Hi this is my initiative metre writing anything so I 'd like your impression on it.

This has some themes like younger the grownup sex so be warned.
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Today 's my fourteenth birth day. My brother is a far-famed bioengineer and has made a lot of money in his life history. He is coming home for my birth day and also the fruneral of his married woman. She died in a car accetent on the way menage.

I hear a smash at the door and see that it 's David my brother. I run down the stairs and spread the threshold sense mom is in the book binding doing the garden material.

'' happy birth day, Jarry `` Saint David said. He had black patchs under his oculus from deficiency of rest. His eyes that used to reckon happy, now look sad and depressing.

'' hi David, I 'm sorry for ant Carry `` I said

'' it 's not your fault, fiddling sidekick `` he said while messing up my blonde hair's-breadth. I have dark centre like the sky, while that 's what my mom says but the Kyd at school say it makes me a dull blond.

'' can we still go to the ice-cream shop ? '' I asked

'' certainly, we can still go `` he said. There 's a place in town really called the ice-cream shop and it 's very good.

'' yay `` I said befor run to the back yard where ma at .when I see her I ask

'' mom can I go to the ice-cream shop with David ? ''

She looks up befor saying `` sure, it 's your birth day. Go have fun ``

I yell happy as I run back to the front line.

'' mom says we can go `` I say happily

'' with child let 's go `` David says befor walking over to his Black person fastball.

We listened to kids euphony while driving. David kept giving me weird looks but I did not know what they ment. When we reached the Ice-cream store. I got out and followed David inside.

We walked over to the bandstand and I ordered a homemade ice-cream bar and went to the rest room.

After I was done, I ran to the table where David was at. I sat down and we said modest lecture. I started eating and almost as soon as I started. I felt dizzy and had a head ache .I started to see sinister smudge around my vision. It started to get darker and darker but befor I fully went under. I saw St. David giving me a evil smile.


I wolk up to the sound of beeping, lots of beeping. I tried to open my eyes but the felt like stones. When I finally got my eyes clear, I saw a giant wall mirror. I saw that there was a lot of computer equipment and two chair by a bed.

In the bed was a girl with blue sky eyes and blond hair. She was in a infirmary gown and amobarbital sodium panties. She had small breast but they looked near on her. She looked around my age. She also had restraints on het sleeve.

I moved around a little to get in a better seating area place and the lady friend did too. I moved back and the girl did the Lapp thing at the Saami demand time.

'' full point copying me `` I said. Instead of my pattern part, a high pitch shot girls vocalisation came out. I then relized that the young woman is me. I let out a senior high school rake thigh-slapper and cryied. mickle of crying fell from my center.

Then a hidden door opened up and out came David with a lab coat and a smug smile on his side. He wales up to me.

'' help me St. David, we need to find out who did this to me '' I said

'' oh, there 's no motivation for that Jarry or should I say Carry. I 'm the one who did it `` says David

'' but why David, I love you ``

'' oh that 's the gunpoint, when my beloved Carry died with my un-born child. I was devestated but when I saw you today. I decided to take you to my lab and modification you DNA a little. You might not sleep together me as the original Carry but you will do. I changed you so that if you were born female person, then you would attend like this. Everything is double-dyed. Including your virginity `` he said the last part with a laugh.

'' please change me back `` I begged.

'' why would I do something like that. You need me and I need you `` with that he came toward and grabbed the end of my dress. When it would not go the way he wanted he ripped it off. When the coldness air hit my hide. My newly formed teat grew hard.

'' oh, so perfect `` said St. David befor he started sucking on my leftfield one .I tried to move my teat out of his calendar month but I ca n't with my hands attached to the board.

'' no David, stop `` I said but he just sucked intemperately. Something unearthly started happening. Me newly developed viagina started to get wet.

'' Saint David please arrest `` I begged but instead of stoping he went to my flop one. He started to lightly bite it and it made my viagina even wetter.

'' St. David stop now `` again he egnored me and got up. I 'm thinking'thank god he 's done'but he just went to were my legs were. He started to poke at my blue panties and a squishing sound came from it. He looked at me with a insainly felicitous smiling and said.

'' your almost fix. I only have to do alittle more ``

'oh no'I think

He starts to pull them off and I try to plain him but he crabs my stage with one manus and continues to pull them off. When he did he put them to his nose and started smelling it.

Sould I continue ? ? ?

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Should I do another part. Please tell me and I 'll do it .