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I glanced across at her and laughed. She was pulling a sappy look at me from the early side of the bus, and I could n't help but giggle along with her.
Marissa was beautiful. She had long, platinum blonde hair that hung down to her shoulder joint steel, or at least she would deliver. At the moment it was dyed dark brown and was held in a liberal bun atop her headway. Her face was kind and seemed to foretell a good prison term without her actually having to say anything. She had a short-change, slender body-build, about 5'2, and steadfastly B-cup breasts. Today she was wearing a low cut green top with a dark, spread out vest and a flowered patterned skirt. I was wearing blue jean and a T-shirt.
I had a massive crush on her, but she had a boyfriend, and I was content just to be her friend.
'' What are you staring me for, Ben ? '' she teased with a cheeky grin. I could n't assist but admire how endearing she was. I could n't believe I was lucky enough to know a lady friend who was so pretty and risible. And she played video secret plan ! I was more of an XBox fan, whereas she played online game like conference of caption, but we still had that in common. She also had an incredibly cheeky and often dirty horse sense of humor. She was too good to be true. And yet there we were.
'' I was just looking at your goofy face, how about ? '' I countered with another laugh.
'' Oh, ouch. '' she said `` I do n't mean I 'll ever convalesce from that. ``
I laughed yet again, and we continued to trade jokes and favorable insults along with our former friend as the bus took us home from school. I was in 11th grade along with most of my mates, but Marissa was a yr older. None of us even noticed the age difference, we all got along so well.

We soon neared my point, and as I stood and prepared to depart with my best friend Matt, the small Angel Falls opposite me looked up.
'' Oh, hey Ben ? Can I be really annoying ? ``
I was surprised, but eagre to help. `` What do you need ? ``
'' wellspring my parents are out of town and I 'm staying with a friend, but she lives across town and this bus does n't go anywhere near her plaza. Is it alright if I borrow your phone and impart her a call so she can come and beak me up from my place ? ``
I had no problem with this, and quickly offered her my Mobile phone.
'' Thanks so much, Ben. ``
'' No problem. '' I replied with a shrug. As a skinny 17 yr old Virgo the Virgin who had never been in a serious relationship, I could never say no to a fairly girlfriend, even if I wanted to. I was n't super skinny, or large, in fact at first glance I was in alright shape, but I was n't especially muscly or sporty like a lot of the gym junkies I was friends with at school. I was more cognitive content to sit and take or play a picture game than kick a ball around, though I was always More than felicitous to get a bit physical if the opportunity arose. I quite enjoyed dodgeball ( whether I was any full at it was another story altogether ) but it did n't help that I was an athsmatic. So it was no wonder girls did n't look to see me as boyfriend material. I had lots of distaff acquaintance, just none that saw me as potentially something more. Or so I thought.
Marissa finished speaking with her friend and gave a slight moue that almost made me disappear to the floor. She handed me my phone back and looked out the window.
'' So what 's the harm ? '' I inquired.
'' Eh, my supporter ca n't get to me very soon, so I 'll throw to wait at my spot for a few hours before she can follow and get me. ``
I saw an opportunity to pass more prison term with this amazing Danton True Young woman, and so I seized it without hesitation.
'' Well, you could hold off at my berth. We could play some game, watch some suspect TV and just bum around until your booster can hail get you, then she can pick you up from there. My mum might even give you a ride, even well-fixed. ``
She smiled `` That 's sweetness, but is n't that a bit difficult ? I would n't need to impose. ``
I shook my head `` No imposition. Mum and Amber ( my younger sister ) would love you, and you know I already do. '' I almost choked. Had I just told her I loved her ? I had. Oh god.
But she did n't seem to notice, so I pushed on. `` I promise, it wo n't be that hard. ``
'' Giggidy ! '' she said immediately, not missing probability to make a begrime trick. We all laughed, and she thanked me and agreed to come to my house until her friend picked her up.
Matthew had n't missed that I was taking the chance to expend prison term with Marissa, and nudged me in the costa with his elbow as soon as she looked away.
'' Eh ? Eh ? '' he said, sounding amazingly like Eric Idle in that Monty Python sketch.
'' Shuttup ! '' I chuckled, giving him a light shove. He laughed some more, but I was aced more hassle as he was distracted by another admirer of ours.
I turned back to take care at Marissa, who was gazing out the windowpane again.
Whether she had noticed my little slip or not, I did have intercourse this daughter. Even if she was spoken for, I could n't help my feelings.

Upon arriving at the bus stop, I stepped out into open air with Marissa, my best friend and his Twin sister. The four of us walked to the corner where I bid the sib Au Revoir and wandered to my own home with a gorgeous goddess at my position. The two of us joked and laughed all the way there, and I was still chuckling when I opened the door and called out through our small house to let my family know that I was abode. My parents had never married, and they had split when I was 5 and my sister was 2. We lived with mum, but saw our Padre often enough. I was gladiolus that my parents were on safe price, which was more than I could say for many masses I know.
Our house was small, but homely. there was just enough way for the essentials.
I wandered into the kitchen, not surprised by the deficiency of response, and discovered a small notation saying that my mum and sister had gone to bide with a booster for the dark, leaving me solo with Marissa.
'' Looks like it 's just you and me for the next few 60 minutes. '' I shrugged apologetically.
'' That 's ticket, I 'm sure we 'll pull through. ``
'' Oh, I do n't lie with, '' I replied with a smirk. `` If I decide to turn evil while we 're here I doubt there 's a lot you can do to stop me. '' I then glanced at my skinny arms `` Oh wait ... ''
'' Haha, oh I do n't conceive I 'll be able to manage such huge muscles. '' Marissa laughed, and I laughed with her.
I asked if she wanted to watch a movie, and she agreed, so I put on a funny remark motion picture for us to follow while I fixed us some popcorn and pizza pie in the kitchen. The way our kitchen and waiting room elbow room were set up allowed me to talk to Marissa and watch the movie while I made us food.
We both found Steve Carrell amusing, so Get smartness turned out to be a well option.
We compared it to early movies, and talked about our dearie, and continued to do so when we had finished the pizza and moved onto the popcorn. I sat on the Lapplander couch opposite her initially, but by the time the film was almost over we had somehow moved ourselves right next to each former in the sum of the couch. There was a tense moment in the moving picture, so we had stopped talking to watch.
I could feel the skin of her bare arm brushing against mine, and it was like an electric shock right through my soundbox. I was taller than her, and as such had a great sight down the top of her low cut shirt. My cock rose in my dungaree, and I shifted so that it was n't obvious. The meanness was something I was n't use to, and I did n't know what to do. I did n't want to be rude by moving away, and I could n't make a move on a girl who was spoken for, so I remained still, hoping I would n't do anything that ruined the moment. My breath was coming quickly, and I glanced again down her top. She was wearing a lacy Andrew Dickson White bra beneath and I was finding it harder and concentrated to hide the bulge in my jean. If she turned and looked down, I 'd be in hot water.
I looked up as she turned to me, and smiled. She smiled back and she was so close I could see the patterns in her irises.
I could n't bear it anymore. She was too beautiful. I quickly stood, turning to hide my raging foul-up, and walked to the kitchen.
'' What 's up ? '' she asked.
'' zip. '' I replied, fishing for a sprite from the electric refrigerator, then just stood there drinking it, hoping my erecting would fade.
'' cum back over here, it 's cold. ``
I returned reluctantly, and sat down at the edge of the couch, but she moved along and lay down across my chest and rested her head on my shoulder, still facing the TV.
What was she doing ? She had a beau, and he was a nice guy. We got along well enough, and I had nix against him. I decided it was prudent to take up the fact that she was taken, more to discourage myself from doing something stupid than anything else. I was confused by her behaviour, but did n't think for a second she would ever be treasonable, and decided it was just my mental imagery that she was acting strangely.
'' So, how 's Jeff ? ``
She was mute for a moment, and I was incertain as to whether or not she 'd heard me. But before I could repeat myself she spoke.
'' He broke up with me. ``
I was shocked. Last I had heard they were a happy couple, no problems at all.
The next thing I knew she had turned around and was sobbing into my shoulder. I wrapped my implements of war around her instinctively, no longer worried about my problem downstairs, instead thinking of how I could make her feel better.
She started talking, about how Jeff had been very distant lately, about how he had finally told her he loved soul else, an old flame of his, and how she was exclusive as of two sidereal day ago.
I sat quietly and listened, dutifully nodding and shaking my question where necessary. She was really disturbed, and I had no idea how I could make for her back to her old self.
When the level was finished, she looked up into my eye. Once again, we were very close. She smelled wonderful, sweet and minty.
'' Whats wrong with me, Ben ? ``
'' nil. '' I responded immediately. `` You are the funniest, coolest, most beautiful girl I know, Marissa. Jeffrey is a fool for letting you go. I ca n't believe he does n't realize what a grab you are. '' I stared back into her eyes intently. I meant every watchword, and I needed her to now that.
'' Any guy would be More than lucky to take you. If you were mine, I 'd never let you go. ``
She was mute for a bit, and I was worried that I 'd gone too far.
'' I 've always thought you were a really great guy, Ben ''
Then she closed her eyes and kissed me.
My intellect went dummy. Her rim crushed against mine, and her tongue forced against my mouth.
I did n't know what to do. Here I was, getting kissed by the little girl I loved, and I was sitting there like a statue. That would n't do. I started kissing her back.
I opened my mouthpiece and our tongues twisted and dueled, our spittle intermixture and swapping back talk.
Eventually we had to come up for air.
'' Marissa ... '' I began, not knowing how to go. What does one say when one is kissing the most beautiful girl in the world ?
'' It 's o.k., Ben. I 've been thinking about this for a long time. You 've always been so kind to me, and I 've noticed the way you look at me when you think no one is looking. I like it. '' she finished with a grinning that melted my heart.
I felt her reach down between us and rub the front of my jeans. I was in heaven.
She unzipped my fly and started rubbing again, this time with only my boxers between her bare skin and mine. I did n't consume a rap, so that made thing simpler.
By this point the movie was over and the credits were rolling, but neither of us cared.
When I reached up and pulled at her undershirt, she broke the kiss so that we could pull out it and her top off. I decided to do the right field matter before we went any further.
'' Are you sure about this ? ``
'' Yes ! '' she panted `` I need this so badly. ``
'' What about security ? ``
'' I 'm on the pill. ``
And with that her bra was fully exposed to the air and my eye. It was netted than I had initially thought, and I could see the dark patch where her nipple were, which only made me harder.
I only had a brief moment to stare before she crushed her back talk against mine again.
I raised my hips so that we could draw in my jeans and boxer down, and finally my tool sprang loose.
She eagerly wrapped her hand around it and started stroking.
I thought that the kissing was respectable. This was great. I gasped and arched my rearwards some more, pleasure shooting through my body as her small hand slid up and down my careen solid 6 inches.
'' You like that ? Yeah ? You like that do n't you ? '' Marissa teased with a mischievous grin. This was a side of her I 'd never seen, a sexier, hornier slope. I liked it.
I had often wondered at whether a female child 's hired man would feel different to my own when stroking up and down my junk, and I now knew. It felt a million times better. I could almost feel every curve and ridge on her lowly palms as they rubbed up and down on the sensitive skin of my virgin cock.
She slid up my body and I helped her remove her skirt, and then her bra, and finally her panties.
I gazed at a body to rival that of Aphrodite herself.
Firm, perky breast with 10 cent nipple stood out at tending, just begging to be squeezed and groped.
My centre travelled south to her beautiful cunt. It was topped by a tuft of dark curly hair, and I could see her engorged button poking out of her folds, eagre to be fondled and rubbed.
Reaching up and taking a breast in each hand I fondled while she continued to stroke up and down my member.
For about 5 min we just stayed like that, with her sitting on my leg, rubbing herself along me, sharing her wetness. I had no experience with women, but she seemed wetter than any woman I had seen in porn videos on the net. It was incredibly titillating, feeling her juice run down the sides of my thigh, while her kitty slither across the top if my leg.
I decided it was n't fair to let her do all the work, so i reached down and started rubbing two fingers in between her folds.
The core was instantaneous. She closed her eyes and purred softly, humping at my digit slightly. Feeling more confident, I slid into her a little more, and she purred loader. Then I began moving my wholly fingers completely in and out of of her, which she again responded to. As a finishing touch, I stretched out my thumb and gave her clit a flimsy rub/flick with every inwards stroke. At this point Marissa opened her sassing and mourned loudly. I discovered that giving this houri pleasure was actually even more arousing to me than her helping hand on my manhood.
Suddenly, she stopped stroking me and pulled away from my hands, moving above my pecker and placing it at the entrance to her glorious hole.
'' Marissa ... '' I started. I had to tell her I was a virgin. It did n't serve that I had n't masturbated in a few days and had no clue how long I 'd last.
'' Shhhhh ... I know. '' and with that she impaled herself on my member.
Marissa herself was not a Virgin, but she was incredibly tight. At that here and now I did n't suppose I could delight anything in the existence more than how lots I was enjoying warm wet pussy wrapped around my Virgo the Virgin dick.
She slid up and down, up and down, not bothering to startle out slow, just riding me with abandon, moaning and gasping as I pistoned in and out of her.
'' Oh, fuck me, bang me Ben, your cock feels so good inside me. ``
I happily obliged, humping up into her, matching her own push. I found that I was able to hold off my coming for foresighted than I though I would, and so I got a bit bluff. I reached down between us and started rubbing her clit again, eliciting a shriek of delight from her. She did n't stop, but after a few minutes that seemed like an timelessness she slowed down slightly so she could gaze into my eyes while I stared right back.
'' Oh Marissa, you feel so good '' I groaned `` Your puss is so squiffy and warm up. ``
'' That 's right, babe. You like the look of my pussycat ? Its all yours now. I cant wait to experience all your hot cum. I want to come with you, Ben. ``
This encouraged me, so I gave an special hard thrust up into her besotted cunt, and she threw her head back and howled with pleasure.
We continued like this for about 5 to a greater extent minutes, when all of a sudden, she stopped riding and looked me in the eye again
'' piece of tail me from behind. Give it to me, my love. ``
Those terminal two run-in affected me in a way I did n't think potential. She loved me. And I was most certainly hers. I had been for a long sentence. I stood, lifting her up with me, before her summerset over with my prick still inside her and setting her down feather, letting her crease over the couch. I did n't have sex how I found the effectiveness to do this, and I did n't care.
A started fucking her as tough and dissipated as I could. Marissa cried out in pleasure, arching her back, I saw her tongue peal out the edge of her mouth.
I leant down and rest my chest on her back, letting my go forth hired hand come in up to embrace her tit while my right reached under her, looking for her puss. I found her own hand already there, so i took over, allowing her to use both limb to patronize herself on the couch while I thrusted into her cunt from behind.
The meld aid from my prick and my fingers was causing her to convulse and gasp more often, and I knew I would n't finale a great deal longer.
'' I 'm close, do n't stop ! '' she cried, jerking back at my jabbing more erratically.
'' Me too.. ! ``
I pumped into her with all the might I could possibly muster up, and felt the cum stewing in my orb.
I grunted, and she screamed `` Do n't stop ! Shoot it in me ! Shoot all your cum inside me ! ``
I was past the degree of no return. With one final poke I pushed my turncock into her depths as far as it would go, bottoming out at her cervix uteri, before unleashing load after consignment of hot white cum into her convulsing body.
'' OH ! OH ! OH ! OH GOD YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS ! ! ! ! ! '' she wailed as her own climax struck her. I had never come as much or as backbreaking as I was right then. The amount of cum that I was gushing into her matt-up unreal. She shook and writhed beneath me, her kitty-cat tightening more than than I would have thought possible around me as I continued to pump more seed than I had ever done before.
'' I FEEL IT INSIDE MEEEEE ! ! ! '' her climax continued, crashing over her like a tsunami of pleasure, again and again. Our bodies were one, at that minute. There was nothing but she and me.

After what seemed like a beautiful eternity, we finally stopped thrashing and lay down on the couch, spooning. I kissed her cervix, then her nerve, then finally her lips as she turned to me. This osculation was soft, passionate.
'' I love you. '' I said. right there, holding her raw body in my coat of arms, I was n't afraid.
'' I love you too. '' she replied with a soft smile.
We lay there for a while, neither of us wanting to end the consequence.

I had a tactile sensation that everything was going to be better from then on .