Right guy cable. This is my number one story so give me some genuine feedback please. This story does n't specifically regard any sex. It 's just a template. I want to do things differently here. I want to know what you want me to do to the fictitious character. Who you want to see raped, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the succeeding chapter. It 's that simple. depart some comment on what you would like to happen in role 2 and itll be up this clip next week.


Cara had had enough

She had had enough of her overly protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had enough of her obsessively belligerent founding father and his unpredictable ebullition of anger. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little shit of a brother who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was time to get her fucking revenge

Ever since Cara can remember, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the promontory. Having the filthy thinking, the sickest fantasies about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the miry, brainsick bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a facade of being genteel niggling shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the front she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the material her

Mon evening
Cara pretended everything was normal. She sat at the dinner party table and did what was expected of her. She ate her greens. She said please and thank you. She muttered the overlord petition along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully muted tonight'her father asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her don gave her a confused look. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to finish that sentence. That 's when Caras nighttime of revenge started.

The door flew heart-to-heart and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding hitman. They moved towards the terrify family.

'What the shag'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his family

'SIT THE FUCK DOWN'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the fathers head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a bullet up her cunt, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the material body

Caras father sat down. By this point Lil Adam had climed on to his female parent and was crying uncontrollably. He had his face buried in his hands and his mother was trying to stay on calm for his sake.

'What do you want ? Please. If its money that you want just take it. You can have anything. Please just dont hurt us'Caras mother begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of soak a money box now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guys was holding and proceeded to pull out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of foresighted rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras Father was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half demand

His question did n't need a spoken answer. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a traveling bag of his neck opening and wrapped the blindfold round his fount. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded hooligan then proceeded to tie his custody behind his back with one of the pieces of the forget me drug and did the Lapp with his ramification. He then tossed Ted onto the floor where he could n't move. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her liveliness. As disco biscuit clung on to her, she did n't experience a clue what to do. Her husband was tied up on the floor and there was strangers, grievous strangers in her dining way pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the deprivation ? Norah did n't want to experience the reply but was surely she was going to find out.

The loss leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in response. She did n't want to support down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to mouth to your guests now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to back down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her right in the facial expression and she fell to the floor. Crying uncontrollably and nose bleeding, Norah was shocked. Adam was completely terrified and ran to the corner, crying all the spell.

While the slaughter escalated, Cara just sat there. Calm and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the unit panorama. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her whole family unit

While all this was going on, the early 6 figures just stood there. Overseeing the brutal treatment of this pathetic menage. The architectural plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me cunt. I 'm about to leave alone this room with your beautiful girl. If you want her back awake, I suggest you do n't make a motion. My friends will be staying here so unless you want a bullet through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and ragged her up and went towards the step. He stopped abruptly and turned towards cristal

'Little boy, look at your pathetic bitch of a dad and jade whore twat of a mother. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. Look forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the stairs


When they got up there, Cara could speak freely.

'This is the fucking well-nigh disturbed thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your vox down man, do you want them to make love your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you sure about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your chum terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me stratagem ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you sure enough you want to go through with this ? It 's your family line ...'

'My family ? You mean the Same family that 's treated me like poop for 17 years ? No Dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

Dodge just looked into her eyes. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... Evil ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, distinguish me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character growing ? Want to know how Cara knows Dodge ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

THIS IS YOUR STORY