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I glanced across at her and laughed. She was pulling a wacky case at me from the other position of the bus, and I could n't help but giggle along with her.
Marissa was beautiful. She had long, Pt blonde hair that hung down to her shoulder blades, or at least she would own. At the instant it was dyed dark brown and was held in a loose bun atop her head. Her expression was kind and seemed to promise a unspoilt fourth dimension without her actually having to say anything. She had a short, slender anatomy, about 5'2, and unshakable B-cup breasts. Today she was wearing a low cut leafy vegetable top with a iniquity, open waistcoat and a floral patterned bird. I was wearing jeans and a t-shirt.
I had a monumental crush on her, but she had a boyfriend, and I was depicted object just to be her Friend.
'' What are you staring me for, Ben ? '' she teased with a cheeky grin. I could n't help but admire how lovely she was. I could n't think I was lucky enough to know a girl who was so pretty and funny story. And she played picture game ! I was more of an XBox fan, whereas she played online games like League of caption, but we still had that in common. She also had an incredibly cheeky and often dirty signified of humor. She was too good to be true. And yet there we were.
'' I was just looking at your goofy face, how about ? '' I countered with another laugh.
'' Oh, ouch. '' she said `` I do n't suppose I 'll ever recover from that. ``
I laughed yet again, and we continued to trade jokes and friendly vilification along with our early supporter as the bus took us home from school. I was in 11th score along with to the highest degree of my Paraguay tea, but Marissa was a year older. None of us even noticed the age difference of opinion, we all got along so well.

We soon neared my stop, and as I stood and prepared to depart with my best friend matte, the small angel opposite me looked up.
'' Oh, hey Ben ? Can I be really annoying ? ``
I was surprised, but aegir to help oneself. `` What do you involve ? ``
'' Well my parents are out of town and I 'm staying with a acquaintance, but she lives across townsfolk and this bus does n't go anywhere near her place. Is it alright if I borrow your phone and hold her a call so she can come and break up me up from my place ? ``
I had no problem with this, and quickly offered her my Mobile phone.
'' Thanks so much, Ben. ``
'' No job. '' I replied with a shrug. As a skinny 17 year old Virgo who had never been in a grievous human relationship, I could never say no to a pretty little girl, even if I wanted to. I was n't super skinny, or large, in fact at firstly glance I was in okay Supreme Headquarters Allied Powers Europe, but I was n't especially muscly or sporty like a lot of the gym junkies I was friends with at shoal. I was more content to sit and read or represent a video game than give up a orchis around, though I was always more than happy to get a bit strong-arm if the opportunity arose. I quite enjoyed dodgeball ( whether I was any good at it was another story altogether ) but it did n't help that I was an athsmatic. So it was no wonder girls did n't seem to see me as boyfriend fabric. I had lots of female friends, just none that saw me as potentially something more. Or so I thought.
Marissa finished speaking with her friend and gave a little wry face that almost made me melt to the trading floor. She handed me my speech sound back and looked out the window.
'' So what 's the impairment ? '' I inquired.
'' Eh, my ally ca n't get to me very soon, so I 'll have got to wait at my place for a few hours before she can total and get me. ``
I saw an opportunity to spend Thomas More prison term with this amazing young woman, and so I seized it without hesitation.
'' Well, you could wait at my place. We could play some game, watch some rum videos and just bum around until your admirer can occur get you, then she can pick you up from there. My mum might even give you a ride, even promiscuous. ``
She smiled `` That 's seraphic, but is n't that a bit difficult ? I would n't want to levy. ``
I shook my head `` No imposition. Mum and Amber ( my new sister ) would love you, and you know I already do. '' I almost choked. Had I just told her I loved her ? I had. Oh god.
But she did n't seem to notice, so I pushed on. `` I promise, it wo n't be that hard. ``
'' Giggidy ! '' she said immediately, not missing chance to make a dirty caper. We all laughed, and she thanked me and agreed to come up to my house until her friend picked her up.
Matthew had n't missed that I was taking the opportunity to spend time with Marissa, and nudged me in the ribs with his elbow as soon as she looked away.
'' Eh ? Eh ? '' he said, sounding amazingly like Eric Idle in that Monty Python sketch.
'' Shuttup ! '' I chuckled, giving him a light shove. He laughed some more, but I was aced more than bother as he was distracted by another friend of ours.
I turned back to look at Marissa, who was gazing out the windowpane again.
Whether she had noticed my lilliputian shimmy or not, I did love this girl. Even if she was spoken for, I could n't facilitate my feelings.

Upon arriving at the bus stop, I stepped out into open air with Marissa, my unspoiled friend and his twin baby. The four of us walked to the recession where I bid the sib Au Revoir and wandered to my own home with a gorgeous goddess at my side. The two of us joked and laughed all the way there, and I was still chuckling when I opened the door and called out through our small family to let my mob know that I was domicile. My parents had never married, and they had split when I was 5 and my sister was 2. We lived with mum, but saw our Father often enough. I was gladiolus that my parents were on good terminal figure, which was more than I could say for many masses I know.
Our house was pocket-sized, but homely. there was just decent elbow room for the necessity.
I wandered into the kitchen, not surprised by the want of response, and discovered a small line saying that my mum and sister had gone to stay put with a friend for the night, leaving me alone with Marissa.
'' Looks like it 's just you and me for the next few hours. '' I shrugged apologetically.
'' That 's alright, I 'm sure we 'll survive. ``
'' Oh, I do n't know, '' I replied with a smirk. `` If I decide to change state evil while we 're here I doubt there 's a lot you can do to block off me. '' I then glanced at my skinny arms `` Oh hold ... ''
'' Haha, oh I do n't call up I 'll be able to handle such huge brawniness. '' Marissa laughed, and I laughed with her.
I asked if she wanted to watch a movie, and she agreed, so I put on a laughable motion-picture show for us to look on while I fixed us some popcorn and pizza pie in the kitchen. The way our kitchen and lounge way were set up allowed me to lecture to Marissa and learn the picture while I made us food.
We both found Steve Carrell amusing, so Get smart turned out to be a effective alternative.
We compared it to former movies, and talked about our favourites, and continued to do so when we had finished the pizza pie and moved onto the Zea mays everta. I sat on the same couch opposite her initially, but by the time the pic was almost over we had somehow moved ourselves right future to each other in the inwardness of the couch. There was a tense mo in the film, so we had stopped talking to watch.
I could feel the skin of her bare arm brushing against mine, and it was like an electrical shock right through my body. I was taller than her, and as such had a great prospect down the top of her low cut shirt. My cock rose in my jeans, and I shifted so that it was n't obvious. The closeness was something I was n't use to, and I did n't know what to do. I did n't need to be rude by moving away, and I could n't draw a motility on a girl who was spoken for, so I remained still, hoping I would n't do anything that ruined the bit. My breath was coming quickly, and I glanced again down her top. She was wearing a lacy white bra beneath and I was finding it harder and harder to hide the bulge in my blue jean. If she turned and looked down, I 'd be in hot water.
I looked up as she turned to me, and smiled. She smiled back and she was so close I could see the figure in her irises.
I could n't bear it anymore. She was too beautiful. I quickly stood, turning to hide my raging boner, and walked to the kitchen.
'' What 's up ? '' she asked.
'' zilch. '' I replied, fishing for a sprite from the electric refrigerator, then just tolerate there drinking it, hoping my hard-on would fleet.
'' semen back over here, it 's cold. ``
I returned reluctantly, and sat down at the edge of the cast, but she moved along and lay down across my pectus and rested her head on my shoulder joint, still facing the TV.
What was she doing ? She had a young man, and he was a decent guy. We got along well enough, and I had nothing against him. I decided it was prudent to bring up the fact that she was taken, more than to discourage myself from doing something stupid than anything else. I was confused by her demeanour, but did n't think for a minute she would ever be faithless, and decided it was just my imagination that she was acting strangely.
'' So, how 's Jeff ? ``
She was silent for a bit, and I was shy as to whether or not she 'd heard me. But before I could repeat myself she spoke.
'' He broke up with me. ``
I was shocked. Last I had heard they were a happy couple, no problems at all.
The adjacent matter I knew she had turned around and was sobbing into my shoulder. I wrapped my arms around her instinctively, no longer worried about my problem downstairs, instead thinking of how I could give her spirit better.
She started talking, about how Jeff had been very distant lately, about how he had finally told her he loved somebody else, an old flame of his, and how she was unity as of two twenty-four hours ago.
I sat quietly and listened, dutifully nodding and shaking my headland where requirement. She was really distressed, and I had no idea how I could bring her back to her old self.
When the story was finished, she looked up into my centre. Once again, we were very close. She smelled howling, sweet and minty.
'' Whats wrong with me, Ben ? ``
'' zilch. '' I responded immediately. `` You are the rummy, coolest, most beautiful girl I know, Marissa. Jeffrey is a patsy for letting you go. I ca n't trust he does n't realize what a catch you are. '' I stared back into her heart intently. I meant every word, and I needed her to now that.
'' Any guy would be more than lucky to get you. If you were mine, I 'd never let you go. ``
She was dumb for a second, and I was worried that I 'd gone too far.
'' I 've always thought you were a really great guy, Ben ''
Then she closed her eyes and kissed me.
My mind went blank shell. Her lips crushed against mine, and her knife forced against my lips.
I did n't know what to do. Here I was, getting kissed by the young lady I loved, and I was sitting there like a statue. That would n't do. I started kissing her back.
I opened my sassing and our natural language twisted and dueled, our saliva mixing and swapping mouths.
Eventually we had to come up for air.
'' Marissa ... '' I began, not knowing how to move. What does one say when one is kissing the most beautiful lady friend in the world ?
'' It 's O.K., Ben. I 've been thinking about this for a prospicient time. You 've always been so kind to me, and I 've noticed the way you look at me when you think no one is looking. I like it. '' she finished with a smile that melted my heart.
I felt her reach down between us and rub the movement of my jeans. I was in heaven.
She unzipped my fly and started rubbing again, this meter with only my boxers between her bare pelt and mine. I did n't suffer a whang, so that made affair simpler.
By this point the movie was over and the deferred payment were rolling, but neither of us cared.
When I reached up and pulled at her waistcoat, she broke the kiss so that we could pull it and her top off. I decided to do the right affair before we went any further.
'' Are you sure about this ? ``
'' Yes ! '' she panted `` I need this so badly. ``
'' What about security ? ``
'' I 'm on the tablet. ``
And with that her bra was fully exposed to the air and my eyes. It was webby than I had initially thought, and I could see the dark spots where her teat were, which only made me harder.
I only had a abbreviated second to gaze before she crushed her lips against mine again.
I raised my articulatio coxae so that we could pull my jeans and boxers down, and finally my cock sprang relinquish.
She eagerly wrapped her script around it and started stroking.
I thought that the kissing was just. This was great. I gasped and arched my back some more, delight shooting through my body as her small hand slid up and down my rock solid 6 inches.
'' You like that ? Yeah ? You like that do n't you ? '' Marissa teased with a mischievous grin. This was a incline of her I 'd never seen, a sexier, turned on side of meat. I liked it.
I had often wondered at whether a girlfriend 's hired man would feel unlike to my own when stroking up and down my rubble, and I now knew. It felt a million times better. I could almost feel every breaking ball and ridge on her belittled palms as they rubbed up and down on the sensitive skin of my virgin cock.
She slid up my body and I helped her remove her doll, and then her bra, and finally her panties.
I gazed at a body to rival that of Aphrodite herself.
house, perky breast with 10 penny tit stood out at attention, just begging to be squeezed and groped.
My heart travelled south to her beautiful pussycat. It was topped by a tuft of dark curly hairsbreadth, and I could see her overeat clit poking out of her folds, eager to be fondled and rubbed.
Reaching up and taking a boob in each hand I fondled while she continued to stroke up and down my member.
For about 5 arcminute we just stayed like that, with her sitting on my leg, rubbing herself along me, sharing her wetness. I had no experience with women, but she seemed wetter than any woman I had seen in porn picture on the net. It was incredibly erotic, feeling her juice run down the sides of my thigh, while her pussy slid across the top if my leg.
I decided it was n't fair to let her do all the workplace, so i reached down and started rubbing two finger in between her folds.
The effect was instantaneous. She closed her eye and purred softly, humping at my finger slightly. Feeling more surefooted, I slid into her a petty More, and she purred dock-walloper. Then I began moving my totally fingers completely in and out of of her, which she again responded to. As a finishing signature, I stretched out my quarter round and gave her button a slight rub/flick with every inwards stroke. At this stage Marissa opened her mouth and mourned loudly. I discovered that giving this nymph delight was actually even more arousing to me than her hands on my manhood.
Suddenly, she stopped stroking me and pulled away from my hands, moving above my cock and placing it at the entrance to her glorious hole.
'' Marissa ... '' I started. I had to severalize her I was a Virgo the Virgin. It did n't serve that I had n't masturbated in a few days and had no clue how long I 'd last.
'' Shhhhh ... I know. '' and with that she impaled herself on my member.
Marissa herself was not a virgin, but she was incredibly cockeyed. At that moment I did n't recollect I could enjoy anything in the humankind more than how much I was enjoying lovesome wet pussy wrapped around my virgin dick.
She slid up and down, up and down, not bothering to start out slow, just riding me with wildness, moaning and gasping as I pistoned in and out of her.
'' Oh, fuck me, lie with me Ben, your cock smell so good inside me. ``
I happily obliged, humping up into her, matching her own driving force. I found that I was able to take off my flood tide for longer than I though I would, and so I got a bit bold. I reached down between us and started rubbing her clit again, eliciting a shriek of pleasure from her. She did n't give up, but after a few minutes that seemed like an eternity she slowed down slightly so she could gaze into my centre while I stared rightfulness back.
'' Oh Marissa, you feel so good '' I groaned `` Your pussy is so tight and warm. ``
'' That 's decently, sister. You like the feel of my pussy ? Its all yours now. I cant postponement to feel all your hot cum. I want to issue forth with you, Ben. ``
This encouraged me, so I gave an spear carrier hard jab up into her tight pussy, and she threw her read/write head back and howled with pleasure.
We continued like this for about 5 more moment, when all of a sudden, she stopped riding and looked me in the eye again
'' Fuck me from behind. Give it to me, my love life. ``
Those last two Good Book affected me in a way I did n't remember possible. She loved me. And I was most certainly hers. I had been for a recollective time. I stood, lifting her up with me, before her flip over with my dick still inside her and setting her down, letting her bend over the couch. I did n't know how I found the strength to do this, and I did n't care.
A started fucking her as hard and fast as I could. Marissa cried out in pleasure, arching her back, I saw her tongue roll out the edge of her mouth.
I leant down and rest my chest on her back, letting my left hand come up to force her tit while my right hand reached under her, looking for her pussy. I found her own hand already there, so i took over, allowing her to use both arms to support herself on the couch while I thrusted into her cunt from behind.
The flux attention from my dick and my fingers was causing her to convulse and pant more often, and I knew I would n't last practically longer.
'' I 'm close, do n't stop ! '' she cried, jerking back at my thrusts more erratically.
'' Me too.. ! ``
I pumped into her with all the might I could possibly muster, and felt the cum stewing in my globe.
I grunted, and she screamed `` Do n't bar ! Shoot it in me ! Shoot all your cum inside me ! ``
I was past the point of no restoration. With one final thrust I pushed my peter into her depths as far as it would go, bottoming out at her neck, before unleashing load after load of hot white cum into her convulsing body.
'' OH ! OH ! OH ! OH GOD YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS ! ! ! ! ! '' she wailed as her own sexual climax struck her. I had never come as much or as hard as I was good then. The amount of cum that I was gushing into her felt up unreal. She shook and writhed beneath me, her twat tightening more than I would stimulate thought potential around me as I continued to pump more semen than I had ever done before.
'' I FEEL IT INSIDE MEEEEE ! ! ! '' her sexual climax continued, crashing over her like a tsunami of delight, again and again. Our consistency were one, at that moment. There was goose egg but she and me.

After what seemed like a beautiful eternity, we finally stopped thrashing and lay down on the couch, spooning. I kissed her neck opening, then her face, then finally her lips as she turned to me. This buss was soft, passionate.
'' I love you. '' I said. Right there, holding her naked body in my arms, I was n't afraid.
'' I love you too. '' she replied with a balmy smile.
We lay there for a while, neither of us wanting to end the here and now.

I had a feeling that everything was going to be better from then on .