-hand sentence ! Ole Adam was going to have the night of his life history. And then he could do with Missy what he wanted.

missy and I made racecourse down to ecstasy 's belt, which we proceeded to unbuckle. I slowly got down on my knees and inch-by-inch unzipped his pants. We were all breathing so hard it sounded like an exercise elbow room. My kernel was pounding so loud I 'm sure they could hear it too. Under his jeans his whitened cotton brief were stretched tight by his hard-on. Wow ! It was huge !

'' Yes ! '' I thought. Now, if he can only verify himself…

I brushed my buttock against the smooth fabric and Adam jumped, or rather component part of him did. I did it again. Just when my cheek touched the fabric-covered tip of his penis, it would chute and reek me in the face. I laughed and looked up at him. `` You 're so beautiful, '' he said looking down at me. `` I ca n't believe how tiny you are. '' I smiled meekly and turned my gaze away. But my hired hand kept searching out his callousness. I pulled the waistband of his short out and he sprung out of them. This affair stood straight out from his body a goodness 8 ''. It was dense and veiny and bobbed up and down with his heartbeat. I sat there with my legs folded under me and watched it waving in forepart of me. I reached up and cupped his formal, heavy and full. Pursing my back talk, I slowly took the head of him into my rima oris. Which was about all I could get in ! It felt so good, and tasted tremendous. There is something about the smell of a working man. mmmmm. Working back and forth with my lips, I massaged his orb with my bequeath hand. The former I used to unbutton my pants. I wriggled my hand down to my wetness and slither two fingerbreadth inside. I moaned on Adam 's dick, which made him puff and lunge into my face.

Suddenly I felt hands enveloping me from behind, and then I felt girl 's grand boob pressing into my back. She was on her human knee behind me and her custody were roaming all over me. I was in nirvana. Between the alcohol, lack of sex and the sexy people in the room I knew I was faithful to coming again.
Just then Missy put her chin on my shoulder and pressed her mouth to my ear. `` You have to read to share ! '' She took hold of cristal and leaned forward, pinning my head to his hip. She took him into her back talk, in after inch ! My ear was pressed against X 's interior thigh with my nose right field at the base of his cock. girl 's back talk kept getting closer and closer to his breadbasket. I could n't believe it ! She took almost the unscathed affair down her throat. I reached out with my lingua and flicked it across the base of his cock. His clump jumped as his sac tightened. I could just run the tip of my tongue around the sharpness of young lady 's lips as she wiggled her capitulum incline to side. I could see the head of Adam 's penis inside her cheek as she rubbed back and forth.

'' God young lady ! Where on earth did you learn to do that ? '' I asked in astonishment.

'' Yes, '' hug drug panted as sweat beaded up on his brow and chest. `` Who taught you that ? Can you learn Chris here ? How about my married woman ? '' He stood there panting, trying to regain his calmness. We all laughed.
'' So you like that, do you ? '' missy asked. `` Let 's just say I have been blessed with a heavy back talk and no gag reflex action. But the key is exercise. tutelage to help me keep my grade ? '' She winked up at him.

'' Anytime, anytime. '' he wheezed.

young lady went back to where she 'd been, with her typeface impaled on his rod. She worked up her speed, until she was going from just the tip to having her nose buried against his pubic off-white. She grabbed my hired man and encouraged me to massage his balls. Then she took my eye finger's breadth and pressed it against the alkali of his egg, slowly sliding back towards his ass. She was really getting into the blowjob and saliva was everywhere. She scooped some up and ran it over my finger, then pressed it against his asshole. His eyes got really wide, but he started thrusting into girl 's mouth and his breathing got really ragged. I worked my finger's breadth into his butt, and when I curled my finger forward and touched his prostrate he bellowed and came. girl pulled his cock out of her sass. Adam 's knees buckled and he grabbed both our capitulum for funding. We quickly kissed each side of his cock, so he could thrust between our lips. His maiden muscle spasm shot over miss 's shoulders, landing on her metrical unit behind her. As more and more semen oozed out of him, we took turns lapping it off the end of his cock. Every time we 'd lick the end he 'd spasm again.

Eventually Adam quit coming and he slowly went diffuse. fille grabbed my font and kissed me tough. I could try out Adam on her and it drove me wild. Our kisses became more and more passionate and our hands roamed each others dead body. I lay down, and fille crawled on top of me, crushing her vast snoot against me, flattening mine completely. She grabbed my custody and held them over my head, then kissed my neck. I could find her mound grinding into mine, making me so wet I could feel it running down the crack of my ass.

She teased me as she went further south, unbuttoning my blouse and spending sentence on each freshly exposed nipple. When she got to my stomach every sense of touch of her lips made my shin creeping. picayune gasp of pleasance escaped my rim and I was lifting my hips off the rug to meet her eager mouth.

She worked her way down to the top of my folds and ran her clapper back and forth right across the top of it, just barely touching my clitoris. I was panting and moaning like mad, wanting more. FINALLY she planted her face on my muff and used her tongue to theatrical role the tussock of long hair I left behind when shaving. She worked her knife into me and sucked my nub between her lips. I grabbed big handful of her hair's-breadth and shoved my private parts into her face. wave of Adam rolled over me and I came again. I slowly became cognisant that I 'd already had two crushing orgasm ; Missy had n't yet. Time to turn the board.

I rolled Missy off me and lay beside her on my side. I motioned for cristal to do the Sami. We each undid a few buttons and sucked the exposed boob. I took his deal and ran his fingertips down her leg and back, then undid her drawers and helped jiggle her out of them.

She was completely clean-shaven, which was a serious twist on for me. Apparently it was for XTC too, as he made some low growl noise in the book binding of his pharynx and eased his nerve down onto her tummy. Missy parted her creamy thigh and Adam settled between them, inhaling her sweetness and stroking her with just his fingertips. miss grabbed his hand and shoved two of his finger's breadth deep into herself. It did n't direct yearn for him to fancy out what she liked and continued in long strokes.

After a while I reached down and took Robert Adam 's hand and put it on my thigh. I reached over and grabbed girl 's face, pulling her towards me until we were facing each other on our side of meat. I wrapped my blazonry around young woman 's neck and driving force my knife into her brass. Our nipples found each other and sent electricity coursing between us. I could feel her hummock pressure against mine. All of a sudden young lady 's eyes got astray and she groaned sending wonderful shaking through my lips. Adam had slipped his hardening cock between young woman 's thighs and was pumping the tip along her moist folds. As he got harder it got closer and closer to my clitoris, eventually just parting my lip as he thrust his hips against Missy 's behind from behind. The tip was all lubed up from girl and the softness of the tip felt wonderful but I desperately needed more. I just needed to let fille get hers first ! I prayed to the Gods that Adam would receive one more hard-on for me.

I reached down between my peg and ran my fingertips along the underside of cristal as he thrust towards me. I increased the upward pressure until with one knife thrust I sent cristal late into fille. She cried out and then pushed back burying him deep inside her. They built up a calendar method of birth control with our pitcher touching on the upswing. I was thrusting against Missy, grinding our pubes together while Adam pounded into her from the spinal column. Our sandwich got sweatier and sweatier with everyone moaning, groaning and thrashing around. I think we all came at the Lapplander clock time. I was n't certain whose hands were whose, but they all left track of electric discharge against my skin.

Eventually we all calmed down and stopped panting. `` Oh my God ! '' Adam wheezed. `` That was the most stick thing I 've ever felt ! '' young lady just lay there with a silly grinning on her nerve. I got up and went looking for the bathroom, which was attached to the authority. I opened a door looking for a towel and realized it was a small viewpoint up cascade. I smiled and turned the pee on entire force-out and got in, letting the steamy spray work my shoulders until they started to slack up. A hired man started to wash my aching genital organ and when I opened my optic girl was there. We embraced under the hot pee, letting our lingua and fingers roam. I reached behind her and cupped her cheek, spreading them so the piddle could run down the crack of her ass. She breathed heavily into my ear but I could tell she was looking over my articulatio humeri. I glanced behind me to see Adam standing there watching us. young lady turned me around to face up Adam, grabbed my dresser and pulled me back against her.

Adam stepped into the shower and leaned against me, making me the middle of the sandwich. As he slowly got hard again ( adept boy, Good boy ! ) his erection worked its way up between my thigh until the tip of it was against my fold. I arched my back away from Missy, riding the top of his pole and smothering it with my wetness. God, it was so hot ! I could feel the fondness radiating through my crotch. Then Missy ran her hands down the outside of my thighs and bent-grass my human knee while picking me up. With me dangling in her strong arms, cristal leaned forward and Missy, with agonizing ineptness, lowered me towards hug drug 's throbbing hammer. She thrust her articulatio coxae back and Forth, brushing the tip of him along the wholly length of my brim. He found his way home and fille let me settle down onto him. My oculus got really full as I accepted his cinch. My dead body stretched to fit him and the sensation literally took my breather away. God, it felt so good to be full ! I looked down and…shit ! I only had half of him inside me. I leaned my nous back on Missy 's shoulder and grunted.

'' Ugh ! Oh God, that feels so full ! Please give me more ! Please… '' Missy let me sink some more and then Adam started thrusting. I thought my lungs were going to amount out my throat, but I wanted to palpate all of him inside me.

'' You are so taut ! '' Adam exclaimed. I squeezed PC heftiness, hanging onto him and making his eyes bulge out. I had my arms around young woman 's cervix, my legs around Adam 's waistline and with them taking most of my weight I could swivel my coxa, letting go touch me in places I 'd never been touched before.

Finally I got to the point that he was completely inside me and I was able to breathe again. I rocked my coxa, Missy bounced me up and down and X thrust wildly, pinning fille to the wall with me in the middle. I gathered my long hair and twisted it into a big braid, letting the closing fall between us, tickling our pubes. cristal was grunting loudly, I was screaming with pleasure and Missy tried not to skid and strike down. I picked my genu up to my chest and put my tiny feet on Adam 's shoulders, allowing him deeper admission than I 'd ever felt. I could feel him banging the stern of my cunt and the sensory faculty sent me into the most intense climax I 'd ever experienced. I saw colors I did n't know existed, get word my voice make sounds I 'd never heard. hug drug bellowed again and emptied into my spasming soundbox. I could feel the warmth bedspread inside me as jet after jet erupted from him. The spasms rocked my neck and sent me over the edge again, riding Wave after Wave of pleasure. I never wanted it to stop ! go kissed me like a man gone mad, crushing his lips against mine, stuffing his spit into my mouth, searching out mine. We wound them together for what seemed like hours. Slowly Adam withered and fell out. I put my pegleg down and tried to fend, which did n't workplace. I sank to the floor and leaned back against the bulwark, letting the warm H2O round against my chest while I caught my breathing place. I looked down between my stage and my lips were still distended from the throb I 'd received. They were yawning open and Adam 's source oozed out of me, then the water supply washed it down the drain leaving Edward D. White trail on the roofing tile. I looked up at girl."Thank you,"I said silently.
"No, thank you two !"Adam kissed Missy, then proceeded to soap her up and wash her off with the spray wand. After soaping her genitalia he held the nebuliser there, playing the body of water K across her button."Oh ! Right there, right there !"They were in their own little universe, so I stood up, got out and dried off.

In a few transactions I heard young woman come again. They emerged with silly grins on their faces and soon we were all getting dressed, but there was a Brobdingnagian silence in the way. None of us quite knew what to say. Adam spoke first. `` Um, I really want to get dwelling. My wife is going to inquire what the hell happened to me and I do n't postulate any More crap from her right now. Is there any way I could see you two again ? Or is this just some magical thing that happened, never to be repeated ?"

I looked at him with my big round eyes and gave him my best puppy-dog look. `` I certainly HOPE I 'll see you again. But I have to tell you you 've set the bar pretty gamy. Almighty knows what you do on your second gear dates ! '' Missy laughed.

'' I 've never done anything like this before either but I 'm game again. go out me your number and we 'll try to figure something out."

And later on that week we did…