Right guys. This is my kickoff story so hold me some actual feedback please. This narration does n't specifically involve any sex. It 's just a template. I want to do things differently here. I want to make love what you want me to do to the characters. Who you want to see violate, who you want killed ect ect. You dictate the next chapter. It 's that simple. leave some comments on what you would like to pass in part 2 and itll be up this clip following week.


Cara had had decent

She had had sufficiency of her overly protective mother always dictating to her what she can and ca n't do. She had had sufficiency of her obsessively fast-growing father and his unpredictable outbursts of wrath. And she had had enough of her disgustingly annoying little dogshit of a pal who never knew when enough was enough. Cara had had enough. It was clock time to get her fucking retaliation

Ever since Cara can commemorate, she 's always been a little bit messed up in the heading. Having the dirtiest thoughts, the macabre phantasy about what she wanted done to her and what she wanted done to others. She was the muckiest, craziest bitch around. No one knew this though. She put on a frontage of being genteel little shy introvert Cara, everyone believed the presence she put on. Now at 17, Cara decided it was time to let people see the tangible her

Monday evening
Cara pretended everything was rule. She sat at the dinner table and did what was expected of her. She ate her commons. She said please and thank you. She muttered the Godhead prayer along with them. She did what was expected.

'Cara, your awfully serenity tonight'her Father-God asked suspiciously

'Im just waiting for them dad'Cara replied

Her father gave her a jumble facial expression. 'Waiting for who darli ....

He never got to finish that conviction. That 's when Caras Night of revenge started.

The door flew opened and in came 7 hooded figures. All holding guns. They moved towards the terrorised family.

'What the fucking'screamed Caras father as he stood up to protect his house

'SIT THE piece of ass down feather'menaced one of the hooded figures, pointing his gun directly at the fathers head.

'Sit down or your wife gets a slug up her slit, you want that faggot ?'shouted another one of the figures

Caras beginner sat down. By this point Lil Adam had climed on to his mother and was crying uncontrollably. He had his typeface buried in his work force and his mother was trying to stay calm for his sake.

'What do you need ? Please. If its money that you want just take it. You can take anything. Please just dont hurt us'Caras mother begged

They laughed.

'Bitch if we wanted money we would of fleece a depository financial institution now would n't we. Nar it 's not money we want .'

He then went into a bag that one of the guy rope was holding and proceeded to pull out four blindfolds and 3 pieces of farseeing rope. Everyone by this point was terrified, even Caras father was shaking.

'What are those for ?'he half demanded

His motion did n't take a talk result. Instead, the leader of the group walked menacingly towards him and violently got a bobby pin of his neck opening and wrapped the blindfold round his face. Ted tried struggling but there was no use. The hooded roughneck then proceeded to tie his men behind his back with one of the pieces of the ropes and did the same with his legs. He then tossed Ted onto the floor where he could n't move. He was completely helpless.


Norah had never been so scared in all her life-time. As Adam clung on to her, she did n't ingest a hint what to do. Her husband was tied up on the story and there was stranger, unsafe alien in her dining way pointing a gun at her. Why were they here ? If they did n't want money what did the deprivation ? Norah did n't want to get laid the answer but was sure she was going to find out.

The loss leader walked up to her and looked her in the eye

'Hello beautiful'

'Fuck you'she screeched in reply. She did n't want to plunk for down to these people.

'Now that 's not a very nice way to talk to your invitee now is it ?'

Once again, determined not to back down, 'Fuck. You .'

He was n't having any of it. All of a sudden he punched her rightfulness in the face and she fell to the floor. Crying uncontrollably and nose bleeding, Norah was shocked. Adam was completely terrified and ran to the recess, crying all the patch.

While the butchery escalated, Cara just sat there. calmness and controlled. She was n't shocked or phased by the unhurt scene. She sat there expressionless. Mesmerised by the wreckage of her whole class unit

While all this was going on, the early 6 figures just stood there. Overseeing the brutal discourse of this pitiable family. The architectural plan was going so perfect.

'Now listen to me cunts. I 'm about to provide this room with your beautiful girl. If you want her back alive, I suggest you do n't move. My friends will be staying here so unless you want a hummer through your skulls, I suggest you stay seated'

No one moved.

He went over to cara and ragged her up and went towards the steps. He stopped abruptly and turned towards Adam

'Little boy, look at your pitiful twat of a dad and slut whore twat of a female parent. After I 'm done with this bitch I 'm coming down for you. wait forward to it'and with that he turned and dragged cara up the step


When they got up there, Cara could speak freely.

'This is the fucking near craziest thing EVER !'cara shouted.

'Keep your phonation down man, do you desire them to acknowledge your involved ? Now seriously Cara, are you trusted about this ? I mean, this is pretty fucked up. Your brothers terrified man'

'Are you backing out on me dodging ? You said you 'd be up for this ?'

'I am. I am, its just are you sure you want to go through with this ? It 's your family ...'

'My family ? You mean the same family that 's treated me like bullshit for 17 eld ? No Dodge, I want them fucked up. I want them ruined'

Dodge just looked into her eyes. What had made her like this ? Why was she so ... Evil ?

'Okay. Who first ?'



End of introduction. Like I said, no sex, however, enjoin me what you want happening ? Who 's first ? Want to see the Lil boy raped by 7 hooded figures ? Or what about the mum, forced incest maybe ?

Or what about character development ? Want to acknowledge how Cara knows dodge ? Who is Dodge ? Why is Cara so messed up ?

THIS IS YOUR STORY