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I glanced across at her and laughed. She was pulling a silly face at me from the other side of the bus, and I could n't assist but titter along with her.
Marissa was beautiful. She had long, platinum blonde hair that hung down to her shoulder blade, or at to the lowest degree she would experience. At the mo it was dyed colored brown and was held in a free bun atop her head. Her face was kind and seemed to forebode a well time without her actually having to say anything. She had a short, slender shape, about 5'2, and firm B-cup breasts. Today she was wearing a low cut green top with a dark, open air vest and a floral patterned skirt. I was wearing jeans and a t-shirt.
I had a massive crush on her, but she had a fellow, and I was content just to be her friend.
'' What are you staring me for, Ben ? '' she teased with a cheeky smiling. I could n't facilitate but look up to how adorable she was. I could n't believe I was lucky enough to know a girl who was so pretty and amusing. And she played video biz ! I was more of an XBox fan, whereas she played online games like conference of Legends, but we still had that in vernacular. She also had an incredibly cheeky and often unsportsmanlike sense of humor. She was too good to be on-key. And yet there we were.
'' I was just looking at your goofy face, how about ? '' I countered with another laugh.
'' Oh, ouch. '' she said `` I do n't think I 'll ever convalesce from that. ``
I laughed yet again, and we continued to swop trick and well-disposed vilification along with our former booster as the bus took us home from school. I was in 11th mark along with virtually of my mates, but Marissa was a year older. None of us even noticed the age difference, we all got along so well.

We soon neared my stop, and as I stood and prepared to go with my C. H. Best friend lustrelessness, the minor saint opposite me looked up.
'' Oh, hey Ben ? Can I be really annoying ? ``
I was surprised, but eager to help. `` What do you need ? ``
'' Well my parents are out of town and I 'm staying with a acquaintance, but she lives across townsfolk and this bus does n't go anywhere near her place. Is it alright if I borrow your headphone and give her a birdsong so she can come and pick me up from my place ? ``
I had no problem with this, and quickly offered her my roving phone.
'' Thanks so much, Ben. ``
'' No trouble. '' I replied with a shrug. As a skinny 17 class old virgin who had never been in a serious relationship, I could never say no to a pretty girl, even if I wanted to. I was n't tiptop skinny, or prominent, in fact at first glance I was in alright shape, but I was n't especially muscly or sporty like a lot of the gym junkies I was ally with at schoolhouse. I was more subject to sit and register or take on a picture game than kick a orchis around, though I was always more than glad to get a bit physical if the opportunity arose. I quite enjoyed dodgeball ( whether I was any estimable at it was another floor altogether ) but it did n't help that I was an athsmatic. So it was no marvel daughter did n't seem to see me as boyfriend textile. I had lots of female acquaintance, just none that saw me as potentially something more. Or so I thought.
Marissa finished speaking with her friend and gave a little horned pout that almost made me dissolve to the floor. She handed me my phone back and looked out the window.
'' So what 's the damage ? '' I inquired.
'' Eh, my ally ca n't get to me very soon, so I 'll have to wait at my place for a few hour before she can come and get me. ``
I saw an opportunity to expend Sir Thomas More time with this amazing young womanhood, and so I seized it without hesitation.
'' Well, you could hold back at my shoes. We could bet some plot, watch some funny videos and just bum around until your friend can come get you, then she can pick you up from there. My mum might even reach you a drive, even easier. ``
She smiled `` That 's sweet, but is n't that a bit difficult ? I would n't want to bring down. ``
I shook my head `` No imposition. Mum and Amber ( my new sister ) would get it on you, and you know I already do. '' I almost choked. Had I just told her I loved her ? I had. Oh god.
But she did n't look to notice, so I pushed on. `` I promise, it wo n't be that hard. ``
'' Giggidy ! '' she said immediately, not missing fortune to make a dirty joke. We all laughed, and she thanked me and agreed to come to my theatre until her friend picked her up.
Matthew had n't missed that I was taking the opportunity to spend time with Marissa, and nudged me in the ribs with his elbow as soon as she looked away.
'' Eh ? Eh ? '' he said, sounding amazingly like Eric Idle in that Monty Python sketch.
'' Shuttup ! '' I chuckled, giving him a faint shove. He laughed some more, but I was aced Thomas More scuffle as he was distracted by another friend of ours.
I turned back to look at Marissa, who was gazing out the window again.
Whether she had noticed my little mooring or not, I did love this lady friend. Even if she was spoken for, I could n't assist my feelings.

Upon arriving at the bus check, I stepped out into open air with Marissa, my scoop ally and his twin babe. The four of us walked to the corner where I bid the siblings Au Revoir and wandered to my own home with a gorgeous goddess at my face. The two of us joked and laughed all the way there, and I was still chuckling when I opened the room access and called out through our small business firm to let my family know that I was home. My parents had never married, and they had split when I was 5 and my Sister was 2. We lived with mum, but saw our father often enough. I was glad that my parents were on good terms, which was more than I could say for many people I know.
Our theatre was belittled, but homely. there was just plenty room for the essentials.
I wandered into the kitchen, not surprised by the deficiency of response, and discovered a small government note saying that my mum and baby had gone to bide with a friend for the Nox, leaving me alone with Marissa.
'' Looks like it 's just you and me for the next few hours. '' I shrugged apologetically.
'' That 's fine, I 'm sure we 'll survive. ``
'' Oh, I do n't cognise, '' I replied with a smirk. `` If I decide to turn malefic while we 're here I doubt there 's a lot you can do to stop me. '' I then glanced at my skinny implements of war `` Oh delay ... ''
'' Haha, oh I do n't think I 'll be able-bodied to care such huge muscles. '' Marissa laughed, and I laughed with her.
I asked if she wanted to watch a motion picture, and she agreed, so I put on a funny movie for us to watch while I fixed us some popcorn and pizza in the kitchen. The way our kitchen and waiting room room were set up allowed me to blab out to Marissa and watch the film while I made us food.
We both found Steve Carrell amusing, so Get smartness turned out to be a honest choice.
We compared it to other movies, and talked about our favourites, and continued to do so when we had finished the pizza and moved onto the Zea mays everta. I sat on the same couch opposite her initially, but by the clock time the movie was almost over we had somehow moved ourselves right following to each other in the centre of the couch. There was a tense bit in the movie, so we had stopped talking to watch.
I could finger the skin of her bare arm brushing against mine, and it was like an electric shock right through my consistence. I was taller than her, and as such had a great sight down the top of her low cut shirt. My cock rose in my jeans, and I shifted so that it was n't obvious. The closeness was something I was n't use to, and I did n't get laid what to do. I did n't want to be rude by moving away, and I could n't score a move on a young woman who was spoken for, so I remained still, hoping I would n't do anything that ruined the moment. My breathing spell was coming quickly, and I glanced again down her top. She was wearing a lacy white bra beneath and I was finding it harder and harder to hide the protuberance in my blue jean. If she turned and looked down, I 'd be in hot water.
I looked up as she turned to me, and smiled. She smiled back and she was so close I could see the patterns in her irises.
I could n't bear it anymore. She was too beautiful. I quickly stood, turning to blot out my raging boner, and walked to the kitchen.
'' What 's up ? '' she asked.
'' Nothing. '' I replied, fishing for a sprite from the fridge, then just abide there drinking it, hoping my erection would languish.
'' seminal fluid back over here, it 's frigidity. ``
I returned reluctantly, and sat down at the sharpness of the redact, but she moved along and lay down across my chest and rested her head on my shoulder, still facing the TV.
What was she doing ? She had a beau, and he was a nice guy. We got along well enough, and I had nothing against him. I decided it was prudent to fetch up the fact that she was taken, more to admonish myself from doing something pudden-head than anything else. I was confused by her behavior, but did n't imagine for a second she would ever be treasonous, and decided it was just my imagination that she was acting strangely.
'' So, how 's Jeff ? ``
She was silent for a moment, and I was timid as to whether or not she 'd heard me. But before I could repeat myself she spoke.
'' He broke up with me. ``
I was shocked. Last I had heard they were a glad couple, no problems at all.
The next matter I knew she had turned around and was sobbing into my shoulder. I wrapped my arms around her instinctively, no longer worried about my problem downstairs, instead thinking of how I could get to her feel better.
She started talking, about how Jeff had been very remote lately, about how he had finally told her he loved someone else, an old flame of his, and how she was unity as of two days ago.
I sat quietly and listened, dutifully nodding and shaking my caput where necessary. She was really distress, and I had no idea how I could bring her vertebral column to her old self.
When the history was finished, she looked up into my eyes. Once again, we were very close. She smelled howling, sweet and minty.
'' Whats wrong with me, Ben ? ``
'' Nothing. '' I responded immediately. `` You are the funniest, cool, most beautiful girl I know, Marissa. Jeffrey is a sap for letting you go. I ca n't consider he does n't pull in what a arrest you are. '' I stared back into her eyes intently. I meant every word, and I needed her to now that.
'' Any guy would be more than lucky to experience you. If you were mine, I 'd never let you go. ``
She was silent for a moment, and I was worried that I 'd gone too far.
'' I 've always thought you were a really outstanding guy, Ben ''
Then she closed her centre and kissed me.
My mind went blank. Her rim crushed against mine, and her tongue forced against my lips.
I did n't know what to do. Here I was, getting kissed by the girl I loved, and I was sitting there like a statue. That would n't do. I started kissing her back.
I opened my mouth and our tongue twisted and dueled, our spit mixture and swapping sassing.
Eventually we had to number up for air.
'' Marissa ... '' I began, not knowing how to go on. What does one say when one is kissing the most beautiful girl in the public ?
'' It 's fine, Ben. I 've been thinking about this for a prospicient meter. You 've always been so kind to me, and I 've noticed the way you look at me when you think no one is looking. I like it. '' she finished with a smile that melted my heart.
I felt her reach down between us and rub the front of my dungaree. I was in heaven.
She unzipped my fly and started rubbing again, this meter with only my Boxer between her bare cutis and mine. I did n't hold a belt, so that made things simpler.
By this point the pic was over and the citation were rolling, but neither of us cared.
When I reached up and pulled at her undershirt, she broke the kiss so that we could tear it and her top off. I decided to do the right thing before we went any further.
'' Are you sure about this ? ``
'' Yes ! '' she panted `` I need this so badly. ``
'' What about protection ? ``
'' I 'm on the oral contraceptive. ``
And with that her bra was fully exposed to the air and my eyes. It was lacier than I had initially thought, and I could see the dark spots where her nipple were, which only made me harder.
I only had a brief moment to stare before she crushed her lips against mine again.
I raised my pelvis so that we could pull my jeans and boxers down, and finally my cock sprang free.
She eagerly wrapped her hand around it and started stroking.
I thought that the kissing was dependable. This was dandy. I gasped and arched my rearward some more, pleasance shooting through my body as her belittled hand slid up and down my rock solid 6 inches.
'' You like that ? Yeah ? You like that do n't you ? '' Marissa teased with a mischievous grinning. This was a side of her I 'd never seen, a sexier, aroused English. I liked it.
I had often wondered at whether a girl 's hand would feel different to my own when stroking up and down my junk, and I now knew. It felt a million clip better. I could almost palpate every bender and rooftree on her small-scale palm tree as they rubbed up and down on the sensitive skin of my virgin cock.
She slid up my eubstance and I helped her absent her skirt, and then her bra, and finally her panties.
I gazed at a physical structure to match that of Aphrodite herself.
Firm, perky chest with 10 cent nipples stood out at attention, just begging to be squeezed and groped.
My eyes travelled south to her beautiful snatch. It was topped by a tuft of morose curly hair, and I could see her pig out clit poking out of her plication, eager to be fondled and rubbed.
Reaching up and taking a breast in each hand I fondled while she continued to stroke up and down my member.
For about 5 minutes we just stayed like that, with her sitting on my leg, rubbing herself along me, sharing her wetness. I had no experience with womanhood, but she seemed wetter than any fair sex I had seen in smut videos on the net. It was incredibly titillating, feeling her juices run down the side of meat of my second joint, while her pussy slid across the top if my leg.
I decided it was n't fairly to let her do all the workplace, so i reached down and started rubbing two fingerbreadth in between her folds.
The effect was instantaneous. She closed her eyes and purred softly, humping at my fingerbreadth slightly. Feeling more confident, I slid into her a minuscule more, and she purred dock-walloper. Then I began moving my whole fingerbreadth completely in and out of of her, which she again responded to. As a finishing touch, I stretched out my ovolo and gave her clit a slight rub/flick with every inwards stroke. At this full point Marissa opened her mouth and mourned loudly. I discovered that giving this nymph pleasance was actually even more arousing to me than her helping hand on my manhood.
Suddenly, she stopped stroking me and pulled away from my hands, moving above my putz and placing it at the entrance to her glorious hole.
'' Marissa ... '' I started. I had to recite her I was a virgin. It did n't aid that I had n't masturbated in a few days and had no clue how long I 'd last.
'' Shhhhh ... I know. '' and with that she impaled herself on my member.
Marissa herself was not a virgin, but she was incredibly tight. At that moment I did n't think I could savor anything in the world More than how much I was enjoying warm wet snatch wrapped around my Virgo dick.
She slid up and down, up and down, not bothering to start out slow, just riding me with abandon, moaning and gasping as I pistoned in and out of her.
'' Oh, fuck me, make love me Ben, your turncock feel so honorable inside me. ``
I happily obliged, humping up into her, matching her own jabbing. I found that I was able to hold off my climax for longer than I though I would, and so I got a bit boldface. I reached down between us and started rubbing her clitoris again, eliciting a shriek of pleasance from her. She did n't bar, but after a few arcminute that seemed like an timeless existence she slowed down slightly so she could stare into my eye while I stared right back.
'' Oh Marissa, you feel so good '' I groaned `` Your pussy is so fast and warm up. ``
'' That 's right, sister. You like the tactile property of my pussy ? Its all yours now. I cant wait to sense all your hot cum. I want to come with you, Ben. ``
This encouraged me, so I gave an extra hard thrusting up into her fast puss, and she threw her header back and howled with pleasure.
We continued like this for about 5 more mo, when all of a sudden, she stopped riding and looked me in the eye again
'' shtup me from behind. Give it to me, my love. ``
Those last two words affected me in a way I did n't recall possible. She loved me. And I was most certainly hers. I had been for a prospicient metre. I stood, lifting her up with me, before her flip over with my dick still inside her and setting her down, letting her bend dexter over the couch. I did n't hump how I found the strong suit to do this, and I did n't care.
A started fucking her as hard and fast as I could. Marissa cried out in pleasure, arching her back, I saw her spit cast out the border of her mouth.
I leant down and remain my chest of drawers on her back, letting my leave behind deal come up to shove her tit while my right reached under her, looking for her pussycat. I found her own handwriting already there, so i took over, allowing her to use both blazonry to support herself on the lounge while I thrusted into her bitch from behind.
The combined care from my cock and my fingers was causing her to thrash and puff more often, and I knew I would n't last much longer.
'' I 'm close, do n't stop ! '' she cried, jerking back at my thrust more erratically.
'' Me too.. ! ``
I pumped into her with all the might I could possibly muster, and felt the cum stewing in my balls.
I grunted, and she screamed `` Do n't stop ! Shoot it in me ! Shoot all your cum inside me ! ``
I was past the point of no return. With one final thrust I pushed my cock into her profundity as far as it would go, bottoming out at her cervix, before unleashing loading after load of hot white cum into her convulsing body.
'' OH ! OH ! OH ! OH GOD YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS ! ! ! ! ! '' she wailed as her own climax struck her. I had never come as very much or as punishing as I was right then. The measure of cum that I was gushing into her felt unreal. She shook and writhed beneath me, her kitty-cat tightening more than I would have thought possible around me as I continued to pump more semen than I had ever done before.
'' I FEEL IT INSIDE MEEEEE ! ! ! '' her climax continued, crashing over her like a tsunami of joy, again and again. Our organic structure were one, at that moment. There was null but she and me.

After what seemed like a beautiful eternity, we finally stopped thrashing and lay down on the lounge, spooning. I kissed her neck opening, then her cheek, then finally her lips as she turned to me. This kiss was soft, passionate.
'' I love you. '' I said. right wing there, holding her naked body in my sleeve, I was n't afraid.
'' I love you too. '' she replied with a soft smile.
We lay there for a while, neither of us wanting to end the moment.

I had a feeling that everything was going to be better from then on .