Right guys. This is my first fib so give me some genuine feedback please. This narrative does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a template. I want to do things differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the characters. Who you want to see rape, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the succeeding chapter. It 's that simple. leave behind some input on what you would care to happen in piece 2 and itll be up this clip next calendar week.


Cara had had decent

She had had enough of her overly protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively aggressive father and his unpredictable outbursts of choler. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little dickhead of a blood brother who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was time to get her screwing revenge

Ever since Cara can think of, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the head. Having the dirtiest thinking, the grisly fantasies about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the muckiest, craziest gripe around. No one knew this though. She put on a window dressing of being polite little shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the nominal head she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the substantial her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was normal. She sat at the dinner tabular array and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the lords orison along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully quiet tonight'her father asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her begetter gave her a discombobulate look. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to wind up that prison term. That 's when Caras Night of revenge started.

The door flew open and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding artillery. They moved towards the terrorize family.

'What the fuck'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his family

'SIT THE piece of tail Down'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the fathers head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a bullet up her pussy, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the figures

Caras father sat down. By this point Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his expression buried in his handwriting and his mother was trying to stay equanimity for his sake.

'What do you need ? Please. If its money that you want just shoot it. You can take in anything. delight just dont hurt us'Caras mother begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of robbed a bank now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guy wire was holding and proceeded to pull out four blindfolds and 3 art object of foresighted rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras father was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half involve

His query did n't ask a talk solution. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a hairgrip of his neck and wrapped the blindfold round his face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded hooligan then proceeded to tie his hands behind his back with one of the firearm of the ropes and did the same with his stage. He then tossed Ted onto the level where he could n't proceed. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life. As ecstasy clung on to her, she did n't have a clew what to do. Her hubby was tied up on the floor and there was strangers, severe strangers in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the neediness ? Norah did n't want to do it the answer but was sure she was going to feel out.

The leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in reply. She did n't desire to second down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to address to your guests now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to back down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her rightfield in the expression and she fell to the trading floor. Crying uncontrollably and nose bleeding, Norah was shocked. X was completely terrified and ran to the corner, crying all the while.

While the slaughter escalated, Cara just sat there. Calm and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the whole shot. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her wholly family unit

While all this was going on, the other 6 figures just stood there. Overseeing the cruel treatment of this hapless family. The plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me slit. I 'm about to leave this room with your beautiful daughter. If you want her back alive, I suggest you do n't move. My friends will be staying here so unless you want a heater through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and bedevil her up and went towards the stair. He stopped abruptly and turned towards hug drug

'Little boy, look at your pathetic pussy of a dad and slut whore cunt of a female parent. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. face forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the steps


When they got up there, Cara could speak freely.

'This is the fucking most unhinged matter EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your vocalisation down man, do you want them to know your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you sure about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your Brother terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me Dodge ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you sure you want to go through with this ? It 's your phratry ...'

'My menage ? You mean the Lapplander mob that 's treated me like shit for 17 years ? No Dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

dodging just looked into her heart. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... immorality ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, evidence me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character developing ? Want to know how Cara knows Dodge ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

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