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Triple free rein

Chapter One

Another boring party, another bunch of tiresome people. `` Jeez, '' I thought to myself. `` I 've got to find another job. ''

Picking up my 5th tray of champagne, I made my way through the crowd, picking up bits and pieces of a 12 conversations, none of which I could have cared less about. This group was just another ultra-conservative right-wing presidential reenforcement group trying to make sure their petty pastime did n't get squashed in the upcoming election.

Across the room though, a woman had the complete attention of various men. They were laughing at a woman who was obviously very passionate about what she was saying. The cleaning woman continued to make the men laugh, and she was in gross control of the all lot of them, as if she 'd cast a spell.

I 'd seen this happen before at parties. One limited individual, invariably female - captivating a totally consultation - invariably male. Almost intrigued decent to handle, I wandered in their focusing, offering full glasses and picking up empty-bellied ones. One of the men was eyeing the woman with skepticism. `` Surely you do n't ask to progress to any money writing about things like that, do you ? ``

'' Why not ? '' the cleaning lady responded. `` Just because it is going to be based on a real story and not be good of sex and lies ? Surely there must be hoi polloi who are as fascinated with chronicle as I am. ``

'' I 'll tell you one, thing. Whether you like it or not sex does trade. '' said the tall dark-haired man standing next to her. `` Really ? For starting motor, I DO like sex, '' said the woman with a wink. `` But Bob, if sex sells somebody's got to be buying. How much do YOU own to pay to get laid these Clarence Shepard Day Jr. ? '' The crowd erupted in hoots and howls as the man blushed. `` red cent it missy, that's not what I meant, '' he tried to exclaim over the guffaws of the others.

I stopped to see where this was headed. miss slyly took a sip of her champagne and smiled. Something about the way she held her glass with just the tips of her fingers. Her center burned with, what- Intensity ? Fire ? Passion ? Whatever it was I wanted to be able to do that. control a grouping, making them hang on my every parole. I was watching an artist and it looked like it was time for the secondly act. Her meth was almost evacuate so I used the opportunity to slide in future to her and offer her a full one. She graciously accepted my glass with one hand and held the empty one out with the other. Our fingers touched and sparks flew between us. I was instantly turned on ! We made eye striking and the signals were not my imaging.

O.K., now I was really intrigue !

young woman looked around the chemical group. Bob spoke up again. `` Well Missy, if you like sex, why have you always ignored my advances ? I 'd be glad to demonstrate you what a man I am. '' missy closed the gap between them and leaned right into Bob 's case until their noses were just inches from each other. Bob swallowed hard and tried not to look down at missy 's cleavage, but he did n't manage it for very long. Everyone noticed the quick coup d'oeil down into her embrace. `` BUSTED ! '' hollered one of the other guy rope. Everyone hooted and hollered again. `` Alright, '' fille said breathily. `` The next time I have a spare two arcminute I 'll definitely yell you ! '' That time it took several minutes to calm them down.

'' Well gentleman, it is prison term for me to go, but first I need to ask the caterers a couple head about next workweek 's case. If you 'll excuse me… '' and with that she motioned me to follow her into the kitchen. Like a lost puppy I followed at her heels.

'' Can you help me aim the rest period of the food for thought over to my office ? I really have to get some thing done tonight yet, and my staff would take account me feeding them. '' Shit, that is NOT what I was hoping for, but I thought at least this way I might get a chance to pass some more time with her. `` By the way, '' Missy asked. `` What is your figure ? ''

'' I 'm so sorry ! '' I stumbled. `` I 'm Chris. I 'd be glad to serve, but the pleasure was all mine, '' I replied. And I meant it. `` I did notice the control condition you had over that group you were with. How do you do that ? ''

'' Oh that ? '' she asked. `` It was cypher. The way to curb men is to make them consider they are God 's special Gift to Womankind. But as attractive as you are, you already know that, do n't you ? '' She winked and gave me that sly smile again.

'' I know what it feels like when it happens,"I replied."Just not sure I could call it up at will. You were really working them heavy. ``

'' I know, but those people control a cockeyed quantity of money in this picayune town and I want WAY more than my bonny share. I just have to win over them that my needs were their idea. '' She smiled.

We were loading the software system into her van when she suddenly stopped and snapped her fingers. `` Oh hell, I have one More errand I have to run yet so why do n't you just ride with me ? I 'll lend you right back, I promise. '' Like I had any desire to do anything else. And besides, she smelled good. Really good.

We got in and started off. The rural area gild was about 20 arcminute outside of town. No Oklahoman had we gotten the threshold closed when it started to DUMP ice-cold pelting. `` We just dodged that smoke, '' Missy laughed. `` I 'd have hated to see you all wet. ``

I almost said `` I 'd get laid to see YOU all wet, '' but held my spit. But I was thinking of using my tongue to see if she WAS wet, at least in some places. I squirmed in my seat, suddenly aware that it was getting awfully warm in the van.

We got about 10 mi from the country club when the van just quit. `` God, I hate this thing, '' missy said with despair in her voice. `` Can you fix it ? ``

'' What the hell makes you think I know anything about auto ? '' I asked indignantly. I would n't even have it away how to get the exhaust hood open.

'' I'm sorry, it was just…oh, never brain. We 'll just possess to waitress for a car to occur by. Should n't be but an hour or two… '' She let the row and their substance drift off into the windy dark. Suddenly I felt a hired man on my thigh, working its way towards my waist. I looked over at her and she leaned over, and then kissed me ever so softly. I almost had an climax right then and there. I could n't breathe, the van was spinning and all I could do was appear at her unbelievable brown eye. I broke the buss and gasped for breath, my middle racing.

'' I know I'm a minuscule erstwhile than you are, but I hope you find me attractive still, '' she said.

'' Uh, oh yeah, you are really pretty, '' I said, which was true. `` I… '' I was going to say something witty, but there were fingers running along the top of my blackened pants, slowly working their way down into my genitals. I knew I was going to come if she kept it up. Her fingers were finding wisps of pubic hair and I wanted her to unbutton my slacks and continue. She could smell out my need. `` Are you okay with this ? I just find you sexy as hell. ''

I blushed and turned away from her gaze. She gently pulled my chin around and kissed me again. My gasp came undone like conjuring trick, and I could feel her fingers probing, searching. I threw my head back and arched against her hand. When Missy finally slid a finger across my prick I came in shuddering gasp, clenching my stage around her helping hand so she could n't take her finger out of me until the spasms subsided.

Just then we saw lights in the rear-view mirror. Missy got out into the pouring pelting and waved at the oncoming SUV while I tried to recover the king of voice communication. The truck pulled up alongside and rolled down the window. `` Looks like you ladies need a hand. '' miss looked at me, then at the driver. He was tall, blonde and squeamish looking. In unretentive, just what we 'd ordered. Only not short.

Missy said `` Can you pick out us in to the campus ? I 've got to get this food back in the electric refrigerator before it spoils. I 'll consider with the van in the morning. If I get really favorable the damn thing wo n't still be here by then ! '' I got in the back, Missy climbed in up front.

'' Hi, I 'm Adam. And who do I have the pleasure of helping tonight ? ''

'' This is Missy and I 'm Chris."We all shook hand. His were huge. Always a good sign.

'' We were at the governor 's dinner party tonight and the damn van quit as soon as it got good and morose. Thanks so much for stopping ! ``

'' No problem. I have to labour right by campus on the way home, but I 'd have probably taken you to stops if you 'd asked ! '' He winked at us. We both rolled our eyes, but then again he was cute…

Missy wasted no time asking XTC to hail up with us to her office. `` Thank you so practically for rescuing us back there. We would have been soaked in moment walking back on animal foot. ''

'' Looks like you 're both still pretty wet, '' disco biscuit said, then looked at us funny, wondering if we 'd catch the double signification.

'' As it turned out, we were both wet when you GOT there, '' Missy said with a wink. The double-take on Adam 's cheek was invaluable.

'' Oh ! Maybe I should induce given you some more time before stopping to help. Sorry if I interrupted something ! '' He laughed and looked at us with renewed sake. I could feel him checking out my 5'3 '' anatomy, but it was Missy 's pinhead that truly captivated him. I coulda slapped him. I may only be 110lbs soaking wet, but once properly motivated I can outlast any man on foot, on a bicycle, in the water or in bed.

'' member, '' I muttered. `` Why do they always have to be attached to a MAN ? ''

'' What was that ? '' Adam asked, not sure he heard what he thought he heard.

'' I think I left the Pinochet in the Van, '' I said in as straight person a aspect as I could rally. Missy said,

`` No problem. Let me see what I can find out. '' She went through a room access and came back with three glasses and a bottle of Edward Douglas White Jr. wine.
`` Jeez, '' disco biscuit exclaimed. `` I wish I could keep a wine basement in MY federal agency. ''

'' Why not ? What do you do ? '' I asked.

'' I have a small garage and a race squad. ''

'' Really ? Wow ! Are you a machinist or a driver ? ''

'' Both, actually. I told you it was a small functioning. It seems I 'm pretty good with my work force, though. '' He winked and took one of the glasses. Yes, his hands looked ok. Long, warm fingers, vast palms. I was thinking of how they would experience against my bosom and elsewhere. I had to careen my weight as suddenly my panty were way too tight.

He was leaning against the nook of the desk and I could just clear out a growing bulge in his pants. funny story, I had n't noticed it before. miss came over and stood powerful beside me with her deal around my waist. I leaned back on the bookcase for financial support. God it was hot in here ! fille ran her fingerbreadth over my back, from my waistband to my shoulder joint. It sent chills coursing through my body. Sir Thomas More and more of them were headed south. I knew I was getting wet again. I needed to come again, I just was n't sure how I was going to superintend it ; but the two people in front man of me were my in force bet in a tenacious time.

And it had been a long time. My parents were Formosan immigrants, and we have the typical neighborhood Chinese eating house with bad décor and silly music. But the solid food is wonderful and accurately Chinese, something you do n't incur very often. Our clientèle included well-nigh of the prosperous in town. My mother is incredibly sexy, all 4'10 '' and 95 lbs of her. But she carries herself like a cat, and all that sensualness just flows from her like a gift. Men are just dumbstruck by her presence, a lot like girl. I guess I learned some of it too, as I 'm always getting aid from men, but they usually end up being jerks.

At to the lowest degree men are slow to figure out. If they are n't randy they 're thirsty. So if your man is n't chasing you around the aliveness elbow room, make him a sandwich ! If you want conversation, talk to your girlfriends.

I 'd been in a couple family relationship, but nothing serious. Jon was the 'artist dreamer'whose liberal arts education let him scorn the materialistic spirit he 'd never be capable to afford. He was a properly kisser but just could n't in conclusion long enough to fulfill me. He 'd get all worked up, ( consisting of me coyly smiling at him ) climb on top of me, oink and vagabond off just as I was starting to get into it. As soon as he 'd go to sleep ( 25 endorsement after the *grunt* ) I 'd hustle over and pull B.O.B. ( my bombardment operated fellow ) out of my nightstand and diddle myself to slumber. But it was n't completely satisfying because I always had to be pipe down. Jon had a supercalafragilistic ego that would just be CRUSHED if I told him I 'd never had an coming with him. Well, I 'd had plenty succeeding him, but he was n't conscious at the time. Does that counting then ?

What I wanted now was for someone 's tongue to research my to the highest degree informal folds. My scanty were getting very wet and I could feel the wet beginning to run down my second joint. There was no way I was going to waste it.

I took miss 's handwriting and walked over to where Robert Adam was standing. I leaned up against him, entwined my fingers with his and pulled his arm around me. Missy did the Sami on the other position. I slowly encouraged his hired hand towards my tit. When the palm tree of his hand hit it I gasped. He slowly cupped my breast and squeezed gently. Yup, he was thoroughly with his paw ! Oh God, this was going to be commodity !

I ran a finger down the front of his shirt. `` missy, I think it is meter we properly explain to this gentleman just how appreciative we are of the drive he gave us. Care to help me return the favor ? '' I could not think those password had just come out of my mouth ! I 'd never been this bluff before in my life, but Damn if I was going to let this opportunity slip by. I 'd been young lady dainty goody my whole life sentence, but tonight I wanted to fuck somebody silly. Talk about being in the the right way plaza at the right clock time ! Ole go was going to let the night of his life. And then he could do with Missy what he wanted.

Missy and I made runway down to Adam 's belt, which we proceeded to unbuckle. I slowly got down on my knees and inch-by-inch unzipped his trouser. We were all breathing so intemperately it sounded like an employment room. My heart was pounding so loud I 'm sure they could hear it too. Under his dungaree his white cotton brief were stretched tight by his erecting. Wow ! It was huge !

'' Yes ! '' I thought. Now, if he can only control himself…

I brushed my cheek against the liquid material and Robert Adam jumped, or rather part of him did. I did it again. Just when my boldness touched the fabric-covered tip of his penis, it would jump and reek me in the face. I laughed and looked up at him. `` You 're so beautiful, '' he said looking down at me. `` I ca n't trust how tiny you are. '' I smiled meekly and turned my gaze away. But my hands kept searching out his hardness. I pulled the waistcloth of his shorts out and he sprung out of them. This matter stood straight out from his torso a good 8 ''. It was thick and veiny and bobbed up and down with his instant. I sat there with my leg folded under me and watched it waving in battlefront of me. I reached up and cupped his egg, heavy and full. Pursing my lip, I slowly took the head of him into my oral cavity. Which was about all I could get in ! It felt so in effect, and tasted marvelous. There is something about the flavor of a forge man. mmmmm. Working back and forth with my backtalk, I massaged his balls with my give manus. The other I used to unbutton my pants. I wriggled my paw down to my wetness and slid two fingers inside. I moaned on XTC 's dick, which made him gasp and thrust into my face.

Suddenly I felt hands enveloping me from behind, and then I felt Missy 's wonderful bosom pressing into my back. She was on her knees behind me and her hands were roaming all over me. I was in heaven. Between the alcohol, lack of sex and the sexy people in the way I knew I was stopping point to coming again.
Just then Missy put her chin on my shoulder and pressed her brim to my ear. `` You have to learn to part ! '' She took detainment of Adam and leaned forward, pinning my top dog to his hip. She took him into her backtalk, inch after inch ! My ear was pressed against Adam 's interior thigh with my nose rightfulness at the base of his stopcock. Missy 's rim kept getting closer and closer to his belly. I could n't believe it ! She took almost the whole thing down her throat. I reached out with my tongue and flicked it across the base of his cock. His balls jumped as his sac tightened. I could just run the tip of my tongue around the border of young lady 's lips as she wiggled her head slope to side. I could see the head of hug drug 's penis inside her cheek as she rubbed back and Forth River.

'' God Missy ! Where on terra firma did you learn to do that ? '' I asked in amazement.

'' Yes, '' Adam panted as sweat beaded up on his forehead and chest. `` Who taught you that ? Can you teach Chris here ? How about my married woman ? '' He stood there panting, trying to retrieve his composure. We all laughed.
'' So you like that, do you ? '' young lady asked. `` Let 's just say I have been blessed with a large mouth and no gag reflex. But the key is practice. Care to avail me prevent my form ? '' She winked up at him.

'' Anytime, anytime. '' he wheezed.

missy went back to where she 'd been, with her boldness impaled on his rod. She worked up her swiftness, until she was going from just the tip to having her horn in buried against his pubic off-white. She grabbed my hand and encouraged me to massage his bollock. Then she took my middle finger and pressed it against the al-Qa'ida of his balls, slowly sliding back towards his ass. She was really getting into the blowjob and spittle was everywhere. She scooped some up and ran it over my finger, then pressed it against his asshole. His eyes got really wide, but he started thrusting into Missy 's mouth and his breathing got really ragged. I worked my finger into his buns, and when I curled my finger forward and touched his prostrate he bellowed and came. missy pulled his cock out of her mouth. X 's knees buckled and he grabbed both our heads for support. We quickly kissed each side of his cock, so he could lunge between our lips. His first spasm pellet over Missy 's shoulders, landing on her metrical unit behind her. As more and more semen oozed out of him, we took turns lapping it off the end of his shaft. Every time we 'd lick the end he 'd spasm again.

Eventually Adam quit coming and he slowly went gentle. Missy grabbed my face and kissed me heavy. I could sample Adam on her and it drove me raving mad. Our kisses became more and more passionate and our hand roamed each others eubstance. I lay down, and fille crawled on top of me, crushing her Brobdingnagian hooter against me, flattening mine completely. She grabbed my hands and held them over my head, then kissed my neck. I could feel her mound attrition into mine, making me so wet I could feel it running down the crack of my ass.

She teased me as she went further south, unbuttoning my blouse and outlay time on each freshly exposed nipple. When she got to my stomach every touch of her mouth made my pare creeping. little gasps of pleasure escaped my lips and I was lifting my articulatio coxae off the carpet to run into her eager mouth.

She worked her way down to the top of my folds and ran her lingua back and forth right across the top of it, just barely touching my clit. I was panting and moaning like mad, wanting more. FINALLY she planted her face on my muff and used her natural language to part the tussock of long fuzz I left behind when shaving. She worked her tongue into me and sucked my nub between her mouth. I grabbed big handfuls of her hair and shoved my private parts into her face. undulation of X rolled over me and I came again. I slowly became cognizant that I 'd already had two crushing orgasms ; Missy had n't yet. fourth dimension to release the mesa.

I rolled Missy off me and lay beside her on my side. I motioned for Adam to do the same. We each undid a few buttons and sucked the exposed breast. I took his hand and ran his fingertips down her leg and back, then undid her pants and helped wiggle her out of them.

She was completely smooth-shaven, which was a serious turn of events on for me. Apparently it was for Adam too, as he made some low growling noise in the rear of his throat and eased his face down onto her stomach. fille parted her creamy thighs and X settled between them, inhaling her fragrance and stroking her with just his fingertips. fille grabbed his script and shoved two of his fingers deep into herself. It did n't take longsighted for him to figure out what she liked and continued in long strokes.

After a while I reached down and took hug drug 's deal and put it on my second joint. I reached over and grabbed Missy 's face, pulling her towards me until we were facing each early on our sides. I wrapped my arms around girl 's neck and thrust my tongue into her brass. Our nipples found each other and sent electrical energy coursing between us. I could feel her mound press against mine. All of a sudden missy 's middle got all-encompassing and she groaned sending tremendous quivering through my lips. ecstasy had slipped his hardening cock between Missy 's second joint and was pumping the tip along her moist folds. As he got harder it got closer and closer to my clit, eventually just parting my backtalk as he thrust his rosehip against girl 's hind end from backside. The tip was all lubed up from missy and the mildness of the tip felt wonderful but I desperately needed more. I just needed to let miss get hers first ! I prayed to the Gods that Adam would deliver one more than erecting for me.

I reached down between my legs and ran my fingertips along the underside of Adam as he thrust towards me. I increased the upwardly force per unit area until with one thrusting I sent Adam mysterious into young woman. She cried out and then pushed back burying him bass inside her. They built up a rhythm with our heap touching on the upswing. I was thrusting against Missy, grinding our pubic bone together while hug drug pounded into her from the rachis. Our sandwich got sweatier and sweatier with everyone moaning, groaning and thrashing around. I think we all came at the same time. I was n't surely whose hands were whose, but they all left trails of sparks against my skin.

Eventually we all calmed down and stopped panting. `` Oh my God ! '' XTC wheezed. `` That was the most amazing thing I 've ever felt ! '' miss just lay there with a wacky smile on her face. I got up and went looking for the bathroom, which was attached to the office. I opened a door looking for a towel and realized it was a small stand up shower. I smiled and turned the water supply on to the full force play and got in, letting the steamy nebuliser work my shoulders until they started to relax. A hand started to wash my aching crotch and when I opened my eyes Missy was there. We embraced under the hot water system, letting our clapper and digit roam. I reached behind her and cupped her cheeks, spreading them so the water could run down the shot of her ass. She breathed heavily into my ear but I could tell apart she was looking over my articulatio humeri. I glanced behind me to see disco biscuit standing there watching us. Missy turned me around to face up Adam, grabbed my breast and pulled me back against her.

disco biscuit stepped into the exhibitioner and leaned against me, making me the eye of the sandwich. As he slowly got hard again ( Good boy, Good boy ! ) his erecting worked its way up between my thighs until the tip of it was against my fold. I arched my back away from Missy, riding the top of his terminal and smothering it with my wetness. God, it was so hot ! I could feel the warmheartedness radiating through my fork. Then miss ran her hands down the outsides of my thighs and bent on my knee joint while picking me up. With me dangling in her strong weapon, Adam leaned forward and Missy, with agonizing subnormality, lowered me towards go 's throbbing tool. She thrust her rose hip back and Forth River, brushing the tip of him along the solid length of my lips. He found his way home and missy let me settle down onto him. My eyes got really wide as I accepted his girth. My dead body stretched to suit him and the sensation literally took my intimation away. God, it felt so trade good to be full ! I looked down and…shit ! I only had half of him inside me. I leaned my headland back on Missy 's berm and grunted.

'' Ugh ! Oh God, that feels so good ! Please establish me to a greater extent ! Please… '' Missy let me fall some more and then Adam started thrusting. I thought my lungs were going to fare out my pharynx, but I wanted to feel all of him inside me.

'' You are so tight ! '' Adam exclaimed. I squeezed PC muscles, hanging onto him and making his eyes bulge out. I had my implements of war around girl 's neck, my legs around disco biscuit 's waist and with them taking most of my system of weights I could pivot my hips, letting XTC tinct me in places I 'd never been touched before.

Finally I got to the point that he was completely inside me and I was able to suspire again. I rocked my pelvis, Missy bounced me up and down and hug drug thrust wildly, pinning missy to the wall with me in the midriff. I gathered my hanker fuzz and twisted it into a big braid, letting the closing fall between us, tickling our pubic bone. Adam was grunting loudly, I was screaming with pleasure and Missy tried not to mistake and diminish down. I picked my genu up to my thorax and put my tiny feet on XTC 's shoulders, allowing him deeper access than I 'd ever felt. I could feel him banging the hindquarters of my puss and the sensations sent me into the most intense orgasm I 'd ever experience. I saw colors I did n't acknowledge existed, heard my voice make strait I 'd never heard. Adam bellowed again and emptied into my spasming body. I could find the warmth spread inside me as jet after jet erupted from him. The spasm rocked my cervix and sent me over the bound again, riding waving after undulation of pleasure. I never wanted it to stop ! Adam kissed me like a man gone mad, crushing his lips against mine, stuffing his knife into my sass, searching out mine. We wound them together for what seemed like hr. Slowly Adam withered and fell out. I put my peg down and tried to stand, which did n't work. I sank to the base and leaned back against the wall, letting the warm piddle round against my thorax while I caught my intimation. I looked down between my legs and my lips were still distended from the pounding I 'd received. They were yawning open and Adam 's seed oozed out of me, then the water washed it down the drain leaving white trails on the roofing tile. I looked up at girl."Thank you,"I said silently.
"No, thank you two !"Adam kissed miss, then proceeded to soap her up and rinse her off with the spray wand. After soaping her privates he held the nebulizer there, playing the H2O super acid across her clit."Oh ! rightfield there, right there !"They were in their own little world, so I stood up, got out and dried off.

In a few moment I heard Missy occur again. They emerged with wacky grins on their faces and soon we were all getting dressed, but there was a huge silence in the room. None of us quite knew what to say. Adam spoke first. `` Um, I really need to get home. My wife is going to marvel what the hell happened to me and I do n't postulate any more crap from her right now. Is there any way I could see you two again ? Or is this just some magical thing that happened, never to be repeated ?"

I looked at him with my big round eyes and gave him my best puppy-dog look. `` I certainly HOPE I 'll see you again. But I have to assure you you 've set the bar pretty high gear. God Almighty knows what you do on your secondly escort ! '' Missy laughed.

'' I 've never done anything like this before either but I 'm biz again. go forth me your number and we 'll try to figure something out."

And later on that week we did…