Right guys. This is my maiden news report so turn over me some genuine feedback please. This story does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a guide. I want to do things differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the theatrical role. Who you want to see ravish, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the next chapter. It 's that simpleton. Leave some comment on what you would care to happen in part 2 and itll be up this prison term following week.


Cara had had enough

She had had enough of her overly protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively aggressive sire and his unpredictable outbursts of wrath. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little squat of a buddy who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was metre to get her fucking retaliation

Ever since Cara can remember, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the headspring. Having the dingy thoughts, the sickest fantasy about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the soggy, craziest beef around. No one knew this though. She put on a facade of being polite slight shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the front she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was clip to let people see the genuine her

Mon evening
Cara pretended everything was formula. She sat at the dinner party table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the lords appeal along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully quiet tonight'her father asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her forefather gave her a flurry look. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to finish that conviction. That 's when Caras Night of revenge started.

The door flew open and in came 7 hooded material body. All holding guns. They moved towards the terrorised family.

'What the fuck'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his family line

'SIT THE screwing down'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the fathers head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a bullet up her pussy, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the figures

Caras Father-God sat down. By this point Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his face buried in his paw and his female parent was trying to remain calmness for his sake.

'What do you want ? Please. If its money that you want just subscribe to it. You can possess anything. Please just dont hurt us'Caras mother begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of overcharge a bank now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guys was holding and proceeded to deplumate out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of long rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras father was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half demanded

His head did n't need a spoken result. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a traction of his neck and wrapped the blindfold round his face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded ruffian then proceeded to tie his hands behind his rachis with one of the man of the ropes and did the same with his legs. He then tossed Ted onto the story where he could n't move. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her biography. As Adam clung on to her, she did n't have a clew what to do. Her husband was tied up on the base and there was stranger, grievous alien in her dining room pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the need ? Norah did n't want to experience the result but was sure she was going to find out.

The leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in response. She did n't desire to back down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to verbalise to your guests now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to back down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her right in the face and she fell to the story. Crying uncontrollably and nose bleeding, Norah was shocked. Adam was completely panic-struck and ran to the nook, crying all the while.

While the mass murder escalated, Cara just sat there. equanimity and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the totally panorama. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her hale category unit

While all this was going on, the early 6 figures just stood there. Overseeing the roughshod treatment of this pathetic family. The plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me pussy. I 'm about to leave this room with your beautiful daughter. If you want her back animated, I suggest you do n't travel. My champion will be staying here so unless you want a bullet through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and reprimand her up and went towards the steps. He stopped abruptly and turned towards X

'Little boy, look at your pathetic cunt of a dad and adulteress whore twat of a mother. After I 'm done with this kick I 'm coming down for you. Look forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the stairs


When they got up there, Cara could address freely.

'This is the fucking most wild thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your vocalisation down man, do you want them to know your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you sure about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your sidekick terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me scheme ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you sure you want to go through with this ? It 's your family ...'

'My family ? You mean the Lapplander family that 's treated me like shit for 17 old age ? No Dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

dodge just looked into her eyes. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... evil ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, tell me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character development ? Want to experience how Cara knows Dodge ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

THIS IS YOUR STORY