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The luminescence from the screen lit up the small bedroom in an flat building in the small hours of the morning. Eva Michaels was twirling her hair between her dainty fingers, contemplating the offer that the laptop was illuminating. The new Holistic Virtual Reality headband had only been usable for three days now and already it was sweeping across the major planet like a plague. The HVR dance orchestra was the latest breakthrough in immersion technology, giving it 's wearer accession to a virtual man, to a greater extent than a childlike a optical experience, a tangible sensory input filled fantasise land. The exploiter was to drop off the striation over their eyes, wait for the gimmick to calibrate to brain undulation through the retina with a little technological witchcraft that Eva knew null about, and hold until you were whisked away.

The sign up pattern blew past her, and in no meter the onscreen instructions prompted the exploiter to equip the HVR stria. Eva released her hair and wiped her eyes with her palms.

'' Okay, this is it. Finally, I can see what the snake pit the fuss is over this affair '' Eva muttered to herself as she settled into her soft bed, ensuring puff for what she was informed could pack a spell. She brought the band up to her heart, strapped it securely and reclined.

'' Welcome user '', came the sultry voice of the game guidebook. `` The following tutorial will help you to interact with the world around you, as you are physically in an immobile state there is no danger of bodily harm at any stage of use. All interactions will be triggered by persuasion, to achieve the intimately level of gaming experience the Divine urge you to let your imagination wander. The world is filled with creator characters of light and dark, other users are found throughout the land. All natural process have an impact on the destiny of your character reference, dangerous undertaking awaits you newcomer. The road to Lavellan is open to you.

The feeling of rich earth hit her anterior naris, breathing in instinctually Eva realised she was standing, barefoot and clad in her night shirt, in the midst of a favorable wood. Tree proboscis stretched up to the heavens, crowned with farewell in shades icteric and orange. The Lapp leaves coated the priming coat beneath her feet. Eva looked around her, there was a pathway ahead of her winding through the trees.

'' I guess that 's my heading, would be courteous to screw for sure though '' she thought as she scouted around for clues. The ground beneath her groundwork began to radiate, a few fiery step stepped away from her toward the route. `` sanctum asshole, ask and ye shall receive. '' she chuckled as she started down the path.

Following the pace Eva walked in awe of her milieu, the chatter of birds, smells of the timberland, light and phantasma scattered across the ground. All so real, down to the gruntle breeze flowing up the path that danced across her peel. It was n't long before the path turned into a clearing, the generator of the cool duck soup revealed to be a falls. The sun shimmering on the cascading water, the flaccid grass around the boundary of the pool below beckoned to Eva and she responded, wading into the pool clothed. The water was aplomb and welcoming, fully submerging herself Eva made a beeline for the waterfall. Climbing up onto some rocks led to the uncovering of a cave entrance, one that had light flickering on its inside wall.

'' Ca n't get ache the right way ? May as well check it out '' She thought as she walked inside. The entering gave way to a tunnel, beautiful markings etched in the Stone, a odorous odour coming from within energise her senses.

The sound of a woman singing came from the tunnel too, Eva rounded the last quoin to obtain a room beautifully decorated with living thing as though mother nature herself originated right here. Eva was so dumbstruck by the majesty of this hush-hush Sion that she was slacken to agnise that she stood aspect to case with a stunning elven looking woman. Her hide was a pallid viridity, like perfective tense porcelain, with dark green vines tattooed from head to toe. Long black hair adorned her side, and fell to her breasts which bulged out from the brim of her skin plastered leotard. Her slender finger were wrapped around the grip of a ladle stirring a steaming caldron over a fire.

'' Good day traveller, I am Meredith. Keeper of the plantation, what brings you to my home ? '' the fair sex smiled peacefully at her as she bottled her brew.

'' Oh my, did n't see you there. So sorry to just barge in like this, my epithet is Eva. I was on my way to the land of Lavellan when I found the pool and I could n't aid myself, I hope I have n't intruded ''

Meredith walked closer to her, her eyes scanning Eva 's full length, this made her blatantly aware of her dripping form and her midget nipples pushing against the clinging fabric of her Nox shirt. `` Not at all sweet shaver, all are welcome here. '' She leaned forward, exposing her cleavage, picked up a pitcher of golden syrupy liquid and offered her a broad flagon. `` love mead, made it myself earlier today. ``

'' Thank you. '' Eva accepted the deglutition, after a belittled test taste she gulped half the flagon, the mead was sugariness, soothing her throat as she swallowed. `` This is amazing stuff, what 's in it ? ``

'' Bit of everything really, it 's a extra formula. To facilitate you along the way. ``

'' What do you mean ? '' she asked, but as the lyric left her lip Eva felt her body start to warm and tingle. A Wave of electricity rippled through her and a blink of an eye of gold swirled around her. `` What the ? What was that ? ! I feel ... I ... feel..really good. Really really good ! '' she exclaimed as she ran her fingers through her tomentum lifting it from her neck.

'' That, was an xp points bonus for finding my cave. It will help you to be more successful as you progress. The sudden rush of power is what caused you to finger euphoric, it has other English effects but nothing to be concerned about. ``

Eva licked her lips, the warmth and tingling she felt was now focused between her ramification. `` Is there uhm ... is there an antidote or something for the side effects ? I think this might raise to be a bit ... distracting ?

George Meredith lowered her oculus and swayed her coxa seductively from incline to side, `` I have an approximation '' she said as she raised an eyebrow, her men sliding from her coxa, up along her stomach stopping to clasp her leather clad bosom.

Eva gasped, she had never been this aroused by another woman. She watched, biting her hind end lip, as Meredith turned her backrest to her to unzip her unitard which peeled away from her pale green skin. Eva could n't pluck her eyes from James Howard Meredith as she doubled over to skid the garment down her long elven legs, giving her a mouthwatering thought of her lithe physical structure. She turned to face Eva, walking up to her, she offered her hand. Eva clasped her hand to James Howard Meredith and followed her to a petal covered plant. Raising her arms above her head allowed her shirt to be removed, exposing her already cold nipples to the assuredness air. The flaccid plant gave way beneath Eva as she sank, gently being pushed back by Merediths affectionate palm on her damp chest.

'' I do n't know what to do, I 've never ... '' Eva blurted out, interrupted by Meredith pressing her sass against hers, parting them to slide her knife against Evas.

'' Mmmm '' Eva groaned as she tasted the elven sweetheart. Meredith pulled away from her conquest, `` Now treasured tike, let me take care of you. I will register you the wonders of the orchard '' With that, she raised her hands and curled her fingers, the plant beneath Eva rumbled and affectionateness emanated from beneath her. `` Are you doing that, controlling that plant ? '' she asked as she rubbed against the velvety petals.

'' It is my influence, the plantation helps me get what I want and right now, I want you ''

Meredith dropped to her knees placing her medallion on Eva 's legs to spread them apart. She shuffled closer cupping Eva 's pale ball in her workforce, slipping till her fingers pinched and rolled her nipples. Eva let out a whimper and arched her back, granting her better admittance to her excited breast. ardent lips wrapped around her aroused nip and she groaned with desire, her breasts tingled as George Meredith teeth grazed her sore tip. She moved down the girls dead body licking and nipping as she went, pausing above her smooth twat to push Eva 's legs up to her chest.

Eva 's twat glistened in the firelight of the cave, James Meredith tongue stretched out eagerly caressing her fold, from the bottom, all the way to her hard clit. Poking her tongue in and out flicking lightly against her prize, Meredith encircled Eva 's nub, sucking it in between her sass. `` Oh my God, that feels so bloody good '' Eva moaned as she threw her head back, reveling in the animal pleasance pulsing from her throbbing clit.

Slipping a finger into her new toy 's drippage hole, Meredith felt her own foreplay reaching a dizzying land. She snapped her finger and the flora beneath Eva erupted in vines, wrapping themselves around both women suspending them in the air. Meredith locked her lips to Evas and held her stuffy to her warm trunk, grinding sensually against her devotee as the plant made its way to the wet fold of her pussy. Eva felt the vine get-up-and-go into her hole and slip up to the hilt, rocking her consistence with undulation of joy as it pulsed and vibrated within her. With a tit firmly caught between her teeth Meredith moaned and shuddered in rank ecstacy, the plants velvety rod sliding in and out of her depths.

Eva felt herself losing ascendancy over her physical structure, her world was simply a collection of highly excited nerve endings. She thought she could stand no more when James Meredith waved her hand above her and the vines doubled their feat, pounding furiously.

'' recede yourself to the delight tiddler, that 's it ... '' Meredith wrapped her digit into Eva 's hair and pulled back her mind, watching as she slipped into orgasm.

Eva 's body convulsed as the plants natural action overcame her, she let out a scream of delight as her climax hit her. She ground her clamping pussycat against the vines, as George Meredith fell back Eva felt the vines twitch and jerky, they were cumming with James Meredith. The warm liquid shot up Eva 's satiated pussy making her shudder as she came down from her richly. Once emptied the vines slowly lowered the cleaning woman onto the velvet seat of the plant.

As they lay there recovering, Eva cuddled into her fan incline and cooed, `` That was unbelievable. I do n't have sex what to say. ``

James Meredith smiled as she rose and began to dress, `` This res publica is full of many more surprisal traveller, your journey will be a fulfilling one. '' she says with a twinkle in her eye, `` I thank you for your ... company, I hope your adventures in Lavellan lead you back to my orchard. ``

To be continued ...