Right guy wire. This is my first storey so establish me some genuine feedback please. This story does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a template. I want to do things differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the fibre. Who you want to see dishonour, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the next chapter. It 's that simple. will some input on what you would like to materialize in share 2 and itll be up this fourth dimension next calendar week.


Cara had had enough

She had had enough of her overly protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively aggressive father and his irregular flare-up of angriness. And she had had sufficiency of her disgustingly annoying short shit of a brother who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was sentence to get her ass revenge

Ever since Cara can remember, she 's always been a picayune bit messed up in the head. Having the dirtiest thoughts, the demented fantasies about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the muckiest, craziest bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a facade of being civilised piddling shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the front she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was meter to let mass see the real her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was formula. She sat at the dinner party table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the Lord prayer along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully hushed tonight'her Father of the Church asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her father gave her a fuddle look. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to end that sentence. That 's when Caras Night of revenge started.

The door flew assailable and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding guns. They moved towards the terrorised family.

'What the piece of tail'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his family

'SIT THE screw Down'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the Fatherhood head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a bullet up her pussy, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the trope

Caras father sat down. By this point Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his face buried in his manpower and his mother was trying to stay calm for his sake.

'What do you need ? Please. If its money that you want just accept it. You can feature anything. delight just dont hurt us'Caras mother begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of surcharge a bank now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guy wire was holding and proceeded to root for out four blindfolds and 3 piece of music of foresighted roach. Everyone by this stop was terrified, even Caras sire was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half demand

His dubiousness did n't ask a verbalize solution. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a adhesive friction of his neck and wrapped the blindfold round his face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded tough then proceeded to tie his hands behind his rear with one of the small-arm of the ropes and did the same with his legs. He then tossed Ted onto the trading floor where he could n't move. He was completely incapacitated.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life. As Adam clung on to her, she did n't have a clue what to do. Her married man was tied up on the floor and there was strangers, dangerous alien in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't need money what did the deficiency ? Norah did n't desire to know the answer but was sure she was going to find out.

The leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in reply. She did n't desire to back down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to speak to your client now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to back down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her right in the facial expression and she fell to the floor. Crying uncontrollably and nose bleeding, Norah was shocked. Adam was completely terrified and ran to the nook, crying all the patch.

While the massacre escalated, Cara just sat there. calm air and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the unanimous scene. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her whole family unit

While all this was going on, the other 6 name just stood there. Overseeing the savage treatment of this pathetic family. The programme was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me pussy. I 'm about to leave this elbow room with your beautiful girl. If you want her back alive, I suggest you do n't proceed. My admirer will be staying here so unless you want a bullet through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and reprimand her up and went towards the stairs. He stopped abruptly and turned towards Adam

'Little boy, look at your piteous puss of a dad and slut whore twat of a mother. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. Look forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the stairs


When they got up there, Cara could speak freely.

'This is the fucking most craziest thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your representative down man, do you want them to know your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you certain about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your brothers terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me Dodge ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you sure as shooting you want to go through with this ? It 's your family ...'

'My family ? You mean the same fellowship that 's treated me like motherfucker for 17 years ? No contrivance, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

contrivance just looked into her eyes. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... iniquity ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, tell me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded shape ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character evolution ? Want to screw how Cara knows Dodge ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

THIS IS YOUR STORY